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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: T.Peru

Nice prologue & Ch

Hope Maan find his peace 
Also Geet over come her past 
Thanks for PM 
Update soon 


Thanks dear..😳😳😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Congrats for the new story dear...
Nice prologue...
Waiting for next update...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Welcome to the forum as a writer dear !!❀️
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Posted: 6 years ago
Congrats on your first FF
Nice introduction.
Geet is a famous singer and achieved her success through her determination and hardwork. She has a backstory too. On other hand Maan is a business man living his life lavishly but has a void in his life.
Fab character sketch 
Looking forward to the story
Thanks for the pm !
:))
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: trishtej




Thanks to u darling for ur supoort..
so nice poem.πŸ‘.will put in next part in suitable context..love u darling .☺️.hope u will do continue support to me..

love u darling and thanks for motivating me..😳

Pleasure is all mine.. Got a lot of motivation from my dearies so would love to contribute as well!

aww you find that nice, makes me glad...that would be an honor but be careful, don't ruin your flow just because of my abrupt thoughts hehe!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†

Love you too, do continue soon! πŸ˜³
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Iptida

Pleasure is all mine.. Got a lot of motivation from my dearies so would love to contribute as well!

aww you find that nice, makes me glad...that would be an honor but be careful, don't ruin your flow just because of my abrupt thoughts hehe!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†

Love you too, do continue soon! πŸ˜³

Omgg meri devil didu poems bhi likhthi hain πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ
By the way very sweet poem di .. Mere liye bhi ek likho na πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 6 years ago
hello...can we expect an update today?
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Posted: 6 years ago
Congratulations on your new story 

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Posted: 6 years ago
Fantastic Start 

Maan at KC and Geet she is a singer now that is great 
he listens now to music only at the discos when he is out with friends or with his girlfriends
while Geet's mother is happy that her shy girl has become strong and determined to pursue
her career 
Maan's jaan is his Daadima thats awesome 
sorry for been late in replying to your pm
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Posted: 6 years ago
Character Sketch 

Its interesting
Geet a singer and she is famous too yet she is simple while Maan the heir of Khurana empire and a business tycoon 
Samayara maybe his girlfriend but she is obsessed with him 
looking forward to this story