TUMHARE SAATH..TUMHARE PAAS SHRAMAN TS (epilogue updated pg13) - Page 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
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wow
awesome update
cannot wait to read about the plan
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks 
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Sunain

Hii Dolly!!!

Firstly m so so sorry for being this late...kinda busy these days...thnks alot for the PMs..really plz always keep pming me n whnever i'll get time i'l read n give u my reviews bout it for sure๐Ÿ˜ณ...pardon me for the delay!
coming to the upii...just read both the parts in one go!
Woah..tht was intriging...
 they confessed
Shravan is planning someting so her Sumo can be back on her feet..awwhh...His Most Imp Case๐Ÿ˜†
really liked it!
do continue soon..n thnks for the pm once again!๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Take Care!
Sunain.


Thanks...happy that you read...surly will pm you๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinky.padda

wow
awesome update
cannot wait to read about the plan
continue soon


Thanks
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65
awesome...
beautifully written...
loved it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: arshuaar

awesome...
beautifully written...
loved it.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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TUMHARE SAATH TUMHARE PAAS 

Hey guys i am back with update..little late i know...but was little packed up...so read and would love to hear from you if you like it...

Keep in mind ramnath here is not a grey character

Chapter-3

Pushkar: konsa plan?

Shr: meri zindagi ke sabse imp. Case se related h...

Pushkar: konsa case?? Bhaiya ap kya bol rhe ho mujhe kuch samajh nhi a rha pls seedhe se batao na kya hua h?

Shr: pyaar *mutters dreamily*

Pushkar: pyaar? Kisko kisse?

Shr: mujhe sumo se or use mujhse *blushes *

Pushkar: omg omg!!! (Starts jumping) matlab finally ap dono ne apna pyaar realise kar liya...i am very happy for you bhai (hugs him..almost jumping)

Shr: thanku chote 

Pu: par bhaiya sumo abhi to theek se chal bhi nhi pa rhi h?

Shr: ha esi se related to mujhe tujhse baat karni thi

Pu: bolo na..i am ready to anything

Shr: me abhi uski physiotherapist k pas gaya tha unhone bola ki agar hum usse kahe ki uski zindagi ki ek bohot keemti cheez usse dur jaa rhi h or sirf vo hi use uth kar bacha sakti h to ho sakta h ki uska subconscious mind work kare or vo chalne lage ...

Pu:to bhai kya h uski life me sabse important? 

Shr: (says proudly) mein 

*fashback*

After coming out from physiotherapists clinic shravan calls suman

Sumo: a gyi meri yad mr.  Malhotra

Shr: tumhe me kabhi bhoola hi nhi tha jo yaad karu

Sumo: ohoo btw sirf flirt karne k liye call kiya ya kuch kam bhi h?

Shr: ha kam h naa...acha ek baat batao ..tumhari zindagi me sabse important kya h?

Sumo: shravan sab thik h na? Tum achanak esa kyu puch rhe ho? (She asked getting confused and worried)

Shr: sab thik h sumo..me bas ese hi puch rha hu btao na pls ...

Sumo: bachpan me ma papa the fir nanu or uske baad tum

Shr: or tumhara PCT?

Sumo: tumse zyada is duniya me ab koi important nhi h...*blushes*

Shr: i love you sumo. ..dekh lena tum jaldi theek ho jaogi

Sumo: i love you too mere buddhu...or mujhe tumpe poora bharosa h...chalo abhi bbye

Shr: bye

*flashback ends*

Pu: kaha kho gaye bhai? 

Shr: kahi nhi ..ab plan sun ..dekh sumo k liye me or nanu bohot imp h par nanu ko apan plan me involve nhi kar sakte h he is very old...to bacha me...ab lagta h madam ko apne per p khade karne ke chakkar me mujhe apne per tudwane padenge (starts laughing)

Pu: ok matlab ap chahte me apke per tod do? (He asks getting confuse)

Shr: he bhagwan kya karu iska?  Gadhe mere per nhi todne sirf sumo k samne ye acting karni h ki mera accident ho gaya h or me marne vala hu kisi hospital ke ICU me hu

Pu: ok age me samajh gya. ...Ferrari ki speed se bhag k ayegi vo 

*both start laughing *

Shr: exactly...isliye we are doing this tommorow

Pu: apko ye plan sabko batana chahiye nhi?

Shr: ha i think me pehle papa se baat karta hu

Shravan goes downstairs and knocks on ramnath's room door 

Ram: come in

Shravan enters

Ram : are beta tum? Kuch kam tha?

Shr: papa me apko kuch batane aya hu

Ram: ha bolo na

Shr: papa vo...vo. ..vo actually me keh rha tha ki...vo...

Ram: bap re!! Kya ho gaya mere bete ko..court me itna confident or abhi vo vo ke age train nhi badh rhi...kya baat h beta bolo na

Shr: papa.me.sumo.se.pyaar.karta.hu(he says in one breath without breathing)

Ram: kya? Mujhe kuch samajh nhi aya beta

Shr: papa me sumo se pyaar karta hu* blushes *

Ram: *gets teary*

Shr: kya hua papa?

Ram: kuch nhi...dekh rha hu mera beta kitna bada ho gya h...pyaar karne laga h..

*shravan blushes *

Ram: baap re...blush bhi kar rha h...tumhe pata h me hamesha sochta thaki kbhi tum mujhse ye ake kahoge to me kese react karoonga...par aj me bohot khush hu...tumne bohot achi ladki chuni h...suman bohot pyaari bachchi h...sabka khyal rakhegi.

Shr: thanku papa

Ram: kya thanku...mujhe fasa diya tumne..

Shr: vo kese ( asks getting confused)

Ram: kya kese? Tumhare rishte ki baat tiwari ji se karni padegi...or vo mere guru h unse esi baat karne me mujhe dar lagta h

Shr: starts laughing. ..papa ap to ese Dar rhe ho jese apke rishte ki baat ho meri nahi..

*both laugh*

Shr: papa me ye keh rha tha ki mene sumo ko theek karne k liye ek plan banaya tha

Ram: acha...batao

*shravan tells him the plan...ramnath agrees to be a part of it *

Ram: thik h me is plan ko tiwari ji ko bta dunga...jao tum rest karo kal tumhara accident h

*both laugh again and shravan goes to his room*

He lays on his bed and thinks sumo abtum bohot jaldi theek ho jaogi...i hope ye plan work kare...he kisses sumo's pic in his phone and says gudnight darling

In tiwari killa sumo does the same and goes to sleep

Next morning she gets up and does all her routine with help of preeti

Suddenly she gets a call and picks it up

Sumo: ha pushkar bol

Pu: sumo..vo bhai...bhai...sumo bhai...

Sumo: kya hua shravan ko...pls pushkar bol pls...jaldi

Pu: sumo bhai ka accident ho gya h unko hosh nhi a rha h...pls jaldi aja me teko hospital ka address message karta hu

Sumo: par pushkar me kese...before she speaks anything he cuts the call

Sumo thinks omg!! Ab me kya karu ? He bhagwan ye kya kar diya tune...ghar p koi nhi h preeti bhi nail art class gayi h...me kese jau shravan k paas...he needs me

Sumo: tu sumo h tu kuch bhi kar sakti h tu shravan ki sumo h...uthne ki koshish kar...

*suddenly she is able to move...she keeps her leg on the ground and tries to balance but loses her balance and falls down*

Sumo: nhi me har nhi maan sakti...my shravu needs me..

*She tries to get up and is able to move some steps with support of wall*

*suddenly she is able to walk properly...she runs towards the car and sees shravan standing there perfect fine*

Sumo: shravan tum..tum to..vo 

Shr: mujhe kuch nhi hua paglu..ye to mera plan tha tumhe theek karne

She jumps onto shravan and hugs him tightly and starts peppering kisses all over his face and starts beating him with her tiny hands

Shr: omg! Sumo kesi ajeeb ladki ho abhi kiss kar rhi thi ab mar rhi ho

Sumo: starts crying. ...tum yehi deserve karte ho gande...jhoote...i hate you shravan malhotra

Shr: sorry  jaan  mere pas koi option nhi tha yar..

Sumo: par ese? 

Shr: dekho na tum sach me thik ho gyi. ..ab me nanu se hamari shaadi ki baat kar sakta hu

Pu: bhai abhi to theek hui h ...thodi shanti to rakho 

All the malhotra's and tiwaris enters from back

Vandy: congrats suman ..baby tum to theek ho gyi...wah shravan kya plan tha

Preeti: ha shravan brilliant plan

Everyone praises shravan for this

Sumo: ye log kab se yha h?...inhone sab dekh liya?

Shr: chinta mat karo madam vo kisses meri personal thi..kisi nenhi dekha *winks*

Sumo: besharam kahike

Ram: suman mere bete se shadi karogi?..mene tiwari ji se baat karli h

Nanu: ha suman beta hume koi aitraz nhi h

*sumo blushes * jesa ap thik samjhe uncle

Pu: acha uncle ki beti tujhe nhi karni shadi...kesa ap thik samjhe (imitates her)

Sumo: tu chup kar ( whacks him)

Shravan goes on knees 

Shr: ms. Suman tiwari would you do the me the honour of becoming Mrs. Suman shravan malhotra ?

Sumo: ummm...dekhungi...sochungi...

Shr: nhi nhi koi jaldi nhi h. ..vo chachi kal urvashi ka phone aya tha. ...usko haan kar deta hu

Sumo: ayeee!!! Sochna bhi mat..(Everyone laughs).me to bas mazak kar rhi thi... yes Mr. Malhotra i would love to become Mrs. Shravan malhotra *blushes*
Every one claps

The end...

Would you like to have a epilogue?  Purely upto you..will be written with respect to amount to requests...so tell me if you want

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Woww beautiful...how sweet... Nice plan of shravan and it worked perfect.
I love how whole family happily agreed and there are no negative vibes

๐Ÿ‘

Of course, we do need a epilogue...please
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: dhanyata

Woww beautiful...how sweet... Nice plan of shravan and it worked perfect.

I love how whole family happily agreed and there are no negative vibes

๐Ÿ‘

Of course, we do need a epilogue...please


Thanks...will try for epilogue 
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesum...๐Ÿ‘Loved it...
I knew ke shravu ka koi aisa he plan hoga...I had thought ke  voh kahega ke hez goin back to london...par mera toh popat ho gaya...๐Ÿ˜†
This was cool....rest karo..kal accident hai..๐Ÿคฃ that cracked me up...
and epilogue toh dena he padega...Special req from me..๐Ÿ˜ณhope u approve it*puppy eyes*๐Ÿ˜‰
Love,
ANU
P.S wass ur name???