I Met You For a Reason- devakshi FF(chap-9 pg-44)

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Shivangi

@Annei123

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Posted: 8 years ago

#221

Amazing update !!!!

plzzz update soon with lot of devakshi moments 😳

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cscs

@cscs

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Posted: 8 years ago

#222

Hey, I know I am late for commenting, so will be doing for both the updates.

For the first one, it was nice and it was good to see how a tough cop is falling for a doctor.

The second one was eventful. Oh I was imagining their conversations, how they entered the building, killed the gangsters/drug dealers/ Kushal's acquaintances/ bhai log (i dunno what to call them actually 😆 ) But why did they shoot the girl. She might be his partner only and not knowing about his reality.

And kushal threatened Dev to ruin his life. Will it be related to Sonakshi. I don't wanna spoil your story or give you any ideas, but i don't like sad endings. Anyways lets see what happens.

Btw with your story progression, now i can understand why you are not giving Sonakshi's POV and secondly why she is a doctor only and not a part Dev's team or somehow related to his profession. Its different to read a ordinary girl and a cop love story.

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rajalakshmi

@raji91

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Posted: 8 years ago

#223

Happy new year to you

Sounds interesting.

continue

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Sonali Mahajan

@Cutiepie.sona

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Posted: 8 years ago

#224

Hello di!

Aa gyi main!

Sry late ho gya!

But mne chap5 dono parts pad liya!

Bht bht mast hai!😉

Dev kinna shy hai!😳

How reluctant he is to ask her for her no. And on a coffee date!

Awww!😳😉

Sona bhi smart hai sab jaanti hai...Dev json ko!😉😆

I'm loving the growing togetherness of Devakshi!⭐️😳

Mazaa aa raha hai bht!

And Dev's mission was quite thrilling!👏

I like his dedication for work!

The way he manages his team!⭐️

That whole operation/surgical strike was fantastically written!👏👏

Overall very nice updates

Ab next kab milega?!😲

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@Iqqa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#225

One moment the three men guarding the floor spot us and the next moment we are walking over the dead bodies
It was so like I was watching a movie Aakru!
So sorry for my absence, my routine just not allows me to read anything in week days. Just read the 3, 4 and these two parts at a single go. And I must admit you have got a serious talent bandi, qk its really not easy to write such staff! 😊 😊

Aur ye dhamki kia dedi banday ne yar? Dev will definitely kill him if he does anything to his Sona!

Now I'm only hoping and waiting for hoye next update to be done tonight... So that I would be able to ead it on the same time. Otherwise isi tarhan would be the last reader 😃 😃

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sowiee

@sowiee

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Posted: 8 years ago

#226

Wow what an nice update . .Wonderful full on mission ..

Why do I get a feeling that sonakshi wantedly entered into Devs life not by just coincidence...Is she some detective or on the side of villains ..

I don't know why but getting such a vibe...

Whatever it is I should wait and see ...

But really explained the mission very beautifully..

Waiting for the next part

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AnanyaGhosh

@AnanyaGhosh

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Posted: 8 years ago

#227

Aakru whr r u??? Kisike post ka jawab nhi de rhi ho... Kya hua hai??? Everything is fine right???

And next update kab milega????

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Tremors

@Tremors

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Posted: 8 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: AnanyaGhosh
Okk so basically this chap was more or less a mission wala... And less abt sona.. It was nice... Something different and thrilling...
And kushal ki dhamki se mujhko darr lag rha hai... Kahi woh waqai mein sona ko kuch na karde as she is everything fr dev...

Baas aur kuch nhi likhna... Aaj chotu sa comment...

Jaldi update kariyo...

yes this was the mission... thank you...

darrna bhi chahiye!! maybe maybe not... yes she is everything for him!!!

tera comment chota ho ya bada... i like it!!!

okay i will update soon!!

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Tremors

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Posted: 8 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Loved the thriller...that dhamki...is bringing in a fear in me...I hope later he doesnt hurt Sona to teach a lesson to Dev...OR hurt Vik or Eli ...either of this will shake the existence of Dev I feel...will wait for you next update...hopefully we will have more romance there!!

thank you soo much!! glad you like it!! i really thought it wont have the effect i was intending for it to have!!!

well maybe maybe not... yeah!! but you know a ghayal sher is much fun to watch!!! stay tuned to find out more!!!

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Tremors

@Tremors

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Posted: 8 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: Sharica
Men on Mission...it was more of a thriller but that one dialogue ki "tera sab kuch cheen lunga". Sona will become his eveything in coming chapters...but I hope Dev Sona ko kuch hone nahi dega..
He finally got a message from his Sona..and he forgot all his tiredness...

Waiting for next chapter...

yes!!! i love guys with guns!!! hopefully for that you need to keep reading!!!!

yeah!!! it took me a while to add that effect glad it got noticed!!!

surely i will update soon!!