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Posted: 6 years ago
Hello people! I am back with a new poem. I am not in a position to say much now but the following poem is on Amarendra Bahubali amd Devasena from Bahubali as Devasena quietly reflects on many things.
PS-Thank you all for the love and support. Will reply individually to you all soon.

In Return For Love

A robbed roof and a mother whose affection stood dismissed,
Yet oh bow to the arrow of my soul, why aren't you pissed?
To the spurt of love from the spring of your eyes,
What have i put forth in return, save hurt and cries?

Snatching your all including your candidature to the throne,
Something rightfully yours that rests in another's possession cause you are prone,
To the slightest attempt at maligning the honour of this ill-fated one,
Whom you chose to love in all the reverence that leaves me stunned.

Subjugated by destiny, i walk as you hold my hand,
Never have i seen your face rile up in expressing your inability in taking a stand,
Everything for a word, a symbol of love, a heart?
How do i silently behold your world that is falling apart?

Reassuringly you let your lips twitch into a smile,
Wordlessly stating you peerlessly care a pile,
My lord, you are the source of my indefinite pride,
I hope to repay your love as time strides.

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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow! Wow wow wow! β­οΈ

Ramya, this is absolutely, irrevocably PERFECT. 

I love your rhyme, and the adjectives you used to portray Devasena's thoughts and feelings brought tears to my eyes. πŸ₯Ί It's no surprise she feels guilty to Amara's slowly crumbling world (you put that so beautifully), and yet he never blamed her once. He was happy to sacrifice everything for her honor, and that's why he's such a perfect her. β€οΈ

I love this sooo much.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Please write a poem on Devasena's thoughts and feelings right after her imprisonment, as she reflects on Amara's cruel death and her son's separation right out of the cradle. πŸ˜­
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Posted: 6 years ago
Brilliant Di! Finally caught up on BB1 & 2 πŸ˜†
It's such a beautiful yet heart crushing journey!⭐️
Such a combination of awe, pain & beauty is mesmerising! <3

Flawless & amazing as always.

*speechless*

Keep it up!πŸ‘

Yours only.
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Posted: 6 years ago
ResWa πŸ˜†
Yaar πŸ˜‘
Main tereko kitni baar bataaun ke tu poetry likhne ke liye bani hai! 
Thoda talent meko bhi baant de na πŸ˜³
Where do you even get your talent from? 
Words hai, emotion hai, rhyme hai. Poetry finish . β€οΈ
Vocabulary died, so you need to lend that also. 
Write more, more, more. 
Muchas gracias. 
Rula diya yaar. πŸ€”
I wanna write like you, but bhagwaan ne itni talent di nahi hai. I love this and I crave more. Kuch likh de na mere liye πŸ˜† Write on your Sakha πŸ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago
Fab oneπŸ‘
lovedd ttt😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
That was so so beautiful! Loved it! <3
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Posted: 6 years ago
Fantastic poem Ramya πŸ‘
You have portrayed Devsena's thoughts very beautifully ❀️
Edited by Nonie12345 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
In an awesome way, this poem broke the boundaries of unspoken feelings of Devsena, helping the reader feel the inner emotional bonding between the Bahu and Devsena , through this poem you united the reader with the beautiful world of their love story!A well-written poem Ramya .