FF: Masoom Mohabbat (Eng subs) Ch 21 posted 12/08/2018 - Page 6

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

Hey Avi!!

How are you hun?! I thought you might be upset with me or sth.. coz I have messaged you asking for link to Ch11 for sooo long ! I didn;t know how else to let you know but anyhow glad to see you here..

Hope you had a good break ...are you still off from work?

Thank you for coming on board with my little story..hope you like it

i never get mad 😆 it is a waste of time 😉
i get even 😆 much more efficient use of resources 🤣
anyway i had a computer crash on the first day of vacation so i was out of touch for so long
i did catch up with the story after coming home
ch 11? i sent it 😲
comment is pending
needless to say i loved it
waiting eagerly for more 😳

I had bookmarked it, but got busy before I could start it, reading it now.
am not on blog or wordpress so commenting it here.

Part 1

that was an awesome start..the language with the mitti di khushboo, the unfolding of the characters through the simple, yet realistic conversations..the update left a pleasant feeling reading the contented Handa family.
It reminded me of another story to relate with their simple and happy life.
and the vibrant and energetic Geet, loved her reply "Kya hua agar main jal gayi kamse kam jal kar meethi toh rahungi na Amma" Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 6 years ago

Congrats for the new story

any possibility of an update?

Part 2

loved the bonding of Geet, Meet and Roop..
Geet's character is lively like a flowing spring water..the words of wisdom she innocently puts through are so thoughtful and meaningful..that knack of touching the hearts with such simple words.

Not sure, if anyone noticed but updated Chapter 7 already on 29th September! 

Chapter 8 teaser

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat

Not sure, if anyone noticed but updated Chapter 7 already on 29th September! 

Here is a link to catch up:

Chapter 7

chap 7 - fascinating update! well written! loved how u described the rituals! dadi is nice!  Geet n Maan argue yet again n Meer intervenes! Haider wants 2 talk 2 Meer! Maan offers 2 arrange! love dadi! Haider teases Maan! update soon

Chapter 7 was hilarious...
Loved sherni geet .. n dust maan
Aww cute maaneet moments

Teasing teaser
Please update soon