...FOREVER..updatet part 10 pn 53

Posted: 6 years ago

FOREVER...

                               Hello friends. I am a new writer here.Starting a new story..

                                                               FOREVER..

                                                        Hope You will like it ..

                                                        Do comment if u like. 



                  


                                                       my heart beats for you

                                      my eyes burn for you,

                                      its been ages ..

                                      i am waiting for you..

                                     cz i am forever in love with you... 


Mom..please..iam getting late..i will have it in evening..She said in go and zoomed like wind .

Her mom wondered if she is same girl who was used be so shy before? But now she is strong,determined and successful.Somewhere Anju was happy for her daughter but she feared somewhere that she might be hurting herself admist of all her try to be a normal...


RM studio..Mumbai..10 am..

She parked her car in car parking of studio.guards saluted her as she walked in.It was her one of the favorite song today she was recording.

Hey Geet..before time..i am impressed girl..such dedication ..no doubt u r ruling the billion of hearts now a days.. Mr.Kapoor.

Geet just smiles and wished him good morning.

after a while Mr.Salim came and she start her recording..


"Aaj ye sama kuch keh raha..

gun guna raha teri meri pyar ki dastan...

hooo..hooo"


Such a sweet voice and innocent personality..all were stunned with the perfection of the lady standing before them ..lost in her song..




KC...Mumbai...at 11 am


Take all the blueprints required.I want all to be perfect.and yes its KC..Its reputation is all about its perfection..2 more hrs for u guys otherwise get ready for your new jobs..

 He roared in anger and dismissed all..


His cell beeped and he saw his dadi's message..He closed his eyes for a second and thought how his dadi manage to remember his all things..Yes ,he is her favorite grandchild and she was his jaan.


Mr.Maan Singh Khurana had all things any successful and billionaire could have.Money,girlfriends,status and fame.But his restlessness for unknown things was making him insane.



His all day was busy and again he was loosing himself in work but before that he checked his cell just to found 12 missed calls from dadi. he sighed..He took his coat and marched towards the parking.Driver and his bodyguards followed him.Silently he sat in his car.


Sanjay turn on the radio...Maan said looking lost somewhere.

sanjay his driver looked him  in utter shock.His boss was not definitely in his own.he never saw him listening songs or attending any entertainment programs.But today..??


Ajnabi rahoo me chale hum sathiya tera deedar karte karte..

ratse pata nahi fir bhi jane hum aitbar karte..

Dil dhadkate hue in kafilo me labz hum dhunde..

Tere nazaro me apna ashiyan bunte bunte..


The melody filled in air and he felt sudden smoothness in his heart.He wondered..

Probably its been 4-5 years he have listen any songs except disco ones with his so called friends and Gfs..


Ye koi naya song hai sanjay? 

ha sahabji...Naya hai..bahot hi pyara gaya hai is singer ne.

Hmm..He replied monotonously.


And fleet of tires infront of the huge gates of mansion made him realize its time to meet his jaan..his dadi..



            ok guys..This is the first part of forever..

                       i hope u ll like it.

                  sorry for gramatical mstake.

                  If u want pm..add me "trishtej"

                                 Next-Part 2


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                              Part 2

                                            Part 3

                                            Part 4

                                            Part 5

                                            Part 6

                                             part 7


                                              part 8


                                                     Teaser

                                    Part 9

                                                   Part 10 Pn 53

Edited by minelove24 - 5 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
congrats on the SS! lovely start! well written! so Geet is a successful singer! Maan is a billionaire and has everything n seems lonely! he listens 2 a Geet's song and is impressed! do continue! hope u will not leave this incomplete! pls post cs! was this the prologue? do pm me! thanks 
Posted: 6 years ago
Welcome trisha as a writer here..❤️
Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome dear and congrats for new ff .. Hope you update soon 😃
Posted: 6 years ago
character sketch 

Maan Khurana 26 yrs 
rich,famous arrogant business tycoon.Heir of khurana empire which is alos royal family of Jaipur .His style make girls ga ga over him but complete famaily person at Khurana mention.Loves his Dadi and baby sis Annie.In search of Peace of his heart which seems to be lost  somewhere in middle of responsibilities.His true colours are yet to be unfold.


Geet Sharma 24 yrs 

She is famous singer.she is an painter too but her singing is overshining it.Have money ,status and fame but Simple girl of her mamma.She have one scar given by her life but she is overcoming it and trying to be her bubbly self.

Anju sharma

Geet's mother.very determined and sorted person.

Savitri Khurana

She is gentle and cool dadi of maan.Loves Annie and maan.she have that royal instinct with her.Very poerful lady in the business sector though she is retired now.


Samayara Malhotra 26 yrs 

Maan's childhood friend.Loves maan but his money more.She is daughter of famous businessman Mr.Sharad Malhotra.Maan is now her obsession .



further characters will be mingled soon..
Posted: 6 years ago
fab cs! welcome 2 this forum as a writer! update soon 
Posted: 6 years ago
Cingrats on d new story..
Nice start n cs..
Continue n do pm me..
Posted: 6 years ago
Lovely start trisha
Maan as usual MSK and geet a sweet girl with a good musical voice
ans Maan heard the song and liked that too.. Let's see how they meet
update the next part soon
Posted: 6 years ago
Congrats trisha for ur 1st story
Great start 😃
Geet being a successful singer and maan as usual in his typical MSK avatar we love the most.
He listen her song and is instantly calmed hearing the soft voice.
Have many questions but i guess have to wait for further updates for the answers.
Posted: 6 years ago
thanks 4 the pm! read and commented already! eagerly awaiting update

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