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I received your pm, read it, loved it so much and forgot to reply. 😕 I'm really sorry for that.
this poem is such a treat to read! the last line made me crack up.😆 great work!
Started the poem with nature's beauty reflected on your heart , shared feelings in a splendid manner, later slowly sailed through the emotions to sink later, revealed that with that highly applaudable lines--
Taking a flight
To realize I had
No Wings.
An oxymoron-- a lovely day to die !!! you expressed in a classic way some of the emotional moments of life, in which, a tender heart feels to slip into a faded night , but with a tongue in cheek, you said I could die later ! Taken the reader up to the edge of a mountain with that fear of a fatal fall , gleefully shown us the splendid sunset to elevate the mood ! Wonderful poem Radhika ! 🤗
Originally posted by: Shrinika13
I love the descriptions that you have given in this <3
What I love about your works is the brevity!Way to go and hope to read more stuff from you! <3
Originally posted by: Ranbirrocks
You are so talented Pro 👏⭐️@bold lines are so good@red- I haven't seen such practicality in a romantic poem 😆Its a wonderful attempt. Very modern, practical and romantic.
Originally posted by: misanthropist.
So beautiful, dreamy and pragmatic at same time:) Well done!
Is someone in the L-world😉
Originally posted by: .Archangel.
Again, a very romantic dreamy creation. 😳
You're killing it Choti. ❤️
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