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Posted: 7 years ago
Arjun could not help but savour the beauty..of the face.. but covered up by asking Pari to eat fast as he has to learn the Rig Vedic hymns from Veda Vyasa's desciples..
Pari is reluctant..He pleaded with Arjun..' Pitamah..not today..I like the rainy day.. This is not for chanting hymns..
Arjun raised his eyebrows. He is seeing his replica in Pari.. He inherited all his nature worship..

Pari said with a cute expression.." In this weather I would like to play Veena,I would like to dance ..I would like to recite poetry..and

Bheem and Nakul lifted him above and said " continue.."

Pari looked at Arjun with a mischevous smile..and confessed.." I would like to hear the story...

Subhadra and Uttara tried to pinch his cheek but Bheem lifted him above...

Arjun shrugged his shoulders and side glanced his fire born who is teasing him with her eyes.." Like Arjun like Pari...

Bheem promised that he will see to it that Pari's every wish will be fulfilled.He scolded Arjun." Why are you trying to control him? Let him listen how I handled the foolish Kings who tried to protest against Panchali choosing you in the Swaysmvar. The punch I gave Salya ..he must not have forgotten..till his end...

Arjun folded his hands feigning to be afraid much to the amusement of Pari..


Pari brought his Veena to play before Kunti... So he ran to make arrangements to play Veena along with his Pitamah.. Arjun..

Arjun's wives went to the place to look after the arrangements..with Bheem and Nakul.. Arya took promise from Panchali that she will come over after instructing the cooks ..for lunch.

Panchali went to her hermitage that she shares with Arya.. Her hair is wet and she wanted to dry it up before going to hear Pari 's Veena vadan.

She loosened her hair and found the rain get intensified.. Next moment she found Arjun half drenched...sprinkling the water drops on her face.

Why did you come here ? Pari must be waiting for you.. See you drenched yourself.. Panchali tried to move ...so that she can bring the shawl to dry up his hair. Arjun took her Pallu and wiped his hair..

Panchali's face flushed..in red.. He whispered in her ear." I came to ask if you slept well or not after hearing the story...

She bit her lip and said.. Ofcourse I had sound sleep..

Arjun kissed the corners of her eyes and said" But these lotus eyes are reddish at the corners..due to lack of sleep or ...

Yajnaseni blushed and pushed him away..


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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update, awesome. The way story is moving is too good.
Please post soon... thanks so much for posting such quick updates...


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Posted: 7 years ago
Wowww dii sooo sweettt!!! btw,I badly wanted some sweet cute ArDi moment like this... So awsome... Please update soon... Always waiting for ur update😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
If possible, could you please post multiple updates today and tomorrow.
Thank you.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: paartha

If possible, could you please post multiple updates today and tomorrow.

Thank you.

I can understand ur excitement bhai cause i m waiting for the updates too...😊
Wow di... Both the updates r so sweet full of family getogether n happy moments... I luv pari in here... He truly is arjun's replica and what pragati said that was more than a slip if tongue... That was the reality...

Eagerly waiting for next awedome pieces...😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi Divu...Yes, eagerly awaiting😊
Hopefully, Weekend bonanza for us with multiple updates and lengthy ones... Really the story is gripping and I can't wait to read...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Di..please update soon...we all are waiting for it...please please😕
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Posted: 7 years ago
No update today!!!!😭😭🥺
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Posted: 7 years ago
Panchali tied up her hair in top knot and said,.You go first. Pari is waiting for you..I will come later.

Arjun quipped..you are too heartless my queen.. I am concerned about you and came here daring the taunts of my wives..but your excellence avoid me and try to show the door to me..not fair.

Panchali threw the shall on to his shoulders and retorted." Let me remind you..this is hermitage..not our private chamber...any time your wives may come in search of you...Arjun...I would have been impressed if I came across such concern from you in the early days of our marriage..

Arjun smiled at her and admitted.." True..I regret not being there for you in those crucial moments of our life.. I can't rewrite the past but I can compensate the loss..seriously...I would prove it if you want.

Arjun stepped forward and Panchali moved backward . She looked at him and said as if telling herself"

The narration rekindled the wound that was there still under the layers of my heart. How innocent that bride is ,to think that the significance of her birth is fulfilled finally..how intense her dedication is to that person who emerged suddenly before her,met the challenge and won her... Arjun.. I feel she is someone else..not me.. I empathise with her..for the loss of her dream..Panchali stopped..her voice shivered..

Arjun stared at her ..He could understand her pain.but right now he can not think of a remedy.. Mere words may not effect as always.. The beautiful moment that brought them together in Suka's words ruptured her wound...

He turned back and walked out... He needs to be with himself all alone to ponder over ...

But he was dragged towards the place where Pari is ready with his Veena..by who else? Pari himself. Ofcourse he needs his Pitamah to judge his skills..

Ulupi approached him and said in a low voice.. Don't you think music will soothen ruptured hearts..and bring solace! It will work wonders.

Arjun is surprised yet again ..his naga princess proved her magical skills..

Before he could say anything.. Chitra came with Alli and suspiciously taunted.." What is going on? Ulupi ? Don't try to prove your skills again.. Ofcourse the weather is enchanting..I agree..

Ulupi patted Chitra on her cheek and assured.. Don't worry.. I promise I may use my power..but only with your permission..no abduction without your approval.

Alli laughed on seeing Arjun's helpless expression.. She told Chitra with a smile.. Don't worry.. We all are past that phase.. We are now having him before us.all for ourselves..

Arya who went to fetch Panchali came back alone.. She said.." Panchali could not come.. She is suffering from headache..

Pari is disappointed ...he is in a very good mood to sing and play Veena but his Jyesht Mata is not obliging.. Pragati could not bear to see his disappointed face.. She went to her mother and Arjun knew..his fireborn will never let her daughter down..

Panchali came with Pragati..holding her hand. Bheem anxiously enquired her of her health while Sahadev got ready with his medicine.

Panchali felt embarrassed. Unnecessarily she is drawing attention.. She declared firmly" I am fine now. Just got a little pain because of the weather..now I am alright..

Arjun sighed with relief. It is not good for her to be alone and brooding over the past..

Pari started his Veena with a song in his favourite raag maalkhos ..hindol as it is also called. The rain that is showering in rythym complemented his Veena and his song. He inherited Arjun's voice ..

Arjun felt immensely happy...his Abhi's son is carrying on his legacy..not only his valour but also his other skills..

Every one enjoyed Pari's presentation..of the song..

Kunti and Gandhari praised him in one voice..

But Pari has other plans.. He wants his grandfather to sing while he play Veena accompanying his song. Rekha who is a musician could not control her excitement.. It has been ages since we heard you sing..please.. for all of us.. ..she requested..

Panchali who sat in the last line adjusted herself relaxingly to hear him sing.. Yes she hurt him..but it is not intentional...he knew that..

Bheem and Nakul pushed Arjun to Pari and announced..we promised Pari that we will make him fulfill his every wish..you have to sing..

Arjun could not escape.. He looked at Pari who is charged up to follow his song on Veena.

Next moment Arjun's magnificently melodious voice broke into a song..

The song is a description of seasons..in different ragas..Rag Sindhu Bhairavi ,Yaman Kalyani,Brindavani, ...Vasantha...

Everyone is spell bound on listening to that captivating song.. The meaning..tugged the hearts which goes thus..

The seasons are changing like colours.

The beloved is standing alone waiting for her love to return to her
She waited in spring season while the flowers bloomed in different colours..

She waited in the rain..drenching herself under the showers.
She also waited for him in Sarat season..in the moon lit nights..

She waited for him in chilled winter mornings under the cover of the fog..

She felt desparate..he did not come.. She felt frustrated,tears rolled down her cheeks
Did he forget his love for her? She wondered..

Then came the day of union.. He came back
To be with her always..forever..he confessed his love

That there is no life for him beyond his love
He could not survive without her love
Past is his blemish but present is his celebration...

He knelt down before her..pleading for her forgiveness..

As the song came to an end every one has moisture in their eyes..There is standing ovation for the celebration of love..

Arjun looked at Panchali who stood with moisture in her eyes..he is waiting..for her to say

I love you Arjun..as ever for ever..


To be continued










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Posted: 7 years ago
Arjun walked out ...still the drizzle is there. He ruffled his hair that is unkempt.. Ulupi is right. Music works like magic.. He is feeling relieved. He conveyed his heart to her..through the song. He knew it struck the target..
Rain stopped much to the relief of hermitage dwellers..It is difficult to bear rain living in bamboo made huts covered with coconut leaves..

Arjun stood gazing into Ganga waters. His fire born is too expressive to expose her heartfelt feelings. In contrast he always restrained himself from doing so. The only exception is the brief span of time between his victory and his mother's word..to share her..

Arjun reminisced his cherished moments that he never shared with anyone..

When he first saw her in the temple he was wonder struck. He never saw such Devine beuty live before his eyes.. He wanted to touch her to check if she is real..or a dream.

First time when he locked his eyes with her in swayamvar mantap he just wished the moment to stop. He fell in love with those eyes.. He desparately wished to own her..to make those eyes look at him and him only... He thanked his father in law in his heart for creating her ..just for himself..

When she approached him to place the garland round his neck he was swept off his feet to have her so nearer.. She touched his heart..and his heart strings tuned to that touch...

He dreamt of having that touch.. always ..making him the most fortunate man on the earth...

Sahadev called up.. Ved Vyasji asks you to come and meet him.. He is giving time for our return..


To be continued


Edited by ltelidevara - 7 years ago

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