shivika story -Madno part 4 on page 16

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It's ma frst ever story on d forum
Though I'm not a gud writer lyk u all ...bt I hope u all like it
Sorry fr any spelling or grammatical mistake...

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10:30 p.m. Shivaay's room

He was standing on d door of his room ...staring at d petite figure lying as if lyfless on his king sized bed.
He thought hw happy were day some days before ...Together... Bt now miles apart
Thus had become her routine frm past two days she woukd wake up early before he wakes up nd fall asleep before he returns frm office.
There world changed in a blink ...frm a happy one to one which is filled wid agony nd pain.
He has again become SSO instead of Anika's Shivaay.
She had filled his dull and boring lyf with colors... Colors of happiness , care , peace ,togetherness nd ...dat special feeling called love...bt his beliefs nd prejudices ruined everthing.
His so called rant of Nkk nd his mother's insecurities upto some extent engulfed everything whuch was between dem.
He took her hand into his palm...stilll staring at her. His eyes filled with needs nd desires for her. Desire to make her ...His. To claim her... His ..to shout out loud to diz world dat she belongs to Him.

Hai dil ko teri aarzoo ...
par main tujhe na paa sakoon...
Hai dil ko teri justjoo
par main tujhe na paa sakoon ...
Main hu shab tu subah..D
Dono mil ke juda...
Main hu lab tu dua ...
Dono mil ke juda ...
Madno , mashko , dilbaro madno re...
Kai khwaab dil tujhko lekar banaye ...
Par khauf yeh bhi kahin par sataaye...
Gar yeh bhi toote toh phir hoga kya re ..
Mjhe raas aati hai khushiyan kahan re...
Kyun dil ko dukhana bewajah madno re...
.Phir aansoo bahana ik dafa...
Main hu shab tu subah...
Dono mil ke juda...
Main hu lab tu dua ...
Dono jud ke juda ...
Madno
,mashko , dilbaro , madno re


He gently kissed her palm ...stood up frm dere ...took his medicine box nd lft d room..
As soon as he left she started crying bitterly coz she wasn't sleeping she was jzt pretending. She csme out frm d room searching him. She found him lying on d couch beside d pool. She went towrds him ...he fall asleep due to d effect of medicines.
She gently caressed his cheeks..thinking something in her mind
" Shivaay I will leave u ..dat would be d ryt decision ..I dont deserve u .I cant see u going through diz pain ...cant see adjusting wid me throughout ir life . I don't want to be a burden on u .It will be gud fr ur sake ..yours family's sake ... I have to do it for ur happiness '
Tu hi yoh harpal bandha hai ...
lamhon ki inn janzeeron mein..
Tu hi toh har dum raha hai ..
.Khwabon ki har taabeeron mein..
Tu hi toh har din dikha hai ...
Dhudhali ujli tasveeron mein...
Teri hi toh hai khushboo mijh mein haan madno re...
Ab tu hi toh harsoo har jagah ...
Bhi chus shab sa subah...M
Meeliyth doshvai judaa...
Bhi chus lub sa dua ...
Meeliyth doshvai judaa..
Madno , mashko , dilbaro ... madno re


She stood up frm dere ...took two steps frwrd den turned again to him saving his fsce in her eyes nd left OM forever.
Haan tera saaya toh main hu..
par sang tere na tah sakoon ...
Haan is safar mein toh main hu...
Par sang tere na ruk sakoon...
Main hu shab tu subah...
Dono mil ke juda..
Main hu lab tu dua dono jud ke judaa ...
Madno , mashko , dilbaro , madno re ...


8:30 a.m. bbeside d pool

He wakes up in d morning nd find a letter kept on d table infront of him.[
FONT=Verdana]Shivaay
Mjhe nhi pata mjhe yeh aapse khne ka haq hai ya nhi pr main aapse bht pyaar krti hu I love u shivaay . Pta nhi kb , kyun , kahan or kaise msin aapse pyaar kr baithi . Tq meri zindagi mein aane k liye .Isse khoobsurat bnane ke liye aur mjhe wih sb dene k liye jiske liye main bchpan se tadpi hu .Aapki wajh se mjhe ek khidkitod fmily mili ..prinku aur soumya jaisi sister cum frnz mili... OmRu jaise overprotective bhai mile..aur sbse imp aap aur aapka pyaar .Main jamti hu ki aap bhi mjhese pyar krte hai par mjhse kehenge nhi ...par aapki kanji aankhein sab bolti hai jo aap khud apni zubaan se nhi nhi kh paate. Mjhe nhi pta ki main kahan jaungi kua kroongu pat itna jaanti hu aapki yaadein mere jeene ka sahara hai.Main aapke upar saahil i zimmesari chod rhi hu aap nihbyenge na apni zimmedari ...nibhayenge kyunio us din aapne kaha tha ki woh aapka bhai hai aur aap aapne bhayion se toh bht pyar krte hai aap saahil ka khyal acche sne rrakhenge
...Anika[/FONT]

He screamed out her name.evryone came rushing dere
What happened billu
Wht happened shivaay
Wht happenef bhaiya
OmRu snatched letter frm his hands.
Bhabhi left d home , Rudra said
Shivaay...Pinki intrupted inbetween.
Shivaay stpped her , " are u Happy ? Mo...No not Mom ..Mrs.Oberoi.
R u hsppy know ? U shld be .She lft me alone . U snatched my happiness .
I have lyf bt I'm not alive. He said.
He banged his hand, d glass broke into millions of pieces jzt lyk hiz heart.
He fell on d ground ..shattered nd broken...
OmRu hugged him tightly nd he cried his heart out.
After sometime he stood up ...Khanna ...where r u ?
Khanna ji came dere
Anika...he said.
Shivaay sir kya hua Anika mam ko .
Khanna ...sge lft me ...she left me alone.
Nhi Sir ausa nhi ho skta woh aapse bht pyar krti h ...woh aapko chdkr nhi jaa skti..
Khanna ji bhabhi chli gyi h ...Rudra replied
Dont worry Sir hm sb mam ko dhoondh lenge ...Khanna ji replied..


( let ne know iz dat enough or u want me to continue)




This part is dedicated to my shona doll Chhayu aka water9786 ...on her rqst I'm updating it...though I was a lil discouraged and disheartened after seeing the response... but decided to update it [/B][

20 April 2018

Oberoi Mansion Hall

Everyone was sitting in the hall as if they have no life. The Oberoi Mansion which was a place full of colors ...laughter... Affection...happiness... Stood as a place deserted and secluded..devoid of every emotions.
The members living in it were like living corpses. She took away everything with her
The happiness and life which exist in this place which made it a home is gone and now its a house made of concrete and cement.

"Good Evening everyone "Tej greeted everyone as he return from his conference from Zurich ( in ma story Tej is rude , arrogant nd ignorant towards outside world but not towards his family)

Everyone greeted him, " Good evening"
"How was your trip puttar ji ", asked Kalyani Singh Oberoi
"It was awesome and we are going to gain a lot from this..venture...Oberoi Empire will reach new heights with this venture".he replied enthusiastically
" Ma did you remember Satish Jaiswal who use to be their in Board of members at the time of Dad.asked Tej
"Yes I do remember", replied Kalyani ji
" I've met his son Anand Jaiswal in this trip and he had invited us to make our presence at a party thriwn by them as they are shifting to India after many years. It is a destination party which will be held at Goa."
Are u talking about the Anand Jaiswal ..the topmost businessman from Australia , asked Jhanvi
"Yes you are right Jhanvi and I think we should go there and attend the party ."
"Ok I'll tell Khanna to look after the arrangements", intruppted Shivaay coming from upstairs
No need of that Shivaay they will be sending us their private jet , replied Tej
" So you jzt cabcel all your meetings for next four days ", said Tej to Shivaay
No Bade Papa I'm not accompanying you all I'll stay here, replied Shivaay devoid of any expression
"Shivaay zindagi kisi ke aane ya chale jaane se rukti nhi hai , it won't stop you have to move on beta" said Tej with concern in his voice.
But for me life has stopped the day Annika lft ne Bade Papa
You know who I'm ...Im like a
Zombie... they have life...they take breath...they do work but they don't have this organ ( pointing towards his heart) which makes you aware that you are alive same is with me I don't have heart because it was brutally and cruelly snatched away from me and the one who is responsible for this is by mistake my so called mo... sorry Mrs.Pinky Shakti Singh Oberoi

"I know shivaay you still need sometime but they really want to meet you as they want to start a new business with us under your able guidance...for the sake of our business will u accompany us."

"Ok Bade Papa " , but only for bussiness purpose , replied Shivaay



22 April 2018
Radisson Blue Resort , Cavelossim Beach ,Goa


The banquet hall was glittering with lights . Whole resort was decorated beautifully.Media from all over the world...business houses were present fir this big affair as Mr. Jaiswal is going ro announce some very important stuff relating to his life.

"Pairi pauna aunty ji..heard a lot about you from Anand " , said Vatsala Jaiswal ( Mr.Jaiswal's wife)
"Jindi raho puttar ji ", kalyani ji blessed her.
ShivOmRu were gathered at the bar counter...as Mr Vivaan Jaiswal and Vihaan Jaiswal approached them.
"Hi Obros nice to see you all", they both said in unison
"It's nice to see you too ", trio replied.
And they started talking with each other on random topics.
Mrs.Jaiswal approached them .
"Shivaay I've a request for you...or you can say its a wish ", she said to Shivaay.
"Yes may I know what it is Mrs.Jaiswal"? He asked her.
"I want you to sing a song tonight and you can't say no " she said.
( Shivaay Singh Oberoi used to sinh when he was in his college years ...but the day he entered business world only two things were on his mind -: Deals and Money . And Mrs.Jaiswal knows it as her elder son Vivaan was Shivaay 's batchmate)
He agreed to her wish.

Ladies and gentlemen.. May I have ur attention please... Today on thus occasion Mr.Shivaay Singh Oberoi will sing a song for us.
They hand over a guitar to him. The lights were dimme off knly one light was falling over him.

Ho..
Ye raatein ab nahi dhadakti
Din bhi saans nahi lete
Ab toh aa jaao mere soneya
Baatein reh gayi adhoori
Mere labon pe zaroori
Aake sun jaao mere soneya
( he was remembering all the moments soend with her ...the love of his life ...Annika)

Tere bin.. nahi laage jiyaa
Tere bin.. ab to aaja piyaa
Tere bin.. nahi laage jiyaa..

Pehle jaise mausam bhi aate nahi hai
Baarishon mein pehle jaisi baatein nahi hai
Pehle jaise mausam bhi aate nahi hai
Baarishon mein pehle jaisi baatein nahi hai
Sookhe sookhe alfaaz, khali khali mere
haathon ki laqeerein bulaave soneya..

Tere bin.. nahi lage jiya
Tere bin.. ab to aaja piya
Tere bin.. nahi laage jiya..

Ho..
Chaand bhi wahin hai, wahin hai sitaare
Tere baad pheeke pheeke lagte hain saare
Chaand bhi wahin hai, wahin hai sitaare
Tere baad pheeke pheeke lagte hain saare
Aaja leke tu savere kar ja door andhere
Teri doori tadpaave soneya

Tere bin.. naahi laage jiyaa
Tere bin.. ab to aaja piyaa
Tere bin.. nahi laage jiyaa..
Tere Bin.. Tere Bin!

As soon as he stopped ...suddenly the hair at his back sart to stand...his Annika's sensometer became actively


Bye nxt prt after seeing the response



Index
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Part 3 on Page 9
Part 4 on page 16
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Yess ...
I love it...
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Awesome update
Anika's letter made me cry😭
She left OM...He was broken 🥺
Continue please 😊
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Superb dear and please continue soon...
Loved Shivaay here and his dialogue to Pinky specially Mrs. Oberoi...
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Hi dear🤗🤗
A very beautiful shot. Had an enjoyable read.
The scenes were penned down nicely.
She left him, for his own as she thought and he left shattered after her.
Everything seemed pretty much justified.
All in all, for your first attempt, this was great.
Keep writing.

Thanks for the PM.

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