Originally posted by: Anraysha
Once again Neha you have arrived with a Blast,A Resplendent, Beautiful, Romantic, Sensuous, Lovely, Totally Divine ,Sacred Love of Advay and Chandni update❤️,No words,seriously All the Words may fall short to Appreciate your Writing ⭐️👏
YOU are tremendously Genius Yasr,eagerly waiting for your next updates,Your pics and descriptions of Dev/Advay -Chandni Love making ,Sexual moments are sooo Romantic, Erotic but not vulgar at all,you keep try to write your updates such a Decent, yet Romantic, Sensuous way that it is always absolute pleasant, delight to read your updates.😳Thanks a million for your always encouraging, very honest appreciation. You always make me feel good at heart so naturally it's my duty to give you gals my best.This FF starts after they both have accepted their marriage. Lovemaking between married couple is meant to be divine and sacred. With all the love between couples, it's done to please completely, show all the care of the world... that's when it's beautiful. Sensuality is inherent part of that beauty.Have you ever pondered, nature also keeps it very erotic yet totally divine. There's no vulgarity because it's done internally in the body... Kind of the actual being behind the curtains... Internal fertilization.😳I totally believe things are far more sensuous in your own imaginations. So why restrict your imaginations with my limiting writing capability... go n njoy your own sweet GMs. Hints are given by me. 😉I hope you enjoy the way the story is progressing... Advay having to battle external enemies and internal demons both. But he not being alone in the battle.
the 1st scene is totally blissful
u have described their Union so majestically
the pics depict them so well
we totally get the feel of their love making
but it's so ethereal aesthetic beautiful
each gave to the other fully without any inhibitions
they were totally lost in their own world
their union was also spiritual and soulful
each wanted to make the other happier
their bond us really divine and on a different level
proper true soul mates understand each other so well
the night was a sweet witness to their union
they are each others strength and both were lost in each other completely
u r so right she is a flame he is the sun
yes it really gives us the feel of the actual love making
I could really feel their emotions within me
they are 2 bodies but 1 heart mind and soul
so they were playing this game together
so both are winning together and none losing
I believe in rebirth though
but yes we never know but in the next birth we will be born as a human so we aren't sure if we will get the same partners as in this birth
so better to fully experience our love with our soul mates in this birth itself
love making is a way to express your love for your soul mate but there are so many other ways too
Dev does exactly that he expresses his love in all ways that he can and same with Chandni too
they don't need to speak to each other to understand each other's minds
their connection helps them talk to their souls
Originally posted by: saxena_hgt
Finally i m here...well 1st of all thank u for satisfying that age old curiosity that what comes after happily everafter.. your story tells us d end is just a beginning of another journey.. with equal ups & downs if not more.. what i m loving most is how well u r maintaining characteristics for every character according to end of d serial but giving your own twists going forward.. bonding between advay & veer, veer & chandani is adorable..
Two points which i find extraordinary r- 1st your knowledge about hindu religion.. my god d way u write chandani's sanskrit sessions is commendable.. latest about Maa Lakshmi.. kudos to u.. 2nd is advay & chandani's intimate scenes, d analogy u have used here is quite unique.. there is alwayz passion & intensity but never vulgarity..I liked d way how u r handling chandani's fear issue.. coz i agree its a long & slow process, which will take its due course.. how dev is supporting his chandu, is how one should support their partner..I m looking forward to see how & when dev takes his revenge from rest of d culprits & what miku is going to do with his future.. excellent story & u r an exceptional writer..best wishes.. cheers..Thanks a lot for your time to comment, Prachi. Especially, when life must be keeping you busy with the new privilege of life, your pari.Life is a journey of the soul. When marriage happens, you mate with another soul hence he becomes your soulmate. The journey then takes form of discovering each other and finding love somewhere on the path. The best thing about marriage is never being able to completely understand your partner and experiencing the happiness in discovering something new everyday.So naturally, DevNi marriage is also their journey which , as you rightly mentioned, I am taking further with Ups and downs.ADNI story could have very much been written differently. It would be equally good that way as well. My intention in writing it with exact character continuity and then slow transition or peeling of layers is to keep the show alive in our hearts... as if 6th October was not the last episode.I am so happy that you appreciated the Maata Laxmi part. I am very much cognizant of the limits of my knowledge about Hindu religion, yet I believe truly in certain principles. This writing about Mata Laxmi being one of them. I would be very much happy if readers started thinking of her in a similar manner.Vulgar is a difficult term to express. There is very thin line between what's vulgar and what's not. It changes from individual to individual. Any form of art can be perceived as vulgar by one and natural by another.But yes! I do remain loyal to myself and honest with the way I perceive a certain things and like to write about them. I see lovemaking with all elements in nature in innumerable ways. I am hugely sensual.😉 Here , I just happened to pick one.Chandni's fear issue I have made into a conflict with one's own demons. This I believe is the most challenging part to conquer. So let's see how it moves ahead in this story.Your further tracks awaited, as picked from the story , I promise will be interesting enough. Do keep reading and whenever time permits commenting.
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