The Parting of Ways - ShivKara and Gauri OS - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey Sakura!!
Awesomely very well written.!!!

Shivay's feelings portrayed just so superbly!! All his pain, struggle, dilemma, his helplessness... You penned it perfectly..!!
How much he want, how much he long...to keep him with him, to hold him back in his protective arms... But he have to let him go..let him fly..let him face his own journey..!!!

Loved ShivKara's understanding, trust and bond..!!! It indeed is difficult to part the ways...!!! That too with someone this special..!!! Splendid..!!!

Do continue to write more...!!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: MaDiee

Hey Sakura!!
Awesomely very well written.!!!

Shivay's feelings portrayed just so superbly!! All his pain, struggle, dilemma, his helplessness... You penned it perfectly..!!
How much he want, how much he long...to keep him with him, to hold him back in his protective arms... But he have to let him go..let him fly..let him face his own journey..!!!

Loved ShivKara's understanding, trust and bond..!!! It indeed is difficult to part the ways...!!! That too with someone this special..!!! Splendid..!!!

Do continue to write more...!!!!
MaDiee πŸ‘

Hi MaDiee,

Thank you so much for your lovely words. You know, I feel for Shivaay, no matter what darker shades he reveal at times, as a brother no one could be more perfect. He is practically a parent to OmRu than TejVi ever were. So I guess he would feel like a father does when his children grow up. 

Their parting of ways would come definitely at some point or the other, where both has to let go, and what can be better right, than to have someone you trust that you can hand over your responsibilities to? 

I'm really happy you enjoyed it, and this long comment really means a lot.

Love,
Sakura
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was very touching and reflects the changes in Om and shivaay, the dynamics and bond they have
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Meha101

It was very touching and reflects the changes in Om and shivaay, the dynamics and bond they have

Thank you Meha (Hopefully I caught your name right!) Yes, that's what it's all about, how things are changing and how well they are bearing it😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you!😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Sush! Nice to see you here, after SR forum, what ship are you in? Hopefully it's RiKara😳
Waiting to hear from you!😊