Rikara FF: Heal my Soul (Updated conclusion part in Pg 60) - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21
So omkara supported and gauri obliged... Kalli Thakur is going to produced in court a good move... And omkara is going back to Mumbai with gauri what's the date want to know... Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22

Thanks you sweeties for following my story.

Here you go

Part 4 : Jo na keh sake hum, jo na keh sake tum. ( i really love when it plays on Rikaara. Its so apt 😳)

Omkaara was driving the car. He didn't turn towards Gauri once. He was not knowing the reason for her staunch silence. She was sitting like a statue. She might not have come out of the shock, he thought. He slowed down the car and offered her water. Gauri turned slowly.

"Lo, paani pee lo"

Gauri extended her right hand. She was still having that blade/knife hidden in her bangle which she forgot to throw amidst all the happenings. Omkaara noticed that.

"Yeh kya hai?"

Gauri just then noticed that blade. She removed it from her choodi.

"Woh hume isse Kaali se bachne ke liye rakhi thi. Uski saath shaadi hone se pehle hi, humne apni jaan khatam karani thi" Gauri remembered her pathetic state in the morning.  Indeed, Sankar ji ki kaam hai yeh sab. Marthe marthe usko bachadiya. Uski Omkaara ko phirse mila diya. Tears swelled up in her eyes thinking about her Sankar ji.

Omkaara felt so bad. He couldn't even think of her taking such an extreme step. With spiraling crimes against Women, safety is always a questionable fact in this nation. But he never thought he would witness it up and close. He stopped the car.

"Gauri, jo kuch bhi hua, main samajh saktha hoon, kisi bhi ladki ke liye kitna mushkil hoga digest karne ke liye. Par ab tum safe ho. Kuch ghabrane ki zaroorat nahi. So calm down. Ye paani pee lo. Don't think about what just happened"

Gauri was looking at him with disbelief. She wasn't sure about the reason for his change. He had accused her last time of being a home breaker and characterless girl. Now his behavior is completely changed. Even when she was chulbul, he talked about her only once. But she never noticed him speaking about anything that changed his opinion about Gauri. She was petrified at the thought that he is still not aware that she is chulbul.

Omkaara was looking at her face.  Her face is indeed index to her heart. He could clearly read the questions that were running in her mind, her anxiety, her disbelief everything. Those questions of Why, how, and where.. But this is not the right place to discuss.

"Tumhari mann mein jo bhi sawal hai, main samajh saktha hoon. Par yeh jaga sahi nahi hai yeh sab discuss karne ke liye. Main poora jawab de doonga jaldi. Par tumhe kuch der intezaar karna padega" Omkaara said with a half smile.

Gauri let out a peaceful sigh at the reassurance that smile gave, she nodded and drank the water and gave it back to him. She was hoping this beautiful journey never ends.

Omkaara stopped his car infront of an apparel shop. He was thinking Gauri needed some clothes to change from this dulhan ki jhoda. Gauri looked at the shop and looked back at Omkaara again.

"Woh, delhi jane tak tum yeh bridal wear mein kaise rahogi. To maine socha, tum kuch kapde kareed lo. Bill de do. Main pay kar deta hoon."

Gauri didn't feel like refusing. She was not liking the feel this dress was giving her. This was given by kaali. She wanted to burn anything that was related to him. She got down and went in to the apparel shop. Omkaara's car stopped infront of a 5 star hotel in Bareilly. Gauri felt some kind of hesitation going into the same room with Omkaara. She had stayed along with him as Chulbul but never felt the hesitation before. May be now she is in her real own self, she hesitated. Omkaara understood that hesitation.

"Tum change karlo, wahan restroom hain. Mujhe kuch calls karna hain. Main call karke aata hoon. Room lock karta hoon bahar se. Humhe zyaada time nahi hain, nikalna hai 2 ghante mein. Aaj raat ghar pahonchna hain". He left the place.

Gauri was sitting shocked. What he is taking her to O. Mansion again. But his maa.. !!!

<To be continued>

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Posted: 7 years ago
#23
Wow lovely update again yippie I was getting bored a fresh breath to read I love the way omkara understand her silence and try his best to make her comfortable then also understanding her dilemma was perfect.. in a room to the way he said and told was amazing I can expect this kind of om in future...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#24
awesome I loved it each and every word of ur os  
I wished we get something similar to this in our show also
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome Loved it 
I really wish that same thing happens in the show too 
gauri now leaved om...if she again reenter there then it should be with om
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
Really Interesting..
Loving the story so far.. 

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome Loved it 

I really wish that same thing happens in the show too 
gauri now leaved om...if she again reenter there then it should be with om


How i wish too..!! But CV's are hell bent on giving ss to Vamps and villains more than the leads 
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
comment for ch3.

that was awesome..
yay..
finally mera Omkie Shomkie bhai takes his Dulhania away from Kaali..
woohoo...
continue sooonish.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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comment f0r ch4.

that was too good..
superb update..
Omkie Shomkie taking Gauri to Oberoi Mansion.
wow...
continue sooonish
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi all..
Here you go for the part 5. Thanks for commenting and following as always :)

<Part 5> : Miles to Go.

Omkaara was knocking at the door.

"Haan aayiye.."

Omkaara opened the door and he was taken aback. She has just showered and changed into a simple designer saree. She opted to wear saree since she was going to O.Mansion. Her wet hair was all over her water dripping on her saree was enhancing her petite frame, her face looked ethereal. He felt so much intensity in the look of her doe shaped eyes.

Omkaara came inside looking speechless.  Gauri was aware of his looks. She felt the heat in her cheeks. It started to turn pink. She was hiding that by fixing her wet hair.

"Wo.. Gau..Kya tum ready hogayi..?"

"Haan hum tayyar hain" She said in a half turned state.

"Teek hai nikalte hain. Raste mein kahin daabha honge. Wahan khaana kha lenge.. teek hai"

"Omkaara ji.. Mujhe ek call karna hai.. apni saheli ko. Patha nahin woh kaali ki gunde usne aur meri maa ko apni hi ghar pe lock karke rakhe the"

"tumhaari maa aur saheli teek hain. Tumhaari maa se baath kiya tha maine.. Subha subha pehli kaam usko gunde se bachaana hi tha."

"Aap meri ma se baath ki thi??" Her doe shaped eyes opened in astonishment.

"Haan ab chale?" Omkaara started the car. Climate was cloudy and there was a chill windy breeze.

Gauri was lost in her own thoughts. She never thought Omkaara would speak to her mother. May be he realized the entire truth that she was a victim. She didn't ask him anything as she felt he would say things whenever he feels it right. As of now she is in safest hands, that's what mattered to her.

Gauri was extremely silent. He was wondering what was running in her mind at this point. He knew she would have talked 1000 words atleast by now, had she been normal. He remembered their ordeal in the jungle how she was calling him Jatadhaari hippie and irritating him. He smiled to himself.

"Gauri". Omkaara interrupted the heavy flow of emotions inside gauri's heart which tied her mouth.

"Haan"

"Kya soch rahi ho??"

"Humhe aap aapki ghar lekar jaa rahe ho?"

"Haan to?"

"Nahi aapki ghar wale se hum kya kahein. Aapki Maa aur paapaji kya kahenge. Aapki parivaar walon se humhe kounsi kahani sunayenge?? Ki humhari shaadi ek zabardasthi thee.. Kya woh aapse nahi poochenge zabardasthi mein shaadi koun karta. Aap shaadi ko manthe bhi nahi hain. Toh kya ve nahi sochenge aapko iss mein phasna nahi chahiye??" Gauri spoke thinking about Jhanvi's words.

Omkaara gave a thoughtful expression.

"Main jo bhi sach hai wohi kehne wale hoon.. Toh aage kya hoga wahan jaakar hi humhe pata karna hain. Issliye abhi kuch sochne ki faayda nahi hain. Jo bhi hoga, main tumhe doobara musibat main nahi chodne wala hoon.. Samajhi tum?" Omkaara looked into Gauri's eyes for a second and turned back.

"Aakhir aisa hua kya.. aap me issi tharaf badlav agayi hain. Aap jante hain ki kaali taakur ne humein zabardasthi se utakar legaya thaa.. pichli baar bhi?"

"Haan mujhe poora sach patha hai.. Tumhe kuch explain karne ki zaroorat nahin.." Omkara reassured her again.

Gauri's heart ached. He still didn't know she was chulbul. He would be heartbroken to know that. She cannot go in the same spiral again. But she didn't want to lose this Omkaara with Gauri. She was torn between him and truth. Gauri fell silent again.

Omkaara turned towards her and felt a heavy expression on her face. He noticed she was not wearing seatbelt. The path was very bumpy.

Gauri seat belt pehno. Road bahut bumpy hain"

She was struggling to wear it. Omkaara slowed down the car aside. He leaned towards her. Gauri lost balance and held his shoulders. He looked into her doe eyes and buckled the seat belt. His hair was brushing on her shoulders and his face was an inch close. Gauri couldn't control her emotions and looked away. Her hand was still in his shoulders. He thought she will take it off by herself. She was looking away and didn't realize that she still held him. Omkaara didn't want to pull himself off the hand.

"Hogaya. I buckled it up" He talked something to make her turn and realize. Gauri nodded her head while looking away. Omkaara touched her hand. She realized that she had been keeping it on his shoulders. She pulled it off suddenly.

"Maaf kijiye. Woh.. main.. kya hain.." she was stammering.

Omkaara smiled "Chalthe hain.."

<to be continued>