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Posted: 7 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Hey! Main yahan pe pehli baar aayi. 🥳

I don't know how I missed this one😵
I read all chapters in one go. 

First chapter- naya topic. Sumo ne suicide karne ki koshish ki. 3 BAAR.🤔
Second chapter- really cute Flashback airport scene haan, sumo's outburst was justified. 👍🏼 But that name jeevan kashyap cracked me.
Third chapter- pehle to congratulate your sis on my behalf. Dare you forget. Yahan pe bhi ram is a dumba** . But I pitied poor sumo, poor thing. She was do happy with the declaration that shravan had made. But kismat ko kuch aur hi manzoor tha.
Chapter 4- my little hope. Little ray. Shravan ne chocolates bheji, yippee! 
Lekin god swear agar next chapter main tunne bola ki shravan ne Yeh chocolates pehle hi post kar Di thi airport se, and postal service tuk time to reach sumo, I'm gonna be killing you. *Warning luk*🥺
It eat you alive. 

Amazing progress though.🤗

Love 
Arpita


Arpi...🤗
Pehle baar aayi??Tabhi mai sochu tunne comment kaise nahi kiya...maine toh pm kiya tha...Anyways..aayi toh sahi😆
Aur aapni bullet train rook...kahi woh bhi blast na ho jaye...😃
Glad u loved it...
WARNING mai toh daar gayi...dont u worry bae...good times ahead...
Thank U sho much dea...
Luv U a lot...❤️
Love,
ANU😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#82
beautifully penned...
read all parts in one go...
amazing...
loved  it ...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: arshuaar

beautifully penned...
read all parts in one go...
amazing...
loved  it ...


Thank u so much...😳
Glad u liked it...😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#84
Hola everyone...so i am updating early than u'all expected...actually mai subah se project kar rahi thi aur aab bore hone lagi thi..toh socha ke kyu na update kar du...I have my Submission tomorrow aur subah se kar rahi hu par abhi tak sirf aadha hi hua hai...Its sooo irritating man...so enough of my babblering and here goes Chapter 5..
Enjoy...
 



FINALLY part 5

 

Sumo was totally in shock...at the bottom of the box...it was written SHRAVAN...

 

"di??Kya hua...kuch toh bolo..."

 

"Preeti ye..."

 

Sumo showed the bottom of the box which had the name SHRAVAN...

 

"Ye...Aise kaise...Pushkar..."

 

Pushkar had reached the living room till then..he was too shocked to see the name there...

 

"Bhaiya ka naam...par iss box me kaise aaya...Preeti..tum mummy(suman's mami) ko call karo na..pucho unse ke kya unhone he bhejja hai isse..."

 

Sumo was totally in shock and was unable to comprehend anything..She sinked on the sofa...

 

"Di...chinta mat kijiye..zaroor kisine mazak kiya hoga..."

 

"Aare..par aisa baddha mazak koi kyu karega...Kuch Bhi ..ainvayi..."

 

Preeti had call to maami...but maami's answer was negative...

 

"Nahi Pushkar...Mummy ne aisa koi parcel nahi bheja..."

 

"Suman...chalo mere saath..." Nirmala said and took sumo to her room...told her to sleep and came downstairs...Everyone had gathered in the living..

 

"Ye aisa mazak kisne kiya hoga..."Ramnath said

 

"Koi aisa mazak kyu karega Bhaisaab..."

 

"vahi toh mumma..koi aisa mazak kaise kar sakta hai...Shyad bhaiya ne hi..."

 

"Ye tum kya keh rahe ho Pushkar...uss blast ko 5 saal ho chuke hai...aur uss blast mey koi nahi bacha tha...toh phir Shravan kaise..." Nirmala said

 

"Lekin Badi mumma...blast se phehle toh bheja hoga toh...mai issued date check karta hu..."varun said and checked the box..

 

"Varun puttar...date kya hai..."

 

"Lalaji..date toh 2 mahine purani hai..."

 

"Aare khotya...year check kar...do mahine pehle hi toh blast ko 5 saal huye hai..."

 

"lalaji...2016 he hai..."

 

"Ye ki siyappa hai...iske do hi matlab ho sakte hai...ek toh kisine ye mazak kiya hai...ya phir humara Shravan zinda hai..."

 

"Par kamini...agar zinda hai toh usne aaj tak hume contact kyun nahi kiya...hume chodo..kabhibhi Suman ko ek baar bhi call kyu nahi kiya...koi caal nahi ..naahi koi letter email ..kuch bhi nahi..."Nirmala worried..

 

"Vahi toh Nirmala...aagar Shravan hai toh use hume kisi bhi tarah se contact karna he chahiye tha na..."

 

"Bhaisaab... aur vaise humlog ek vaat bhul rahe hai ke Shravan ke deadbody nahi mili thi vaha...toh shayad ye bhi ho sakta hai ke Shravan zinda ho... mainu toh lagta hai ke humme sab kuch rabbji par chod dena chahiye...Who job hi karte hai humari bhalaye ke liye hi hota hai... "

 

"Ha soniyo..ekdum saachi baat hai...jo hoga ..dekha jaayega...Preeti puttar..tu jaa..dekh Suman so gayi ke nahi..usse kuch khaya bhi nahi hai...Ja..zara dekh toh..."

 

"Ji papaji..."

 

Preeti went upstairs..Sumo was sitting at the bed having a picture of Shravan in her hands...

 

"Di...Aap abhi tak soye nahi...??"

 

"Preeti...Shravan kyu kar raha hai humare saath aisa..."

 

"Kya matlab di...??"

 

"Aagar who zinda hai toh phir saamne kyu nahi aa raha..kaise chocolates kyu bhej raha hai...

 

"Di..ye aap kya.." Preeti was totally confused

 

"Woh Zinda hai preeti...usne kaha tha ke who aate aate mere liye chocolates he laayega...Who zinda hai preeti...he is alive.." saying this sumo broke down..

 

"Di...aap ye kya bol rahi ho...aap please mat roiye na..."

 

"Preeti...mai issiliye khud ko khatam karna chahti hu taaki mai usske paas ja saku..."

 

"Par di aagar aap chale gaye aur Shravan vaapas aa gaya toh.." Preeti tried to take that sumo;s thought of sucide away from her mind...But that enraged her...

 

"Toh aagar woh zinda hai toh saamne kyu nahi aa raha preeti...KYU..." Sumo grabbed a vase from the table a flung it ... Hearing the commotion everyone ran upstairs...

 

"Sumo...kya hua..."Pushkar was shocked...

Sumo was throwing all the things...

 

"Pushkar..mujhe marna hai..mujhe jaana hai uske paas...mai nahi jee sakti uske bina..please jaane do mujhe..."Sumo said trying to grb the knife...

 

"Nahi Sumo...nahi ..."

 

Pushkar and preeti held her firm...Vandy brought a glass of water with sleeping tablet in it...After a lot of attempts Sumo drank the water...The sleeping pill showed its magic and sumo went in slumber... Everyone went downstairs exect vandy..she sat right there with Sumo...

 

Downstairs

 

"Bhaisaab..hume kuch toh karna he padega...iss parcel ke bare mey jaana he padega..."

 

"Par lala...hum kuch nahi kar sakte...iss waqt yahi behtar hoga ke hum sab kuch bhagwan ke marzi chood de..."

 

The Next Morning

 

"Good Morning Everyone" Sumo greeted everyone with her 100 watt smile...

 

Seeing Sumo like this after the last night's drama was shocking for everyone...

 

"Sab log mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe ho..."

 

"Kuch nahi Suman..woh hum toh baas..." Nirmala said but was cut in middle by Sumo

 

"Maa, Papa..sabko mai ek baat batana chahti hu...Mai london jaa rahi hu..."

Sumo said leaving everyone rooted at their places...

So kaisa tha???I guess it was a lill' boring..Do tell me if u liked it...Don't forget to tap the like button and leave ur feedback behind...

Love,

ANU😳

P.S:_ Constructive Criticism is most welcome

P.P.S:_ Chappals and tomatoes are most welcome..par bhulna nahi ke mai nazuk hu...😳

P.P.P.S:_ Once Again FF will be updated soon...woh story phirse delete ho gayi hai..😭so recovering will take time..

Edited by ZehriliChidiya - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#85
It's really good finally shrvn k alive hone ki news sab tk pahuchi and ek chiz galat thi yaha sab bhagwan k hath m chor dena chahiye ki jagah likha chahiye tha sab anu k hath m choti dena chahiye
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Posted: 7 years ago
#86
Tu bas shock p shock de. ...hamesha esa hi karti h😭.. chal koi ni...choti bhen samjh k maaf kiya jaldi uodate karne ki koshish kariyo...and all the best for project...yha bhi same halat h mera to project bhi h or test bhi and look at me if p bethi hu...thanks for this yar badi zaroorat thi...thanks for pm...meet u soon with your update chal bye tc 
Love,
Dolly 
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Posted: 7 years ago
#87
Abhi abhi stroke hote hote bachi hoon! Yeh kya hai... shock pe shock... Ekto assignments n projects ka pressure upar se tera yeh suspense! Jaldi update kariyo... 🥱
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Posted: 7 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

It's really good finally shrvn k alive hone ki news sab tk pahuchi and ek chiz galat thi yaha sab bhagwan k hath m chor dena chahiye ki jagah likha chahiye tha sab anu k hath m choti dena chahiye


🤣
TYSM bae...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Tu bas shock p shock de. ...hamesha esa hi karti h😭.. chal koi ni...choti bhen samjh k maaf kiya jaldi uodate karne ki koshish kariyo...and all the best for project...yha bhi same halat h mera to project bhi h or test bhi and look at me if p bethi hu...thanks for this yar badi zaroorat thi...thanks for pm...meet u soon with your update chal bye tc 

Love,
Dolly 


Oh...shorrie bae...aur mai toh hu hi teri choti bhen...😆
Tysm dolly...yaha bhi projects se bura haal hai..😵
Will update asap..
Love,
ANU😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Itssanjh

Abhi abhi stroke hote hote bachi hoon! Yeh kya hai... shock pe shock... Ekto assignments n projects ka pressure upar se tera yeh suspense! Jaldi update kariyo... 🥱


Oh Oh...dheere se bunny...Lagta hai shock treatment zyada ho gaya...🥱
Chinta mat kar good times ahead...i guess agla chappy last one hoga...😊
Lagta hai sab log ke colleges ka fuse udda hua hai...sabko assignments de rahe hai..velle log..😡
Will update asap..
Love,
Zehrili Chidiya😳