WELCOME TO
Rantara CIRCUS!😆
A big HELLO!! to all my dear friends and Rantarians🤗..and thanks for your support and love to my first story HULCHUL...which is still pending..I know! and when I'll update that..I really don't know.😆
But, for now..I am here with my new story that's Rantara Circus😛
For those who don't know me...My name is Suchi and I am big fan of Rantara.😳
So..batein baad mein..pehle main baat pr aate hain.😆
As we all know that everything is fair in love and war...so here let's talk about only love not war. What happens when two people fall in love with each other but afraid of confessing. This story is about how Raghu and Antara fight for their love...Doing CIRCUS for their love!
Well it's not tragic..quiet romantic and funny kind of story(I tried to make it)😃
Character sketch
RaghuVeer Naik- MD of Naik Textiles "Ragini"
Mr.Balbeer Naik(baba)- Raghu's Father(a very nice and funny person)
Mrs.Daya Naik(Ayyi)-Raghu's Mother(a typical mother)
Ragini Naik (Ajji) -Raghu's Dadi(very sweet lady..loves her children a lot)
KaranVeer Naik-Raghu's Younger Brother(nice guy and close to raghu)
Aman
Shergill -accountant in NT(Right Hand Of Raghu..and good friend of Antu)
Ruksana -receptionist in NT(sweet girl..good
friend of Antu )
Buntiya- servent in Naik Mansions..(..bechara word I cn say)
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Ms.Antara Kaul- Raghu's secretary in NT
Antara's
family
Dr.Prakash Kaul - Antara's father
Mrs.Geeta
Kaul- Antara's Mother
Machinder - elder brother
Ishaan-younger brother
pammi-bhabhi(...Wife of Machinder)
Gullu -mamaji..(show m na bolne wale mamaji..yahn
kafi kuch bolenge)
Rasika -servant...more or less..hehe
Few entries according to the need of story..
Part 1
Raghu lives with his family in Delhi ...gabru jawaan ..handsome hunk guy...jispr
every girl waarijawaan. His Aayi and Baba lives with his younger brother Karan
in US he is doing masters in Management and also looks after business . Raghu
handles his business in India and lives with her Ajji and at first sight he is
in love with Antu but no himmat to confess.
Antara is sweet innocent girl...calls her bappa
every now and then...her family is residing in Kashmir but she has come to Delhi
for work. She is staying with Ruksana and works as a Secretary in NT. She is
working since 1 year...here also same case..love at first sight wala mamla.
In this story Raghu and Antu both are fresh
pieces there is no dark, grey, pale, dull past for them. Both are in love with
each other but, they haven't confessed their feelings yet. Since our Raghu is
an expert in hiding his emotions, poor Antu is not sure whether Raghu also has
the same feeling as what she has... so she also hides her feelings fearing that
if something goes wrong Raghu will fire her from her job..and also u you
Ladkiyan pehle kahan bolti hain?? so the hide and seek game continues.
As usual just like the same day...Antu was in
her dreamland in her cabin thinking that... till when she has to keep her feelings
like this...will she be ever able to confess her love or not??
Antu:(selftalk) ye Raghu sir bhi na? bohat
confusing aadmi hain sometimes he talks very lovingly the next minute he shouts
at me .Don't know what is he thinks about me?? today I won't leave him. I'm
going to ask him directly whether he loves me or not? At that moment her
intercom rings..its from Raghu
Antu skips heartbeat
Antu(slowly)- Hello Sir!
Raghu skips heartbeat
Antu: Hello...Sir!
Raghu is still in lala land...khoya hua antu ki awaz mein..
Antu (shouts loudly )-HELLO SIR!!..aapko meri awaz sunai de rhi h??..mujhe aapki nhi de rhi??
Raghu..gets a shock removes his receiver..take a breath and composes himself...and holds it again
Raghu( felt as how stupid he can be? But thought to show his bossgiri): Antara is this the way to talk to your boss??.. ..ab to maine kya..puri building ne tumhari awaz sun li hogi.
Antara- sorry Sir...I thought...
Raghu-Forget it!..I have to give some dictations for next meeting come fast!
Antu- okay sir.
Antu(cuts the call & selftalk)-Yeda kahin ka!!(rudely)...antu..if this will happen again then he will definitely fire you one day!..phir to tu Mrs. Naik bnne k sapne bhul hi ja..bas bohat hogya !!..Aaj to faisla hokay rahega..ki he loves me or not..go Antu! go ask him. you can do it. yes!
(Antu stands up from her seat with determination.
She turns towards Raghu's cabin taking file and notepad and sees him through
glass blinds ..her legs start to shiver out of fear .She starts breathing
heavily ,sits backs and swallow a glass of water in one gulp. She holds her
heart to calm her down.)
Through the glass blinds, Raghu sees Antu holding her heart with her eyes
closed.
Raghu:(selftalk) Antu ko kya hogaya?Abhi to chilla rhi thi...lgta h meri baat ka
bura maan gyi..m kb sudhurunga??but.. why is she holding her heart?
suddenly Raghu's brain overworks and he is agitated.
Raghu:(selftalk) lagta hai, Antu ko heart attack hai!!.no no..she is breathing
heavily ..Asthama attack aaya h?... jaldi se kuch karna padega.
Raghu is worried and rushes to Antu's cabin.
Raghu: Antaraaa!!!
Antu:(shocked,opens her eyes & selftalk) hey Bappa! why is he shouting? I didn't do any wrong..wait..I am late I should go..He called me he must be waiting for me..he is such a busy person..his every minute is precious ...why I am so stupid??
Raghu doesn't know how to react & save Antu & again he shouts in fear:
Antaraa!!
Antu:(nervous ,still holding heart and notepad ...selftalk) has he heard what I
said a few minutes ago?..she gulped
Raghu comes out of shock and composes himself
and without saying anything to Antu calls Aman on intercom.
Raghu:Aman
Aman: ji sir
Raghu: Call the Ambulance! Fast
Aman(confused): kis ke liye sir?
Raghu: Antara ke liye.
Antu:(shocked & selftalk) mere liye
ambulance? lekin kyun?jaildi soch!!!..aisa kya kr diya maine??..maine to sorry
bhi bol diya tha..2 minute late hone ki itni badi saza..he is sending me
hospital...means he will beat me!!
Aman: Antara ko kya hua sir?
Raghu: Aman, sawal math pucho!. call the
ambulance immediately. it's urgent!
Raghu cuts the call.
Antu is so terrified at Raghu's actions
Antu:(selftalk) hey Bappa! why is he calling ambulance? is he going to beat me to death? Aisa koi krta h kya?
Antu
imagines Raghu as an old bollywood movie villain...as he move towards her.
Raghu takes the water glass which Antu emptied
a few minutes ago
Antu:(scared&selftalk) hey bappa! why is
he taking the empty glass? is he going to hit my head with it?haann...ek baar m
kam tamam...inka hi office hai..yehi boss hain..he can do anything..haina!
Raghu
is so worried about Antu. so didn't notice the glass is empty... so he brings
the glass close to Antu's mouth and asks her to drink water from it.
Raghu: Antara! Take some water
Antu lowers her head, sees d empty glass
Antu:(selftalk) khali glass se pani kaise
peeloon?
Raghu tilts d glass into her mouth
Raghu: peeo
Antu is more terrified by this act and she
silently reads his face.
to be continued...
So this the first part...thanks for bearing this torture...so share your views
thanks
love Suchi😊
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