Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

MG FF - HOW TO NAME IT? - UPDATED PART 11 & 12 PG 83 Dt. 23rd August. - Page 47

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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: fariya20

Me first
🥳

Awesome update

Maan ka Bhai ek number ka jerk hai aur ghada bhi

Ladki k liye Bhai ko dhoka dena 😡 😡

And more over us say stupid yeh maan hai usko sign karney say pehley

Dekhana tha k kis par sign Kar Raha hai

It a bara empair Chala Raha

Geetika mein bhi bewaqaf ko tarha blank paper pa sign Kiya aur yeh blank check

Yeh ria stupid she became insane

Cheating her boss just because she thought she love him

Pyar paney k liye pyar ko hi dhoka dena

Ayr sab say bekabar humrey maaneet

Ek dosrey ko message message khel rahey

Pyar logo ko andha banadey ta hai

Example is there

Waiting for next

Sorry late hogai

Busy thi thoda sa 😕



Dher se aaye ...dhrust aaye 😳...no probs dear...Your comments are really adorable 🤗

Yeah..unlike Geetika, here, Maan has not made any mistake or carelessness...its just that something has managed to cross his line and he has still not noticed it and dont worry..he will notice it soon.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: metromasti

awesome updates . maaneet missing each other but none was ready to call . atlast maan sent msg to geet . so ajay's friends are behind his money but that fool can't understand it , his friend vishal tried to knock some sense but no use . he managed a blank cheque through maan's secretary rita who herself is a b**** & dreaming to marry maan but ajay lost that cheque . due to some rahul ajay came to know maan was with one girl at party . other side geet read maan's msg & blushed , janet teased her .

waiting for next



Thanks a lot dear...really love to read your comments 🤗

Lots of twists and turns coming up in the story.. Wait and watch..

Will update in few days...right now concentrating in updating ORP.. which is in progress.😳


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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: indiegirl

Loved both the updates but feeling little jittery due to Ajay and Rita... now Rahul too, hope Maan can get on top of things and figure out what is going on... makes me nervous to see these negative people like Ajay's friends too... loved Maan and Geets cute date and their rendezvous together...

Thnx



Thanks a lot dearie 😊
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: karamjeet

Mind-blowing update s...
Maan brother is idiot...
hope he didn't waste Maan hard earned money on his friends...
Thank God check is lost from him...
but he is blind in his love...
hopefully Maan found out about blank check soon ...
he is too bind in love for his little brother...
Maaneet part is nice...
hopefully that Ria also told Geet something...
looking forward for next part...

Continue soon...



Thanks a lot for your lovely dovely comments dear 😃
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: vrinda22

Ajay..how can he cheat his bro

N Rita..she is a cheap women
She is day dreaming
Rahul saw Maneet together
Maan couldn't hear his cheap thought n ended up punching him
Ajay n Louis came to stop the fight
Ajay came to know maan likes a girl
Geet blushing seeing gm msg
Her friend is so cute
Superb parts
Very long
Worth enough of the wait to read



Thanks a lot dear

Ajay is being cheated as he is blind folded with black magic of Meghna and gang...and this inturn is resulting him in cheating his brother...he is not doing it intentionally, but he has taken a wrong path to prove himself.
Really love reading your comments dear 🤗

Thanks a lot 😳
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Posted: 5 years ago
will wait for Part 9 of How to Name It! 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Originally posted by: khwaishfan

will wait for Part 9 of How to Name It! 



WORK IN PROGRESS...

BEFORE THAT...I NEED TO POST ORP. STRUGLING WITH PART 15 FOR THE STORY TO FALL IN PLACE 🤢
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Posted: 5 years ago
thanks Lakshmi!!! will then have to wait! 
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Posted: 5 years ago
Wonderful updates. 
Please update more parts soon.
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Posted: 5 years ago
Awesome superb nice fabulous update dear
Thanks for pm
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