FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 15 - ch 40 pg1, 3parts updated(11/20)

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

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Posted: 8 years ago

#571

Originally posted by: binduprasad41
woah wonderful review adwi and mitali Di
beautifully describe

You always manage to read my reviews and comments, don't you?!😉

Thank you so much 🤗

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#572

@ Adwi

Wow! New avtar of writing post.👏 you always find a new way to write

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 8 years ago

#573

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini


You always manage to read my reviews and comments, don't you?!😉
Thank you so much🤗

how can I miss your review dear
most welcome dear
really you put great effort in your each review

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 8 years ago

#574

Originally posted by: binduprasad41
woah wonderful review adwi and mitali Di
beautifully describe

Thank you dear😊

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Durgeshnandini

@Durgeshnandini

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#575

Originally posted by: binduprasad41

how can I miss your review dear
most welcome dear
really you put great effort in your each review

Originally posted by: melovesja
@ Adwi
Wow! New avtar of writing post.👏 you always find a new way to write

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
Adwi

You all liked it 😲... Dhanya ho!!!😃

This for you all 🤗🤗🤗

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swetiii

@swetiii

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+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#576

finally commenting
but still can't get over it
blushing badly
🤣
totally out of the world chappi
such a sweet way of expressing...
just loved it
u can make even the most simple & little moments seem like the best cherished moments of life
magic of words.. that's true
it does exist

glad that 40 is your cherished number
& hope that 41,42,43 and so on..
all are your equally favourites 🤣
Ok Ok am a bit selfish her
maybe more than a bit
but what to do ..
"dil hai ki maanta nahi"

it's such a wonderful chappi that can't help but think how to describe my feelings
still I fear that would dampen the soothing coocon the chapter created

but can't help myself...
hehe
Jalal carried an experiment for judging the level of his popularity among his female employees 🤣
seriously...
that was hell amazing
all the girls were drooling his hands..
and maybe Jo was cherishing that thought that she got the honour of checking him out in his salman khan avtaar 🤣 🤣
who won't cherish that
all we can do is drool him.. as he is private property of his lady love ☺️
and its true that girls drool more than boys 🤣
then.. Jo checking his shirt button was hillerious
she dug her own grave by calling him indecent...
and then... the most DECENT boss counted her each & every though & desire of his.. though indirectly 😆
Jo completed his thoughts... wedding night 🤣
loved the new found comfort between them
now they talk of anything & everything to each other without hesitating.. including amm's seductive dressing
haha
and ofcourse aliya

Jo was making him laugh even before starting her song
ofcourse those types of instructions would make anyone roll on the ground holding his stomach
haha
oops... Jalal missed the chance of recognising the song & the reason of familiarity

rasmalia... but it too can't match the sweetness of Jalal's love 😉
perfect definition of Jalal-ish smile
☺️
Jalal got angry at Mani for making it spicy
poor lad
but he too discovered the new formula between Jalal's anger & Jodha condition 🤣

and there comes the most sexiest part of the chapter
it was so hot
"pressing her hips into him" ☺️
Jo freezed but then her cute realisisation...
loved it..
she literally surrendered herself to him
Jalal too stopped at her reaction
but perceiving her devotion he too devotedly loved her & cherished their intimacy..
taking it to highest level with decency
"drawing her into his most intimate space" ☺️
omg that was ultimate
so hot
he stopped... for her
so sweet
its the most difficult job for a guy
but he did 😃
and thanks with the interest of aftermath 😳
Hehe

5 crores... is that the reason which left her alone & threatening her life
Jalal gave a perfect name for her.. Devil in disguise of angel 🤣
Poor shashank.. In a dreamland that Raj will not know anything
"Is that far Ok" ofcourse he will say a big NO 😆

At last Jalal opened the doors of his forbidden past & speaks to her his heart out
He literally bared his soul in front of her
That requires a huge amount of trust & love in the man's heart
Known enemy 🤣
Hats off to his dad.. He is a hero..
I seriously connected the thing with my dad.. I love him
And his frnds who supported him in his worst
True frnds .. Very rare in this greedy world
Jo too opened up about her past
Gautam was a pro
Hehe
It stung when Jalal silently mourned his baby's death

Devil in disguise of angel & Greek god in disguise of human 🤣
These naughty lovers...
They even can bring out humour after so many things

Jalal fulfills all her demands and wishes
So cute 😳
Finally Jo realised what that exercise meant
🤣
Putting into bed 😆 .. With deep mehendi on her hands
Ufff how can I refrain from connecting it to wedding night
"I love u" nah... Jalal can't be so simple in proposing her
I am sure he will do it in jalal-ish style 😉

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#577

such a lovely review adwi...😳

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: Kalgi22
WOW... Really? 😲 Thanks for sharing here Diksha!! 🤗

🤗

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#579

Originally posted by: melovesja
😊

Thank you 😊

After this happening and full length chappy you deserve much more from us but I try to put a little.
in spite of you send me to their dream land and I want to savor their sweetness.
I like their understanding, what other need in that condition, How they are open up to each other , their holding of some thoughts, their emotion at right time, their naughtiness, their happiness when would be partner take care a step ahead. in tit bit you wrote how they fall for each other and that realization of other's love, thought and important in his\her in visa versa their life were so loving,touchy and feel connected to real life.

I love about PBD is of course your flawless, witty writing, in a light way show life's problem and happiness in small things. Before also I told your thought about life and relation and neatly neating of it.
He falls for her simplicity as he too a simple leaving high thinking man and again and again fall for her understanding ,her unconditional extra vague care, warmth of relation he miss.She falls for his not wordily but heartily care speaks it grows in multiplication as he gives her family back.
She knows what he go through and his financial condition and according to that she helps him in every step. he knows her loss and her condition and her coconut kind behavior and support her with keeping her self respect and protecting her from killer done everything in may we can say in dreamy manner but you smartly choose the period were they creating new world with their first love so all their care for each other feels realistic and loving, binding them by growing love and respect.
Reading her stay at their home is delight.

such a sweet poem & your review...👏👏👏