TUMHARE SAATH..TUMHARE PAAS SHRAMAN TS (epilogue updated pg13)

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Hy guys i am back with another ts. ..hope you like it..

So this revolves around sumo's accident track 

Sumo: doctor ne kaha h ki me kabhi thik nhi ho paungi? To tum hamesha yahi rahoge kya?

Shravan: haan...agar zarrorat padi tu zindagi bhar yahi rahunga tumhare sath, tumhare paas...

Sumo:  par kyu shravan? *She asks slowly*

Shr: because i love you damnit...bohot pyaar karta hu me tumse aj se nahi balki 12 sal se ... bachpan se pyaar karta hu ...or nahi dekh sakta me tumko ese dusro par depend karte hue kyuki janta hu me kitni pyari h tumko tumhari independence

*Sumo cries bitterly*

Shr: sumo pls mat ro na...nahi dekhe jate tumhare aansu mujhse

Sumo hugs him tightly and whispers between her sobs i love you too shravan me bhi tumse bohot pyar karti hu. ..aj se nhi jab tum mujhe chod k chale Gaye the na tab se...

Shravan starts crying...

Sumo: tum kyu ro rhe ho? ab to sab thik ho rha h naa...chup. ..bilkul chup. .. or dekh lena me bhi bohot jaldi theek ho jaungi. ..ab tum ho na mere saath and smiles.. chalo ab smile karo na kitne din se ye tumhara sadu vala face dekh dekh k thak gayi hu me

*shravan smiles*

Shravan: sumo mujhpe bharosa h na? Me tumhe bilkul thik kar dunga

Sumo: mujhe mere shravu p poora bharosa h (she blushes)

Shr: woww i got a nickname..and yaad rakhna ye shravu tumhara hi h...


*they both smile happily*

Preeti enters and says di apki physiotherapist ayi h shravan says jao unhe bula lao 

Sumo: oh no! Vo bohot exercise karvati h yar (makes a sad face) and shravan laughs

Shravan goes near sumo and says in her ear to karo na exercise and jaldi jaldi theek se chalne lago..mujhe nanu as humari shaadi ki baat bhi karni h

Sumo: itni jaldi? Aj hi to confession hua h (sumo asked confused)

Shr: me tumhe apna banane k liye or wait nhi kar sakta and kisses her earlobe

*sumo blushes*  and says shravan hato marvaoge tum ...preeti enters with the physiotherapist 

Ph: chaliye ms.Suman exercises start karte h

*she makes her do all the exercises prescribed *

While leaving she says to shravan ...inme kafi improvement h...kal se kahi zyada..aj kuch hua h kya???..ye achanak jaldi chalna kyu chahti h

*suman and shravan look towards each other and smile...sumo blushes *

Shr: ji hua to h actually ise iska motivational source mil gaya h

Ph: that is very good...keep it up ms. Suman and try to walk using some support

After she leaves shravan makes sumo take her medicines and takes some rest and shravan sits on couch and after sometime doses of there itself..

In the evening preeti enters room with tea for both of them

Preeti: di. .shravan lo chai pee lo and freshen up apko exercise karni h

Sumo: par preeti itni jaldi kyu?

Preeti: vo actually kya h na mummy ki kisi close relative ki death ho gyi h to sab log vaha ja rhe h. .apko exercise kon karvaega? 

Shr: tum chinta mat karo preeti me hu na yaha. .me karvaunga isko exercise ...

Preeti says ok ..makes suman drink her tea and leaves...

Sumo: tumhe takleef lene ki kya zaroorat h shravan...

Shr: pagal ho gyi ho kya? Kya bol rhi ho? Ab jab tum meri ho gayi ho..to ye faltu ki baatein karna band kardo...me pyaar karta hu tumse or zindagi bhar tumhare saare kam karungakese bachpan me karta tha...pagal ladki..agli baar esa kich boli to pitogi

Sumo: acha sorry baba nahi bolungi...par ek correction h..Tum zindagi bhar mere sare kam nhi karoge...hum milke ek doosre k karenge ..ok Mr. Malhotra?

Shr: ok..to be Mrs. Malhotra

*sumo blushes*

Shr: mujhe pata nhi tha meri sumo wrestler itna blush bhi karti h..

*sumo whacks him*

Shr: sumo...ye dekho..tumhare haath...omg!! They are working properly.. yay..i love you sumo...

Sumo: i love you too shravan and ye sab tumhare vajah se hua h...

To be contd ...

P.s. : will try to update soon
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                             ~INDEX~
Chapter-1 pg 1 (above)

Chapter-2 pg 4

Chapter-3 pg 9

epilogue- pg 13


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Posted: 7 years ago
Superb 👏 but aage kya hoga I mean 1st chapter to bilkul Smoot tha no villain pr aage bhi esa hi rahega kya 
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Posted: 7 years ago
Very nicely written . ..this was actually one of the moments where they could have confessed . ..waiting for the next update!!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Very nicely written . ..this was actually one of the moments where they could have confessed . ..waiting for the next update!!


Thanku😊..will try to update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

Superb 👏 but aage kya hoga I mean 1st chapter to bilkul Smoot tha no villain pr aage bhi esa hi rahega kya 


Yes..i am not keeping any villian in this...this is my take on the plot so you can say it is my version of sumo's accident😆😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
How I wish, this exactly happened in the show...well-written TS...they are so cute...please continue soonish😳
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Originally posted by: dhanyata

How I wish, this exactly happened in the show...well-written TS...they are so cute...please continue soonish😳


Thanks😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks a lot to everyone for the appreciation ...will try to answer personally but if a can't pardon pls!Edited by Namiksfan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice Update.
Well written
Continue soon
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Originally posted by: Sithara.Soman

Nice Update.
Well written
Continue soon


Thanku 😊