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farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: water9786

Thank you sweetie Di
and sorry for shorttt comment sometimes words are just not with me..
This is the reason there is no update of my works
sorry * kan pakad kar*😳

Awww cho chweet
Ur antics r jzt khidkitod

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Anya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

reserved.

Will come back soonish!

Unreserved.
Hello Fari!🤗
Sorry for being late yaa, I'm still struck with work but thought to take a break and read this story.
Now coming to this story, it's really good! I mean you have taken a leap right? because the date was 2018 but see I don't want to offend you but write the actual date when annika left him in the starting, because I was a little confused seeing it.
But leaving that everything was amazing I was amused how much shortforms you use!😆 Yaar I reaally try to write shortforms but never able to do it*sulking face* and the choice of songs were amazing mainly TERE BIN.❤️ really suits his situation isn't it? ;)
so shivaay sings well that was a blown to.me and made me think of the episode where shivaay dreams of dancing with annika on Roke na ruke Naina
The way he was lipsing it made me forget that it was arijit singing not him 🤣
but again after all it was superb and amazing.

Love yaa. ❤️
-Anya.

Edited by itzanya32 - 8 years ago

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farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: itzanya32

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Will come back soonish!

Eagerly waiting for your reply anu

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Hello Farinaks, (may I call u Fari?) 😳
Read both the parts together n its so interesting!! 👏 Anika left Shivay n Shivay knows that Pinky is not his real mom, I hope he also knows that Anika left him due to Pinky? 😕 Both the chapters r so interesting. 😉 But why do I feel that Shivay will meet Anika soon at this business party? 😳 Update soon n plzz pm me. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

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farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: itzanya32

reserved.
Will come back soonish!

Unreserved.
Hello Fari!🤗
Sorry for being late yaa, I'm still struck with work but thought to take a break and read this story.
Now coming to this story, it's really good! I mean you have taken a leap right? because the date was 2018 but see I don't want to offend you but write the actual date when annika left him in the starting, because I was a little confused seeing it.
But leaving that everything was amazing I was amused how much shortforms you use!😆 Yaar I reaally try to write shortforms but never able to do it*sulking face* and the choice of songs were amazing mainly TERE BIN.❤️ really suits his situation isn't it? ;)
so shivaay sings well that was a blown to.me and made me think of the episode where shivaay dreams of dancing with annika on Roke na ruke Naina
The way he was lipsing it made me forget that it was arijit singing not him 🤣
but again after all it was superb and amazing.

Love yaa. ❤️
-Anya.

Omg I can't say what I'm feeling now
I'm feeling sooo honoured ...elated nd over whelmed
It really means a lot getting a long and lovely comment from u 😃 😊
Love u s loads my anu baby
Thnks a lot dear 🤪

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farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Hello Farinaks, (may I call u Fari?) 😳
Read both the parts together n its so interesting!! 👏 Anika left Shivay n Shivay knows that Pinky is not his real mom, I hope he also knows that Anika left him due to Pinky? 😕 Both the chapters r so interesting. 😉 But why do I feel that Shivay will meet Anika soon at this business party? 😳 Update soon n plzz pm me. 😃
With love,
Aheli.

thnx for ur rply

I'm glad that u liked it bt my story revolves around the time of NKK fiasco

i'll definitely pm u

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Aheli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: farinaks

thnx for ur rply
I'm glad that u liked it bt my story revolves around the time of NKK fiasco
i'll definitely pm u

Ooo okk...Thanks for telling. 😊

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farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Ooo okk...Thanks for telling. 😊

Pleasure is always mine

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farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#49

As soon as he stopped , the hairs at his back stand ,his Annika sensometer was activated.

"She can't be here ", his mind said "but if she is " his heart replied .

"Why I'm having this weird feeling as if 'woh yahin hai '.

Suddenly light falls on the entrance of banquet hall.

There she was standing in all her might. Looking more beautiful, more bold , more confidence or I should say redefining tadi .

She was wearing a sea green colour backless gown .Her curls were left loose . She was looking breathtaking hot and ravishing. He can't take his eyes off her.

''Ladies and gentlemen now time to meet the person for whome this party is organised . The Guest Of Honor for tonight ". Come Annika beta ", said Mr. Jaiswal cheerfully.

There was hustle bustle in the hall .Everyone was shocked hearing this.

"Mr. Jaiswal you have a daughter, You never told us about her '', asked one of the reporters.

"Yes I don't have one but I've two daughters '', replied Mr.Jaiswal .

''You have two daughters but never met them before'', asked another reporter.

Mr. J :- ''It's a long story. We lost both of them many years back . It was the time when we were living in India. We went to Assam for vacations , during our stay time a landslide took place and we lost them in it . I tried so much to find them but was unable to find them . After six months of that horrible event we left India and get settled in Australia as Vatsala was pregnant at that time and doctor had adviced a calm and peaceful environment for her.''

So I request you all to welcome my daughter and Official Heir Of Jaiswal Clan ,Miss Annika Jaiswal.

Reporter:- ''Mr. Jaiswal it's strange a girl as a heir otherwise eldest son / male of the family is heir''.

Mr. Jaiswal :- ''What's so strange in it . It's our tradition .The eldest daughter of family is given the position of heir in our family ''.

Another reporter:- ''But how you are so sure that she is your long lost daughter''?

Mr.Jaiswal:- Oh My God being a reporter you are asking me that . Ofcourse through D.N.A. testing , but more than that this .'' He waved Annika's left hand in air .

" A bracelet told you that she is your daughter '', another one asked.

"IT'S NOT A USUAL BRACELET , IT IS RELATED TO ONE OF THE TRADITIONS IN OUR FAMILY. THERE IS A TRADITION IN OUR FAMILY THAT ON FIFTH BIRTHDAY OF ANY CHILD IN OUR FAMILY THE PARENTS GIFT THEIR CHILDREN WITH ANY KIND OF JEWELLERY WHICH HAVE PARENT'S INITIALS CARVED ON IT. As you can see at the back of this triangle in this bracelet ''AV " are carved which belongs to me and Vatsala. I'M also wearing a ring with my parents initials'', he replied with utmost sincerity.

Reporter:- Mr. Jaiswal if someone didn't have a daughter than what.

Mr. Jaiswal :- First of all it didn't happened from past fifty years in my families history . A daughter was always born in the family but me as an exception as I've two daughters and I've a strong feeling that we will find chutki too .

And abot your question the wife of the person became the heir till the next heir is born .

Reporter :- Mr. Jaiswal but we know that Mr. Vivaan is your eldest son than how come Miss Annika became eldest .''

''Because Vivaan and Annika are twins'' he replied

"Mr. Mehra please hand over me the papers'', said Mr.Jaiswal to his lawyer.

''Come Annika lets sign the papers'' , he adressed his adorable princess.

''Papa can't you handle all this ..give it a second thought I'm still not ready to do all this . You and bhai are handling it'', making a puppy face she replied .

''No Annika this all belongs to you , I and Vivaan are just a mere CARETAKERS and it's our tradition. Don't forget traditions are important than anything in our family .So, we have to follow the traditions'', he said with serious tone.

Annika:- ''Ok Papa anything for you and for our traditions ''.And she signed the papers.

Reporter :- We want to ask some questions to Miss Annika.

''Ofcourse why not '' replied Vivaan.

Reporter':- Miss Annika how you are feeling after meeting your family after this much long time.

Annika- Let me ask you same question for how many hours you are away from yur family and children? and when you meet them what did you feel ?

Reporter :- For 8-9 hours usually but sometime 12-14 hours but when I meet my family I feel RELAXED AND HAPPY.

Annika:- When you meet them after 12-14 hours you feel happy and relaxed ...I'm MEETING THEM AFTER 27 YEARS ...so you can think that what I'm feeling now.

''Where have you been in these years'' ,another asked

Her face become pale when she remembered past events...seeing nervousness evident on her face Vivaan intruppted ''No more questions please''

''Can we have a family photograph'',asked one reporter

''Why not'' this time Vihaan replied.

They gave poses for the PAGE3

But Annika was under someone's centre of attraction from the times she entered the hall.

''Annika I want you to meet a very special family . We are attached to them from your Dadaji's time , so come lets meet them '', Mr. and Mrs. Jaiswal said in unison.

NOTE- Next part after the response. Criticism is welcomed.

Annika's look { I don't own the images }

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1070625

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Posted: 8 years ago

#50

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You updated...

*Wow*

It was amazing update di. Totally loved it.

So Anika is long lost daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Jaiswal. They are two sisters and now they are trying to find 'Chutki' and that is going to be Gauri if I am not wrong. Anika and Vivaan are twins. How is Vivaan?? I mean protective, possessive or what?? Shivaay's Anika sensing meter.. the best thing of this world. He sensed her there and she was there...

Loved the tradition of Jaiswal's.

Loved how you used Anika's bracelet in this..

That AV and all part was amazing..

Loved that very much...

I loved Anika's answers to reporters the most

They were amazing and made people think what they feel about all this..

Great job

I am sure Ani is going to meet Oberoi's..

Waiting for Anika and Shivaay meeting..

Cannot wait to read..

Please update next part soon...

*Pretty please*