Originally posted by: Sana2017
Mayu,
I agree with others we so need some sensitive screenplay with scenes such as the one you wrote, but i am managing my expectations.
As far as i understand Advay thinks she already knows what actually happened to his parents, he doesn't believe her version of events that she doesn't know what happened, therefore does not need to tell her again. This tashan is all part of her deceitful act .
Nani does believe Chandni so her supporting Chandni's behaviour when she knows what Advay is thinking about Chandni, makes me wonder what Nani is thinking? She is just make the MU between Advay and Chandni worse in my opinion.
I even find Advay-Adi dynamic could be written with a lot more subtlety then it is, i am incredibly close to my nephews and the most precious moments with them is not about buying them toys but spending time together playing and comforting each other. When i have been really down, a cuddle from my nephews has given me so much comfort. Children are perceptive and capable of showing empathy too - not just make loud aggressive demands.
Yesterday Adi scene i would like to have seen something like:
Pooja tell Adi to go get Advay for dinner. Adi goes to Advay's room, sees that Advay is sitting in a pensive mood staring into space. Adi goes and climbs into Advay's lap, cuddles into him. Mentions that he misses Chandni Mami. Advay listens, emotions playout in Advay's eyes and take the comfort offered from Adi. After a warm hug, Advay and Adi come out to the dinner.
But hey ho - this is an indian daily soap!
Sana...
It's true.. there is no clarity regarding how much chandini knows about the tragedy. She never mentioned about it. We know she is right now happy to find Dev and just want to get him. But does she feel guilty or just thinks it's a MU.. I wish CVS clear this soon.
@ blue... What are they doing here. I mean thinks that .. then all chandini is doing hurting him more by showing on empathy what so ever. I case of my imagination I didn't give a thought to this particular bit. Oh yeah may be subconsciously even I assumed advay knows that why he wanted to see some regret in her.. which in my imagination chandini lacked and that hurt him even more.
@green.. true again. In the show there is no clarity at all. I wish they give us something. In my imagination yup I missed it. May be next time I include advay and Nani talk to see why she didn't say anything to chandini. Advay needs to know that chandini is trying to find answers.
@ orange.. I understand that dear. Reading about the bond you share with your nephews reminded me of my own nephew. Oh yeah I tell you.. his hugs are the best hugs I got. I once cried laying my head in his lap just like that he was hardly 4 but he patted my head and wiped my tears..emm... Thank you for making my remember that after so long. Emotional.. emotional..🤗
And finally let's talk about the scene you wrote...
It's wonderful.. I loved it.. it's so natural and so effective and makes so much more sense could imagine the scene .. you know.. it would have been beautiful to watch on screen.wht didn't they think of that... 😡
I never came across any one of OS.. in case that's bcoz you don't write.. you better start writing. Your understanding of characters and plot is really good.And the above scene is a best example for your creative thinking. 👏
Incase you are already writing.. but I missed. Please send me the link. I would love to read.😳
And I hope you don't mind if I take an inspiration from your scene. After reading your bit I got a scene in my mind ...😳
So finally.. sorry for the late reply dear. I wanted to do this uninterrupted.😊
Thank you...
Edited by mayukatta - 7 years ago
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