TUMHARE SAATH..TUMHARE PAAS SHRAMAN TS (epilogue updated pg13) - Page 11

Created

Last reply

Replies

108

Views

12.7k

Users

23

Likes

198

Frequent Posters

phoenix_edkv thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
loved it yaar. loong epilogue but i loved it.

shr: dekho chad gaya tumpe mere ishq ka rang

sumo(blushing): tumhare ishq ka rang to mujhpe 12 saal pehle hi chad gaya tha.
this line was soo nice. waiting for your next shraman work.
Love
Madhu
Namiksfan thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Mera kuch nahin ho sakta main phir late ho gai😭. Chalo koi nahi. Subah ka bhula agar next subah forum pe aaye to usse bhula nahin arpita kehte hain.😃

Utterly adorable tha meri fluff ball. 😛
Thanks for this piece dolly.

P's I got to know your nick/real name courtesy end of your post😆.

Cheers
Arpita😆


Koi ni yrr...tune padha na that's ok for me and thanks a lot...btw dolly looks like a nickname par ye mera real name h😉
Namiksfan thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

loved it yaar. loong epilogue but i loved it.


shr: dekho chad gaya tumpe mere ishq ka rang

sumo(blushing): tumhare ishq ka rang to mujhpe 12 saal pehle hi chad gaya tha.
this line was soo nice. waiting for your next shraman work.
Love
Madhu


This line was my favouraite too...thanks a lot and sorry for this being so long i tried a lot but puri shaadi 1 epilogue me dalna tha so it came that way 😉
Edited by Namiksfan - 8 years ago
pinky.padda thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful epilogue
absolutely amazing
loved it
Crazypiya thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
Amazingly update Yaaar
I was blushing all the time...
Such a neatly written
Namiksfan thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Crazypiya

Amazingly update Yaaar
I was blushing all the time...
Such a neatly written


Thanku piya di❤️
Namiksfan thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: arshuaar

amazing ...
beautifully penned...
loved it...


Thanks 😉
anonymousanju thumbnail
8th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
meri dolluuu... m back ...tujhe to mai ek big tight hug dena chahti hu for pm's ...love u yar...a lot :) this ts was so so lovely... yar kash serial m v accident k time p confession dikhate to or shraman moments milte but nhi :( but m happy you chose this part...i remember epi 85 sumo said to shravu dr n kaha h mai kv thik ni hongi to kya zindgi bhr rhoge mere pas n he was like ha zrurt pdi to zindgi bhr.. yar it was the right moment for confession :) n u nailed it sweety... their love cnfesn was so simple n lovely..loved that.. n thn shravu ka accident ka plan ...god i knew it he wl do smthng like ths ... n sumo finally did it n the way she hugged him n kissed him was so touching... n acha hua u made ramu gd atlst ;) wrna buddha awehi beda garg krta.. n epilogue k lie to alg s hug...acha hua u wrote it... 2 mnths n shravu ka reaction was hilarious ;) n thn 2 weeks p v ...he js wanted to marry her right then ...such a kid he is.. ;* n then all rituals n haldi segment was wooow...n shadi p red lehenga n finally their first night...from beginning to end it was amazing...you nailed it dollu... going to read ur other os's ...keep writing n sending me pm's ...much love dollu ... :)
Namiksfan thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: anonymousanju

meri dolluuu... m back ...tujhe to mai ek big tight hug dena chahti hu for pm's ...love u yar...a lot :) this ts was so so lovely... yar kash serial m v accident k time p confession dikhate to or shraman moments milte but nhi :( but m happy you chose this part...i remember epi 85 sumo said to shravu dr n kaha h mai kv thik ni hongi to kya zindgi bhr rhoge mere pas n he was like ha zrurt pdi to zindgi bhr.. yar it was the right moment for confession :) n u nailed it sweety... their love cnfesn was so simple n lovely..loved that.. n thn shravu ka accident ka plan ...god i knew it he wl do smthng like ths ... n sumo finally did it n the way she hugged him n kissed him was so touching... n acha hua u made ramu gd atlst ;) wrna buddha awehi beda garg krta.. n epilogue k lie to alg s hug...acha hua u wrote it... 2 mnths n shravu ka reaction was hilarious ;) n thn 2 weeks p v ...he js wanted to marry her right then ...such a kid he is.. ;* n then all rituals n haldi segment was wooow...n shadi p red lehenga n finally their first night...from beginning to end it was amazing...you nailed it dollu... going to read ur other os's ...keep writing n sending me pm's ...much love dollu ... :)


Thanks babe😆

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".