Originally posted by idunno
Wow such a nice update glue to screen till I finish reading in one go
This update is showing charecter of Ajay and warning bell is lingering on 2 brothers relationship , I think Riya and Ajay were Dating and he must have given cheque to ria in Nasha by thinking it is money so why he has to give Ria money? My guess is that Ria must be pregnant by Ajay's Child Ajay has ditched her for Meghana and may have told her take this money and don't show me your face again , to because of all this happening Riya is remaining lost all the time, and has gone under depression due to Ajay's betrayal.
Here Meghna Is using Ajay for his money and other friends too doing g same, Vishal being child hood friend give right advice but pyaar Mae pagal Panchi raah bhatak Gaya hai aur Ek ladki ke liye Apne Bhai kio bhi dhokha deneko taiyar Hua hai.
If Vishal is his true friend he should inform Maan about Ajay doing wrong thing otherwise this gang will destroy Ajay and Maan both people's life
their relation will strend and we will see fight between brothers.Here Ajaya's charecter is showing very mean.
He is playing double game one side convince mind he is changed and has come to join office where as he came for blank cheque this point doesn't go in mind as Maan like perfect business peiplp will never sigh on blank cheque they know consequences so here I find one small blooper.on the whole update was very good
Don't delay in update at least I will be happy if u will update daily,
Hi...
Really really loved your long long comments..with your vision about upcoming parts...really interesting. π. Lets see how the story unfolds...but yes...be prepared for lot of twists.π
Yes, before being a tough business man, Maan is also a human being and there are times when you tent to make errors or mistakes because of the external forces not because of your personal carelessness...you will come to know about it as and when the story unfolds.
I really really wish to give daily updates...but I am managing with it inbetween my busy schedule with my family and kids...but I am trying my best π