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Posted: 6 years ago
Yet another beautiful poem Ramya👏
Fabb it is😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
Sheer awesomeness Di! This was so serene and beautiful!
The nature rejoicing while the Lord playing the flute <3

Purely written!❤️

I wish I can follow your footsteps and be half as experienced as you 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful poem, Ramya! ❤️ I really love the descriptions of nature. This stanza is my favorite.

Wetting her face were light, incessant showers,
She was his heart, his benevolent bower.
Playful splashes and soothing drizzles,
The waters of the Yamuna rose and whistled.

Can you write a poem on Ram-Sita's reunion after the agni pariksha? Or even an angsty one on their last glimpse before Sita's bhumi pravesh?
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Posted: 6 years ago
another beautiful piece ramya... 👏
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Posted: 6 years ago
I like your poem.
Keep posting :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
Wow...I typed an entire comment! And it's gone without getting posted. ...annoying!
Okay...let's get down to business shall we? What a mesmerising piece of work. I have always known that poetry becomes you. You are confident and words flow unhindered and smooth. Loved loved loveeed the poem. Thank you for your dedication. Radhey-Krishna's love is so mystical and deep. Thank you Ramji lal


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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey Ramya, its been long time i logged into forum and by chance I got your PM , I am glad that I found this beautiful thread. All these are lovely creations. 👏 .. Kudos dear ..really magical words..and world indeed..

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Posted: 6 years ago
Your poem has the depth and the tranquility which can be helpful in meditating and if possible attain the communion with that Radhe Krishna Divine love. Touching, sensitive, replete with heart-warming imagery, soothing, a siege on the senses, love your poem Ramya 😊!

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Posted: 6 years ago
While I was searching random threads I end up here accidentally. But this is one of the best accident that ever happened. Every poem is having it's own flavour. May be I can use these beautiful lines to impress few of my friends out there 😃. Great work girl :) . I loved reading them. 

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Riya_16

Wow...I typed an entire comment! And it's gone without getting posted. ...annoying!

Okay...let's get down to business shall we? What a mesmerising piece of work. I have always known that poetry becomes you. You are confident and words flow unhindered and smooth. Loved loved loveeed the poem. Thank you for your dedication. Radhey-Krishna's love is so mystical and deep. Thank you Ramji lal


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This happens to me all the time  argh . I type with flow and with my whole heart and then it disappears. This is why I copy content all the time once I type , even I miss the post I can paste the same and can repost it 😊

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