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Posted: 6 years ago
#11
I received your pm, read it, loved it so much and forgot to reply. ๐Ÿ˜• I'm really sorry for that.
this poem is such a treat to read! the last line made me crack up.๐Ÿ˜† great work!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Started the poem with nature's beauty reflected on your heart , shared feelings in a splendid manner, later slowly sailed through the emotions to sink later, revealed that with that highly applaudable lines--

Taking a flight

To realize I had

No Wings.

An oxymoron-- a lovely day to die !!! you expressed in a classic way some of the emotional moments of life, in which, a tender heart feels to slip into a faded night , but with a tongue in cheek, you said I could die later ! Taken the reader up to the edge of a mountain with that fear of a fatal fall , gleefully shown us the splendid sunset to elevate the mood ! Wonderful poem Radhika ! ๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 6 years ago
#13
Beautifully written๐Ÿ‘
Loved ittt๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shrinika13

I love the descriptions that you have given in this <3

What I love about your works is the brevity!
Way to go and hope to read more stuff from you! <3


Thank you so much Shre di! I'm glad you liked it! <3
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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: 2filmy

what a beautiful poem
I just love it


Thank you so much! :)
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Posted: 6 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Ranbirrocks


You are so talented Pro ๐Ÿ‘โญ๏ธ

@bold lines are so good

@red- I haven't seen such practicality in a romantic poem ๐Ÿ˜†

Its a wonderful attempt. Very modern, practical and romantic.



Thanks Ritzidi! I'm so happy that you liked it! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: misanthropist.

So beautiful, dreamy and pragmatic at same time:) Well done!


Is someone in the L-world๐Ÿ˜‰


Thank you so much Sansie di!

Er, maybe...๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 6 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: .Archangel.

Again, a very romantic dreamy creation. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

You're killing it Choti. โค๏ธ


Thank you so much Shanayadi! <3
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Wonderful poem Proteeti๐Ÿ˜Š


Thank you Noniedi! <3
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: LOVE.GOLD

Beautiful Radhika ๐Ÿ˜Š


Thank you Goldiedi! <3 <3
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