FINALLY~~ A ShraMan SS Part 7_Page 18||COMPLETED||

Hi everyone.😊..I know I know I have a big pending FF but the story which I wrote has got deleted and will take some time to recover so..😭.U'll have to wait for that...Par you all are lucky...m gonna give u this SS...Plus my college timings are changed from 7.00 to 4.30 😡so u'll get the updates like once a week...sorry par yaar college ne achanak timings kar diye hai...SORRY...so enjoy this one...👍🏼no proof read..

FINALLY

"Namaste Kashyap sahib...aaiyeye..Namaste Bhabije ..kaise hai aap..??aare Jeevan beta aao aao..."

"Namaste Ramnath..Kaise ho??Hum log bilkul theek hai...Namast Bhaibiji.."

"Namaste Kashyap sahib...Baitheye...Boliye..kya lenge aap??"

"Kuch nahi Nirmala je..Aap bas jis kaam ke liye hum aaye hai who pura kar dijiye...Hai na beta jeevan..??"

"Haa Maa..."

"Aare bilkul...Preeti..Jara Suman ko le kar aao jaldi..."

"Ji Badi ma..."

Preeti headed to sumo's room...

"Di...Darvaza kholo..."

No response..

"Di..???Kya kar rahe ho aap...Darvaza kholo na..."

No one responded..only mild sobs were heard...

"di..."

"Kya hua Preeti..."Pushkar rushed upstairs...

Everyone in the hall were tensed...

"Kya hua Pushkar??"Ramnath worried...

Preeti signaled him.."Kuch nahi sir...lagta hai darvaza Jam ho gaya hai..."

"Ha ha thik hai..Toh mai yeh kehraha tha jeevan.."

"Kya hua preeti??"

"Di darvaza nahi khol rahi..."

Pushkar pushed the door a little...It was open..They both rushed inside and closed the door..

"Di..."Preeti shouted..

"Di ...nahi please..Pushkar kuch karo...

Pushkar held Sumo while Preeti took the knife away from her hand...

"Nahi Pushkar..Chodo mujhe...Please Pushkar...Choodo mujhe..."

Preeti threw the knife away from the window...Sumo stopped wriggling...

"Sumo..Ye kya hai...Is hafte mai tumne yeh third time suicide attempt kiya hai..."

"Nahi  jeena mujhe Pushkar...Kisi aur ki ho jaane se aacha mai Shravan ke paas hi chali jaau..."

 So kaisa tha..???Hope u liked it...Don't forget to like and comment..I know its small...par itna sa he likhne ko time hai...😭

P.S:-Constructive critisizm is most welcome...

P.P.S:-Tomatoes and chapplas most welcome...Par as aleays slowly...Mail Nazuk Hu...😳

Love,

ANU😊

INDEX

PART 1 _ ABOVE

PART 2

PART 3

PART 4

PART 5

PART 6

PART 7

 
                                                       

Edited by anukulgr8 - 7 years ago

RES Edited by maddy_edkv - 7 years ago

Shravan ke paas...!!?😕

Originally posted by: maddy_edkv

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Hey sumo's 3 suicide attempts.and what happened to shravan yaar?? Oh I'm so worried. Update soon

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Woah..Suman tried to sucide..thrice 😲
n is ka kya mtlb hai Shrvan k pas chali jaon..han..dont tell me hez dead
I hope this truns up to be something good...really looking forward.
n madam ap ko chitti post karni paray go kya k do pm me whnever u post..
beta ji nxt time u better pm me or else...mera gussa buhat bura hai 😆
plz do pm me...hell excited to read ahead 😃
i very wel knw u k magic box mein dhear sara kamaal aur dhamaal hai..so plz bring it soon 😳
love u shoo much my pumpkin🤗

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SunainEdited by Sunain - 7 years ago

Sumo and suicide attempt??😲Shravan ke paas chalna  chahthi hai ??? Kyon kya hua shravan ko??? Iam a worried lot!!! So please update soon!!!!

Omg!!! Don't tell me this a shravanless story...kitta confuse kardiya bhai??😕 par koi ni we'll wait...😡 this for your college authority 😃

3rd suicide attempt?? what happened to shravan?? Update it soon! 

Originally posted by: Safire

Sumo and suicide attempt??😲Shravan ke paas chalna  chahthi hai ??? Kyon kya hua shravan ko??? Iam a worried lot!!! So please update soon!!!!

sad one huh ?! shravan ke paas jalii jaou...matlab...he is no more...is that true ?!