Broken---A poem - Page 4

Resh are you planning to reply to my comment or should I edit it back to Res 🤔

Originally posted by: orion23

Resh are you planning to reply to my comment or should I edit it back to Res 🤔

What a wonderful piece. Short but with so much depth and in every word I am able to imagine a broken sumo sitting in the rain weeping over Shravan's outburst and then broken down completely trying after Aditya fiasco..

Originally posted by: orion23

Kya Likhte ho aap!

Ji Poem 🤣

Whoa!

As if it wasn't shocking enough that you posted a poem, you put me into emotional coma...

Aww man! Tu kuch jyada taarif kr rhi 😳

What a piece buddy 👏

Kya papad belne pade to get you to loose this bet 😆

Sacchi. Tum logo k efforts dekh k hi likha hai maine ❤️ I love u guys 🤗

Par mast phasaya mujhe 😆

Prii mission accomplished 😎

But mehnat wasool!

This is just the best!

Simple yet deep,

Short yet poignant.

It wouldn't have been possible without u 🤗

Resh I never want you to stop writing ever again!

Bets or no bets, you write just like you are, beautiful!

That is one huge compliment Zoyi.

Please don't keep us away from such brilliant pieces!

Aww! Mushy mushy ho rhi main 😳

I love you ya!

😃

I love u more 🤗

@bold. Zoyi I just love u 🤗

Originally posted by: orion23

Resh are you planning to reply to my comment or should I edit it back to Res 🤔

Aww! Sowie. I told u na I save the best for the last 😳 Tera aaram se reply krna tha. Meko tere comment pe res krna tha par bhul gyi 😆

Originally posted by: deltadawn

What a wonderful piece. Short but with so much depth and in every word I am able to imagine a broken sumo sitting in the rain weeping over Shravan's outburst and then broken down completely trying after Aditya fiasco..

got goosebumps reading this.

the last lines totally show her predicament in her decisions.. marvelous.👏

please do write more.

Thank u so much for such a huge compliment dear. I m so so glad 😳

Originally posted by: Nik03

Aww 😳
Thank you dear..!!
Are aap teeno mein se koi bhi haare...Hamaari to chaandi hi hai 😆
Bas aap aisi bets lagaate raho 😉

P.S Aap mujhe aap mat bolo...Jaisa maine Zoya se bola ke Nikka sa Nik itte bade word ke bojh tale Dab jaata hai 😆

Ok ji.

Originally posted by: Perpetuity

Aww! Sowie. I told u na I save the best for the last 😳 Tera aaram se reply krna tha. Meko tere comment pe res krna tha par bhul gyi 😆

Originally posted by: orion23

Aye pagal!

Mai mazak kar ri thi...

Bacchi thodi hoon😆

As if you don't know me!

And that poem, I'll be waiting 😎

🤗

Originally posted by: Sunain

Awwhh...cute😳..😆😆

Arey Resh kar do na reply...humari Zoya ko itna intezar kyun kara rhi ho😃😆

She is special u see. All this is for her only. So took some time