Saviour -PreeRan SS PART 1&2 updated

She was standing in rain but what made her eyes moist was the drops of tears from her eyes.

She always had been the elder of her sister shristi and had been her comforter protector and everything she cud be.She was strong for er sister but who knew how weak she was fr herself.

Preeta had taken multiple roles in life as she grew up but no one knew that this strong pillar sometimes needed support.

The day Deepak's family broke the engagement was a huge humiliation which she kept in her heart.

Now again


prithvi being a culprit and a bad guy her Alliance was broken twice and so was her self esteem.

The taunts of people were killing her inside...

She saw a dark shadow coming near her which illuminated as he came closer ...it was Karan ...

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PART 1&2 on PAGE 1Edited by Ashi345678 - 6 years ago

Why so short? :( please continue soon

Amazing start! Please continue soon :)

PART 2

karan was looking for her and here she was in the rain.what was going on in her mind.She wz really hurt and karan cud sense it.

He wantd to take way all her pain n to give her relief.

"Rahat si de du tujhe dil kahe
adat si bana lu tujhe dil kahe "

Karan saw her crying and before he cud say anything she broke down seeing him.

She was crying like a kid.it was too much for her to bear.

Preeta sat on her knees and kept weeping.

Karan wanted to cry an ocean wit her.His heart was crying to see her in such

state.

He sat down and took her head in his hands.
Preeta didn't look up.
She rested her head on his shoulder n kept weeping.
Karan didnt move he caressed her hair.Preeta felt his warmth n she somehow felt someone is there wit her n she's not lonely.

Realising their closeness preeta got up n said "why don't u go away from here?"

Karan held her hand n asked her to be quiet thru his eyes.

He understood every inch of pain this girl went thru.

He knew preeta needed to lighten her burden.she needed to be
happy n nothing else.
He wanted to see her happy n no one can dare to hurt her again.
Karan promised it to himself.
He had never thot that Preeta 's pain will affect her so much.
Karan Luthra felt weak for the first time in his life...


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It was too good. But why are you writing in very short parts? Please make long one.

 karan luthra felt weak for the first time in his life Loved this line Edited by obsessedbyKB - 6 years ago

Loved it :)

its very nice n interesting loved it

Very beautiful update on preeran