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Posted: 6 years ago
Not a big fan of the bet trope, but you've caught my attention. Edited by foreverlazy - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
shoot 1 part a smitten
Preeta was waiting for the cab outside the lutra house. She was extremely late today. Karan saw her waiting from his balcony and thought this is the right time to start his plans. He took his car keys and drove his car out of the house. He stopped the car exactly front of preeta and opened the window and gave her signals to preeta to sit in the car. Preeta ignored him and looked somewhere else. The next thing what Karan wanted to do was to bang his head somewhere for accepting the bet out of all the girls his brother found this lady. Girls die for his attention and this psycho lady just throws attitude on him. Karan controlled his rage and came out of the car. He looked towards preeta.
Karan : preeta I will drop you home. It is late at night and it is not safe for you.
Preeta : off course it is not safe for me to accept ur offer. U don't know to drive. The person who gave you the license was blind. Why are you so concerned about my safety?.
Karan : see you take care of my dadi. So I want you to be safe to come work. Anyway I had work on that side so I thought to drove you.
Preeta was hesitant to accept but it was too late. Sarla aunty and shristi could be concerned. She went and sat in the passenger seat.
Karan sighed at the thought "last something convinced her".
Karan was driving the car. Preeta was sitting quietly.
Karan : why don't you speak something?.
Preeta : what is there to speak? I want peace .
Karan whispered " after eating my peace you want that ".
Preeta : what did you whisper?.
Karan : nothing .
The rest of the journey went like that only. Karan tried many ways to get preeta talk to him normally but she never used give him a chance.
Preeta : stop the car.
Karan : what? Why?
Preeta : My house is little far from here. I will walk and go.
Karan : I can drop you there.
Preeta : Mr Karan luthra may be you don't know the locality or society. If any one sees you dropping me there at this time of the night. They could raise fingers on me and my character. I don't want it. Thank you I will manage.
Preeta opened the car door and went out and disappeared in the crowd.
Karan driving back home thinking of preeta. Karan luthra had seen many girls dying to show people off by using him but preeta was the first one who did not want it, she was different maybe that's why his brother respected her so much. Karan suddenly found preeta's purse in the car. May be she had forgotten it. Since he had not drove so far from the place he thought to return it back. He drove back and parked his car at some place and Karan took umbrella as it was raining and started searching for preeta's house. Then he remembered he did not have her address. He took out his phone and phoned his brother.
Karan : bhai give me preeta's address please. I have not doing anything . I just went to drop her and she forgotten her purse I have to return it back to her. Fine thank you.
Finally the address Karan smiled as he got Rishabh's message came. Karan was going to another direction when he heard a similar laughter and he turned to see preeta playing in the rain like a small child. She seriously looked mesmerizing while playing in the rain. Karan stood there watching her like that. The rain stopped and preeta went but Karan stood here only. The vehicles horns brought him back from his lost world. He looked around to find preeta she was no where there.
Karan knocked the door of preeta's house and a young girl opened it. For once Karan thought he was in wrong place.
Karan : I have come here to meet preeta. Her purse she left in Karan only.
Shristi was surprised to see Karan luthra standing here. She never knew her di worked in such a big house.
Shristi : oh you have come to meet my di. I'm shristi her sister. I'm ur big fan.
Karan smiled hearing it. So Someone from her family likes him.
" who is that shristi? " came a voice and Karan turned towards it to see preeta coming in her night suit drying her hair which was wet. Karan stood like a statue starting at her. Preeta approached him and her scream brought him to the real world.
Preeta : what are you doing here?.
Karan : your purse. I wanted to return it.
Preeta : thank you. I think you should leave.
Preeta closed the door on karan's face .
Karan stood like that and finally left the place confused.

Karan reached the house to see Rishabh standing here.
Rishabh : Karan seriously not done. I was worried. How is preeta?
Karan : she is beautiful like angel.
Rishabh : I know. I asked did she reach her house safely?.
Karan came to his senses that time which he lost because of preeta. The realization dawned him that time " did he just said to his brother that preeta looks like a fairy ".
Karan came back to his old style.
Karan : off course she is safe she shut the door upon my face. Can you believe she did that. I will never help her. By the way her sister is a big fan of mine.
Rishabh : u have gone to her house at late night she did not want anyone seeing it there. U don't understand the society Karan.
Karan : u both think so similar. I don't want anymore lecture. I'm going to sleep.
Karan went away without seeing that Rishabh was smiling thinking about preeta.

Karan got up after trying to sleep. It was the fourth time he got up after he came. He was not getting sleep as whenever he sleeps preeta's face comes in front of him.
Karan muttered " she is not letting me sleep ".
He took his phone and dialled her number without thinking of anything.
Preeta did not pick the call as she was too sleepy but when the phone was ringing every time she picked up without seeing the number.
In sleepy voice she said " hello who are you? Sleepy can't talk please call tomorrow " and cut the call and went to sleep.
Karan was annoyed did she cut the call? And she is sleepy after taking away his sleep. Karan was bored he could not sleep. He troubled everyone
While calling them. Finally he called his best friend rehaan.
Karan : rehaan how are you? Look rehaan I am fine OK. Nothing happened.
Best friend is someone who will know better than u. So Karan could not hide this from rehaan. He told rehaan everything. And the reply he got made Karan mad. He cut the call and threw the phone on the bed.
He was walking in his anger. He muttered angrily " stupid rehaan did he tell I'm smitten by Ms psycho preeta no way no one has smitten Karan luthra no one will ".
Karan took his phone again to phone and scold rehaan. He took his phone but a notification came about a friend request by shristi. He accepted it. He got access to her photos and posts. So he laid on his bed and started seeing her post. It's preeta's sister's account so obviously he will get preeta's photos. He went through the posts and found preeta's pictures. Some smiling pictures brought smile to him also, he saved one of her pictures and looked at him sleep came to Karan.
Karan luthra is smitten will he ever realize that?.

Edited by aishwarya12joys - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Its awesome.
Plz continue soon.
Waiting to know how karan will accept his feelings. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
wow awesome update...waiting for more...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome start!
I enjoyed reading this.
The best part was when karan was lost in preeta's thoughts saying "She is beautiful like an angel" and on the other hand rishab was also smiling thinking about preeta as he also agreed with karan's words...
beautifully written
Hope to read more from you soon.

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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome...Loved it... Interesting to know whether karan makes preeta fall for him or he himself fall for her...Will he ever express his feelings to her? R will his ego stop him for the BET?
Plz do continue😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Plzzz continue with the next chap
It's been long time that u didn't update
Plzzz update next chap
Plzzz
Plzzz
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Posted: 6 years ago
nice... post the next part soon...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Aish.. Nice to see you here...
It's awesome dear..
The player is falling for Ms Mental. 
It was actually cute..
Love Preeran
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Posted: 6 years ago
Shot 1b winning her trust
Karan woke up in the morning early and was waiting in his hall to see preeta. But preeta did not come only. Karan was frustrated Why was this lady not coming? She used always be come early.
Karan's mother was more than shocked to see him wake up early and so were the others.
" Karan beta what happened why did you wake up so early " asked his brother.
" actually I had work maa. I am going to practice " said Karan.
His words gave heart attack to Rishabh. Was Karan serious about practicing cricket?
Rishabh was proud of his brother and went and hugged him.
Karan took the cars keys and went away leaving his smiling family and proud family.
Karan was driving irritated by today's events and he did not get to see preeta's face also. He was driving when he saw preeta surrounded by goons he was shocked what was happening there? He stopped the car and came towards her. She was crying.
Preeta was going to the lutra house when some goons surrounded her and started misbehaving with her. Tears streamed down from her eyes. The main goon was touching her and scaring her that's when she noticed Karan coming from behind. She was relieved for her unknown reasons. She pushed the goons and went towards Karan hugged him.
Karan hugged her back and saw her clothes tore. He took his jacket and gave her and looked at the goons angrily. He would not swear them easily. How dare they try to kidnap preeta? He was waiting from morning to see her face and they were trying to take her away.
He signalled preeta to go and sit in the car. Preeta did as he said.
Karan went towards the goons and started hitting them. Karan punched the main goon so harshly that the goon vomited blood from his mouth.
Before he could hit more he was stopped by preeta who holds his hands.
" Karan stop or you going to kill them or what? U had already hit them so badly. Come let's go " said preeta.
" leave me I will not leave them alive. How dare they try to kidnap you ? " said Karan angrily.
" please Karan I don't want anything to happen to you because of me " pleaded preeta.
Karan stopped hitting the goons hearing her pleading.
" fine I will not hit them but I know what to do of them " said Karan.
The police arrived at the right time. Preeta was shocked if she files a complain in police, the police will visit her house and the court proceedings she does not want Sarla aunty to get more trouble because of her she decided to leave the matter but before she spoke karan's words shocked her.
" they tried to kidnap and injury me. Arrest them and make sure they don't come out so soon. Contact my lawyer for further issues " Karan said.
The inspector arrested them goons and went away.
Preeta looked at Karan at questioning eyes as why did he do that.
Karan understood.
" u want to go to ur house or my house? " asked Karan .
" I can't go anywhere putting ur jacket on my top. I can't trouble Sarla aunty more " said a scared preeta softly.
" fine . I know what to do. Come with me " said Karan.
Karan drove the car and parked it infront of some big house.
Both Karan and preeta came inside the house.
" finally to came making me wait for twenty minutes " said a young girl who came and hugged Karan.
Preeta looked at her and wondered if she was one of karan's girlfriend.
The girl looked at preeta and smiled
" hi I'm diya. I am just karan's friend OK "
" there it is ur clothes. Karan messaged me to get it. Bye I'm have to leave. Boyfriend waiting. Nice meeting you preeta " said diya giving preeta a packet.
Preeta was confused how did diya know her?
" go change and come we have to leave " said Karan.
Preeta went to change in one of the room when she came out she saw Karan arranging breakfast. Karan saw her looking at him and he started at her she was looking so pretty in the dress why does she have looks that can kill.
" come sit. I could not have my morning breakfast. U can join me " said Karan.
Preeta was also hungry so she sat and was having breakfast with Karan.
" how did diya know me? " asked preeta.
" she is my friend and she almost knows everything about me including my girlfriends and the girl who troubles me. So she knows you and she likes so much for troubling me " replied Karan.
" thank you for saving me. I thought so wrong of you. " said preeta.
Karan smiled and said " it's OK. I hope u are OK. Be careful next time "
Karan and preeta finished his breakfast.
" Karan whose place is this? " asked preeta.
" mine. I got this as gift from my cricket team owner for playing so well . Only diya and now u know this place. When I feel sad I come here. " said Karan.
" we should leave " said preeta.
Karan nodded and they were going to the lutra house. Karan's phone rang and he took it.
Karan's was tensed after hearing something. Preeta could sense that from his face.
" what happened? " asked preeta.
" actually. I have a practice match. It's already time " said Karan worried.
" it's ok u drop me there only. I will go from here " replied preeta.
"what? No way " said Karan. He was not going to let her go alone
" fine let's do one thing. I will call ur house and tell that I can't come for work today. U take me for ur match. I will watch it and u drop me home " said preeta.
Karan agreed.
Preeta and Karan reached the place where the match was taking place.
Karan's teammates were surprised as he never brought any girl for his match that too with him.
Karan made preeta sit comfortably in a place and send one of the servants to take care of her though preeta refused.
His teammates were more surprised.
Karan was teased in the dressing room so badly.
" Karan after you have done with her please give her number to me. She is so pretty " said Ajay one of his teammate.
" don't you dare Ajay. She is not that kind of girl stay away " said Karan angrily.
All were shocked seeing Karan so angry. Karan went out of the dressing room annoyed. The annoyance vanished the next moment when he saw preeta smiling at him and she signalled him all the best.
The match begin and Karan played so passionately as he never played before. Even the coach was shocked to see Karan playing above the standards. If only they knew that Karan was playing only for preeta today. The match got over and Karan was given a rise in his salary and congratulations for the real match. Even the coach was impressed.
Karan went towards preeta who was clapping for him.
" u played too well no wonder shristi loves you so much. I will definitely come to your real match " said preeta.
" really " Karan said with so much excitement.
" yes " replied preeta.
" I will just come " said Karan and went towards dressing room to change his dress.
Preeta saw some girl following Karan .
Karan changed his dress and was going out of the dressing room when he was blocked by Sofia, his ex girlfriend.
" so she was the one because of u broke up with me. What did you see in that behenji tell " screamed Sofia.
" preeta was not the reason I had clearly mentioned to you that our relationship will be only physical . Preeta is better than you. Never compare her with you " said Karan angrily. Karan walked away
" how dare you. I will teach you a lesson Karan " smirked Sofia.
Karan came out of the dressing room and started going out of the place with preeta. When someone punched Karan it was Ajay.
" who dare you molest Sofia? " said Ajay angrily. Ajay was hitting Karan without hearing him out.
Sofia was smirking looking at it . Her dress were tore.
Preeta pushed Ajay and helped to Karan, preeta saw blood flowing from karan's mouth. The owner of the team came and Ajay was convincing him to remove Karan from cricket team.
" Karan did not molest her. She was his ex girlfriend. She is faking it can't you see. Fine let's make a medical test everything will be proved. This fellow he is jealous of Karan so only he wants him out of the team " said preeta angrily screaming. Karan never saw preeta so angry.
The owner agreed with preeta for medical tetest and that's when the truth came out. Ajay was removed from the team and the owner apologized to Karan.
Preeta put medicine to karan's wounds .
" why did you have so much trust upon me. What if I really molest the girl " said Karan with curiously.
" the boy who saves a girls dignity will never do that. Karan I know I misunderstood you but I never saw you forcing any girl. U just flirt with them. I trust you " replied preeta.
Karan was surprised he had earned her trust and he had seen the power of her trust.
Karan dropped preeta and came back home.