The Aftermath--a sincere wish

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Posted: 9 years ago
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At this point of time I want the story to move like this.


Sonakshi rushed fast. She is already late. Her new clients will come to meet her sharp 11'o clock. It is already 10. As she opened the car door Gunni came with the hot pack. The car raced ahead with Sonakshi removing her spectacles and lying back." Make it fast" she instructed the driver.

Two years passed since she and Dev refused to unite together in marriage. Iswari was disappointed. She almost touched her feet to make it happen. But it is Dev who stood his ground." It won't happen maa. I can't bear another separation...to avoid that we should not unite."

She knew her father was too happy to hear those words. But he had to bear the heartbreak of not seeing his daughter marry Jatin.

Radharani failed to make Dev agree to marry another girl. He was firm in his decision.

Vicky's crimes got exposed when he tried to reveal Iswari's theft to media. Luckily she alerted Dev who managed paparazzi in his own method... The Dev Dixit method.

Dev sent Vicky to Mumbai where Iswari Communications new venture started." If you don't mend your ways I will see to it that no one will offer you a job. Mind it." He warned. Elena stayed back with Golu. She got her rude shock after knowing Vicky's role in their seven year separation.

Mamaji and RadhaRani stayed with Vicky . Bijoy Bose changed his base to Calcutta. He was miffed with Suhana who preferred to stay in hostel rather than coming with him to Calcutta. Asha reluctantly accompanied him leaving Gunni to take care of her.

Saurabh and Ronita went to London for one year. Saurabh needs to stay there along with Jatin.

Yes the dearest daughter of Dev Dixit doesn't want to stay with her single parents. She will come for weekends and she Sonakshi has to stay with Dev mostly in IN. Dev did not stop Suhana." If we marry for Soha and again have differences her heart will break. I am used to not having her around for six years. It's OK." He said. But she knew he desparately waits for the weekend to fetch his princess back home. ...Sonakshi opened her eyes as she reached her destination. She still shares her office with Dev Dixit.

It is past 11o clock when she entered her cabin. Through her glass doors she saw her clients chatting happily with Dev. Both are ladies in their thirties and are reasonably good looking.

Sonakshi saw her PA go to that cabin to tell them that she is in. But Sona could clearly see them get up halfheartedly . Dev stood up and shook hands with them . She could see his smile that stretched to his eyes . The ladies followed her PA but she could see the Dev Dixit effect on them.

Her clients got inside and complemented." Dev Dixit is so down to earth. Nice meeting him. " Sonakshi wanted to throw the paperweight that she is holding on them...for sure.

After one hour she heard the knock on her door. Dev peeped in and raised his eyebrows." Sorry to disturb. Time to pick up Suhana from hostel. Are you coming?"

Sonakshi got up took her hand bag and bid adieu to her clients who are too interested in turning their backs to look at Dev. " Leave the information with my PA . See you soon."

I really hope to see the show take this turn. Strictly my view.

Lakshmi

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jayasree.rao

Beautiful. Well planned

Thank you.just a random thought. Thanks again.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lakshmi...nice plot...but sad to see that they have to still be separate even after this 7years...😔
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: grace4317

Lakshmi...nice plot...but sad to see that they have to still be separate even after this 7years...😔

Grace.. Thanks. Even I am sad but I don't want them to rush into marriage and then regret. So... I thought they should spend time together till they get the required confidence and urge to get into a permanent bond.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautifully penned down dear..But my heart bleeds for them to be separated even more..!!But as said if true love..then one can wait till the eternity..i jus wish show do carry sme mnths time leap before they settle down ..
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Beautifully written Lakshmi .You should consider writing a FF if you have some time .

I'm completely fine if Devakshi doesn't marry each other but one thing I would hate to see in the upcoming track is history repeating itself .I don't want to see Ishwari begging Bijoy for Sonakshi's hand or give an impression to Bijoy that they are superior to Dixits and he or his daughter is doing a favor on Dev by agreeing to marry him .This happened during their marriage track which gave Bose upper hand at marriage and Bijoy still feels he has done a favor on Dixit but fails to understand his daughter was equally desperate to be with Dev .

I would love to see them marrying again for the sake of their love and fact that they cannot stay away from each other .This was one of the reasons I wanted Sonakshi to make the first move as she never openly expressed her feelings and Dev is never aware of how much she wants him but seeing the new promo or scene I doubt this will ever happen .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very reasonable. But unfortunately makers love dynamism, not matured n subtle story.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: yyy

Beautifully written Lakshmi .You should consider writing a FF if you have some time .

I'm completely fine if Devakshi doesn't marry each other but one thing I would hate to see in the upcoming track is history repeating itself .I don't want to see Ishwari begging Bijoy for Sonakshi's hand or give an impression to Bijoy that they are superior to Dixits and he or his daughter is doing a favor on Dev by agreeing to marry him .This happened during their marriage track which gave Bose upper hand at marriage and Bijoy still feels he has done a favor on Dixit but fails to understand his daughter was equally desperate to be with Dev .

I would love to see them marrying again for the sake of their love and fact that they cannot stay away from each other .This was one of the reasons I wanted Sonakshi to make the first move as she never openly expressed her feelings and Dev is never aware of how much she wants him but seeing the new promo or scene I doubt this will ever happen .

thanks Nitu for liking it. Honestly I don't think they should marry each other or any one else at this point of time.
You are right. This time no begging on part of Iswari. Dev and Sona should step towards each other leaving no space for any one in between. Let us see what happens.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehraan

Beautifully penned down dear..But my heart bleeds for them to be separated even more..!!But as said if true love..then one can wait till the eternity..i jus wish show do carry sme mnths time leap before they settle down ..

thanks mehraan . All of us feel bad to see them apart. But they need time I feel.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: randommusings

Very reasonable. But unfortunately makers love dynamism, not matured n subtle story.

fact. You said it.

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