MG FF - HOW TO NAME IT? - UPDATED PART 11 & 12 PG 83 Dt. 23rd August. - Page 45

geet being teased by her colleague,,

hopw maans brother doesnot fall in trouble

cont.soon

thank for pm

Ajay lost check and again went to Rita whom can do anything to become Maan's wife 

Ajay using hr weakness fr his favor he knows very well his bro never ever fall fr that rita 

Maan Geet duno ka ek hi hal subah lazy ho gaye or udhte he  they think to call each other

Maan send hr hi massage rahul came fr meeting amd hehave no mood of meeting he only their to inquiry about Geet and the way rahul fr Geet address Maan lose his patient's and beat him Ajay and Louis have to stop him 

Maan try to divert Ajay frm just happened he gave him lecture on office work but then even Ajay asked him about girl which Maan said personal question at home

Lovely story loved it..

Will be waiting for your update.

This update is showing charecter of Ajay and warning bell is lingering on 2 brothers relationship , I think Riya and Ajay were Dating and he must have given cheque to ria in Nasha by thinking it is money so why he has to give Ria money? My guess is that Ria must be pregnant by Ajay's Child Ajay has ditched her for Meghana and may have told her take this money and don't show me your face again , to because of all this happening Riya is remaining  lost all the time, and has gone under depression due to Ajay's betrayal. 

Here Meghna Is using Ajay for his money and other friends too doing g same, Vishal being child hood friend give right advice but pyaar Mae pagal Panchi raah bhatak Gaya hai aur Ek ladki ke liye Apne Bhai kio bhi dhokha deneko taiyar Hua hai.

If Vishal is his true friend he should inform Maan about Ajay doing wrong thing otherwise this gang will destroy Ajay and Maan both people's life 

their relation will strend and we will see fight between brothers.Here Ajaya's charecter is showing very mean.

He is playing double game one side convince mind he is changed and has come to join office where as he came for blank cheque this point doesn't go in mind as Maan like perfect business peiplp will never sigh on blank cheque they know consequences so here I find one small blooper.on the whole update was very good 

Don't delay in update at least I will be happy if u will update daily,

N maan bussiness what a combination  read all chap in one go in first chap 3 guy behind geet I thought they r normal but after reading just my lower jaw fell down n so super

Sweet with Maan and geet..

but troubles..

and twist and turns...

well written update 👍🏼

Chapter 7

Maaneet both missing each other but hesitating to call each other.This Meghna and her brother trapping Ajay and Ajay behaving like a fool and spoilt brat, Ajay lost the blank check signed by Maan and even not listening Vishal who is his true friend, Vishal should talk to Maan and alerted him. Ria is also very disturbed and Geet is trying to comfort her , finally after so much of hesitation Maan send message to Geet, loved it

Nice story yaar

Be continue