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Anu

@anuandavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#941

Part 3

"Her 100 kilo weight hardly looks maasoom or komal but I nod." Seriously, Maan to bade mazak k mood me he... U r portraying a bilkul different Maan here...

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Anu

@anuandavi

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#942

Haaye Raam. Part 3 tak hi he kya yaha pr. Meri late entry hui he. Jaldi se lin and password bhej do. A eagerly waiting to see them fall in love

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#943

Superb update. Maan is disturbed with Geet's tears and asked the reason. But Geet refused to share. She told Maan that she will tell about his actions to Raj. Maan again teased her. Kiran asked Geet to meet Raj in the study. Raj gave her proposal to stay at KM and work in KC. Dev called Tara that he is coming to Delhi. Tara decided to go to Udaipur and called Geet. Geet is disappointed and decided to stay at KM. Tara told her about Dev coing to Delhi. Raj and Kiran asked Geet about Dev. She told them that he was her boss Dev Khanna. Geet has a crush on him.

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#944

hi thanks 4 da pm n fantastic update! superbly written! Maan teases n annoys Geet! she is miffed! Kiran n Raj's thoughts well portrayed! Kiran n Geet get along! Dev calls Tara! he is coming there n Tara decides 2 run away 2 Udaipur! Geet blushes wen she gets 2 knw Dev is coming! Kiran curious! Dev is Geet;s boss! update soon

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crazymaneetian

@crazymaneetian

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#945

hahhaha this was really good...garbled version of manan's song was cool...geet and dai really bond a lot...great kiran aunty has been won over partially although she is still on son's side...would love it when geet will accept to work in KC...loved maan tara conversation...monster husband!!!

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crazymaneetian

@crazymaneetian

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#946

oh kay!!!! so we have dev and nt as well...so the situation isn't going to be as simple for maan,,,achha hai he just can't have her in KC and charm her...let him fight geet's attraction for Dev and let geet figure out the dev tara relationship and also understand the depth of their feelings and in turn her own feelings...cool waiting for next

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@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#947

I love Dev and Tara as positive character in your stories...small scenes of them in between Maan-Geet is ok with me par jab bahut jyada padna padta hai tab boring ho jaata hai...you can understand as Maan-Geet fan I want to read more of them...lekin you write so beautifully that I love Dev-Tara...

what is this Geet has a crush on Dev ? really?...and Tara is heart broken...why? does Geet know that Tara loves Dev ?...if yes then how can she cheat tara?...and from Dev-Tara conversation I am sure Dev also loves Tara only that is why he talked with Tara not Geet...

Maan is hell bend on irritating Geet...and he loves it when she fights with him...

Raj Khurana wants Geet to live in Mansion and join office...first Geet refused but now she has no other choice...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...

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amrinderdhami

@amrinderdhami

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#948

ahh m loving this hide n seek n cute tom n jerry moments of maaneet,they r all soo cute..kiran n raj wants geet to b their at km..n dev is coming ..m i smelling sumthing fishy or is it a sort of love triangle..me confused...
loved the update..

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mayyo

@mayyo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 8 years ago

#949

This has to be the chapter I have enjoyed the most up until now, especially the end of it. Oh, how I loved knowing Ms. Geet Handa aka Mrs. Maan Khurana-on-paper's crush!

Things are working out way too easy for Maan so far. Dev's entry and Geet's inclination towards him will spice it up.

Enjoyed it a lot, Avi! Thanks for the PM!

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#950

Originally posted by: mayyo
This has to be the chapter I have enjoyed the most up until now, especially the end of it. Oh, how I loved knowing Ms. Geet Handa aka Mrs. Maan Khurana-on-paper's crush!
Things are working out way too easy for Maan so far. Dev's entry and Geet's inclination towards him will spice it up.

Enjoyed it a lot, Avi! Thanks for the PM!

happy to oblige 😆
Raj Kiran find karte karte thak gayi main 😆