NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~THREAD 32~Chapter 37-UPD JUN 28th

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Posted: 8 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: lashy
Achichoo... Periyamma... ☺️ thank you choo much 🤗

The more I read what everyone comes up with... I realise everyone has a unique knack/creativity/skill of coming up with something - whether here or elsewhere-
Jyothi and Harshu's amazing photo findings, Adwi's analogies, Shruthi's Azeezpan, Manu's knack of remembering the exact word from chapter even though she follows hundred stories, Rose's pristine English idioms, Selvi's & Mitu's one liners, Bond's late-night tadkas, Shivangi's very presence, Chellam's gifs, Lavanya's hindi poetry, Periyamma's creativity, Lana's dissection of her favourite character and many more!

I think as we enjoy each other's presence here... all this comes up to the surface even more beautifully like bubbling saffron and pista in Malai doodh! 🤗

ETA - Periyamma... I think this somehow got missed... Congratulations (in advance) and wishes (in advance) on the good news... wishing for the safe and sweet arrival of youngest Banjara into this world... your great grandchild! 🤗

What about me 😭😭

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Posted: 8 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: lghosh

Kuki Begum, do you know young people in love always find the season monsoon romantic? They just let go of themselves with their amore mia!! 😆 What say Adwi?? 😉

Rimjhim gire saawan, sulag sulag jaye mann,
bheege aaj iss mausam mein, lagi kaisi yeh agan!!

🤣

Shiva shiva😲

I said that because she called your CS monsoon clouds 😈

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: karkuzhali

My dear Lana,
Thank you for liking my posts on Akbar and Heera's diary musings..I read both your posts , and I find you have dealt with them completely from a different angle. If at all any similarity is noticed, it is only because the raw material which we have secured to weave the cloth is the same..I confined myself only to the events narrated by the author.. But you have extended it by adding more lustre to it with your imaginary skills.. Mine was a plain cotton sari and yours is with motifs embroidered in it.Thus yours may be classified as fiction and mine is not.
I am really flattered by your words "pristine fluency" about my writing.. which I never feel I possess. I have a very limited writing skill..I am incapable of writing any fiction..It is a gift bestowed on only a few persons like our author..Anybody can write.. But it should be readable!

Saraswathi Aunty..

Aunty I am sure you are an epitome of modesty and humbleness!! If you have limited writing skills then I don't know who possesses unlimited writing skill!! And you say you are not a fictional writer, then those lovely intelligent interludes of a young chef, scientist, researcher, student, the poems, haikus are whose creations?? 😃 Those are reflections of your imaginative efforts which brings a rich luster to us, the readers!! So please keep them coming!

Thank you for your kind words! Seriously it means a lot! I never ever compare myself to you, when I read your musings I was stunned to see that the content, sentiments and feeling matched mine to the hilt. As we were dealing with the same content woven by Lashy Sahiba I thought it will be a boring repetition since both are dealing with their musings of the hilltop episode but yours was so much more enriching and affluent in style! I was by then done with Heera and was half way through Akbar. Really I felt like scratching it all off. Somehow I was not satisfied. I don't feel I fit in either category of knowing how to write or for that matter if it is readable!! But thank you once again for the lovely encouragement! 😃

Aunty heartiest congratulations for your upcoming designation of great grandmother!! 👍🏼 Have fun and enjoy the special moments but please keep raining on us with your teen flavors! 😃

Edited by lghosh - 8 years ago

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Kuki715

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Posted: 8 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: lghosh

Kuki darling you are treading in deep waters! 😉😆 Ab iske baad agar main kuch boloon toh mooh fulake mat baithna, don't say, jao di, main aapse baat nahi karoongi! 🤣 You are giving me enough ammunitions! 🤣

Toh Kuch mat boliye😆

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Shiva shiva😲

I said that because she called your CS monsoon clouds 😈

Kuki begum, kyun bekaar mein Shivji ko taqleef de rahi hai?? He is with Parvatiji, so let him stay there na!! 😆

And who said I am contradicting that CS is the only overseering monsoon cloud who can quench all our thirst! 🤣 I only said young people in love like monsoon the best!! Did I say Kuki begum loves monsoon or she with Azeez love monsoon clouds, no na?? 😆 Then why Shiva, Shiva?? 🤣

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Kuki715

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Posted: 8 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: lghosh

Kuki begum, kyun bekaar mein Shivji ko taqleef de rahi hai?? He is with Parvatiji, so let him stay there na!! 😆

And who said I am contradicting that CS is the only overseering monsoon cloud who can quench all our thirst! 🤣 I only said young people in love like monsoon the best!! Did I say Kuki begum loves monsoon or she with Azeez love monsoon clouds, no na?? 😆 Then why Shiva, Shiva?? 🤣

Ohh it was about AMK and you.. Bach gayi😛

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: lashy
Achichoo... Periyamma... ☺️ thank you choo much 🤗

The more I read what everyone comes up with... I realise everyone has a unique knack/creativity/skill of coming up with something - whether here or elsewhere-
Jyothi and Harshu's amazing photo findings, Adwi's analogies, Shruthi's Azeezpan, Manu's knack of remembering the exact word from chapter even though she follows hundred stories, Rose's pristine English idioms, Selvi's & Mitu's one liners, Bond's late-night tadkas, Shivangi's very presence, Chellam's gifs, Lavanya's hindi poetry, Periyamma's creativity, Lana's dissection of her favourite character and many more!

I think as we enjoy each other's presence here... all this comes up to the surface even more beautifully like bubbling saffron and pista in Malai doodh! 🤗

ETA - Periyamma... I think this somehow got missed... Congratulations (in advance) and wishes (in advance) on the good news... wishing for the safe and sweet arrival of youngest Banjara into this world... your great grandchild! 🤗

Only Lana's dissection, what about Lana's drooling, bhajans, relentless musings, endless dreams, gawking at his features, habits, personality, flirtations, dying on his voice and whisper, going THUDS several times a minute, going to Parnagarh to be with him, admiring him in every step of the way - in every aspect possible 😉, following him in his nightly dips...excuse moi!!! Who else do these but me?? Taking offence!! If Heera was not there, I do hope you know who would have taken her place??!! 🤣

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: Kuki715

Ohh it was about AMK and you.. Bach gayi😛

Kaash aisa hota!!! But no not me he has his Heera!! I said people in love, ab tu apne aap pe yeh le rahi hai toh main kya boloon bol?? 😆😆😆

No one counted the number of times Azeez was mentioned, only you did!! 🤣 Need I say any more??

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: neepobithi
She misses him, she wants the master of the house to be back, the Mansabdar of Parnagarh to be back, her Khan Sahib to be back, her Husband to be back!

Jagorane jaay bibhabari
Aakhi hote ghum nilo hari, mari mari
Jar lagi phiri aka aka aakhi pipasito, nahi dekha,
Tari basi ogo tari basi tari basi baje hiya bhari mari mari
Bani nahi, tabu kane kane ki je suni taha keba jane
Ai hiyabhara bedonate, baricholocholo aakhipate,
Chaya dole tari chaya dole chaya dole dibanishi dhari mari mari

ROUGH TRANSLATION

Sleepless nights passes by -
I wonder who has taken away my sleep.
The person for whom I'm wandering alone,
With scorching eyes, is invisible -
My heart is filled with the echoes of his flute.
His silent whispers
Resonates in my ears
It's his shadow that I see
Trembling before my tear filled eyes
All day and night.

TAGORE

Amader priyo dhumketu Neepobithi!!! 😃🤗 Ki Khabar? Ami akhon khali aei gaanta korchhi! 😃

By the way what will be the song for AMK's musing? Eagerly want to hear. Aei lekhata amar oto monopriyo lageni, kamon laglo tomar?

Do come over often Anindita, you came after a long time! I heard monsoon has finally landed in Bengal, a little respite from the heat?

Oh, tell me how long will the turmoil continue at Bindu's end, any recent developments? She is missing from here over 3 weeks now. Can't believe at this day and age something like this can happen, people staying in constant terror and out of connection with the external world. 😔

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#460

Originally posted by: Sabdabhala

LANA, WHAT AMAZING POSTS, BOTH OF THEM 👏⭐️

AND ALL THAT NEEDLESS WORRY THAT IT WOULD THE SAAME AS AUNTY'S 😡

I LOVED READING BOTH MUSINGS

BOTH HEERA AND AKBAR ARE SURROUNDED BY A DELUGE OF GLOOMY THOUGHTS

LADDOO NE KAR DIYA KAMAAL 😆

AND THEN THE SUN SHINES BRIGHTLY ALL OVER AGAIN 😳😳

IT JUST TAKES BUT A TINY FLAME TO DISPEL DARKNESS, AND WHAT A FEELING IT IS WHEN THE FLAME SHINES AND DOES ITS WORK

KHAN SAHIB IS USED TO HIS TRIALS AND HIS SOLITUDE. OF COURSE, EVEN THOUGH THE CAUSE OF HIS RECENT DISCOMFORTS IS NEW

BUT FOR OUR HEERA THESE THOUGHTS AND THE TREPIDATION IS ALL NEW. FURTHER, SHE ALSO REALIZES THAT THIS TIME IT IS HER FAULT

AND I LOVED IT THAT SHE MAKES AN EFFORT

🤗

Thank you so much, Lavanya!! 😃🤗 You deserve a big thank, you know that! I was on the verge to scrap it all off! Then you were the first one to insist I post. I was not satisfied with the OS. Anyway, I am happy you liked them and what a beautiful rosy picture you set up for both of them. To me, both of them are battling with the feelings which are new to them and that is why all these trepidations. 😃 He loves solitude but battling his own desire is new to him and Heera on the other hand is battling her feelings of betrayal and mistrust which is again completely new to her and that too from the person she loves. Thanks to Lashy Sahiba for making us go all bonkers over her characters in this way!! 😃

When are you updating your next part of the saga? That will be an unique composition Lavanya, no one else has done this before. 👏👍🏼

Edited by lghosh - 8 years ago