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Originally posted by: Jayeeta_06
Awesome poem...brilliantly portrayed...loved it...thank u 4 pm...
Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun
I received your pm, read it, loved it so much and forgot to reply. 😕 I'm really sorry for that.this poem is such a treat to read! the last line made me crack up.😆 great work!
Originally posted by: Viswasruti
Started the poem with nature's beauty reflected on your heart , shared feelings in a splendid manner, later slowly sailed through the emotions to sink later, revealed that with that highly applaudable lines--
Taking a flight
To realize I had
No Wings.
An oxymoron-- a lovely day to die !!! you expressed in a classic way some of the emotional moments of life, in which, a tender heart feels to slip into a faded night , but with a tongue in cheek, you said I could die later ! Taken the reader up to the edge of a mountain with that fear of a fatal fall , gleefully shown us the splendid sunset to elevate the mood ! Wonderful poem Radhika ! 🤗
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