Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144

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Crazypiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#711

Originally posted by: ReebaS
Pura chapter Maine darte-2 padha hai...Thankyou piyali shrawan is safe and sound..felt bad for sumo.. Beautiful chapter dear my favourite part was sumo's mehandi..seriously sumo is very lucky..Waiting for next chapter.. Thankyou yaar baabul nd henna kuch b nhi Hua..Next chapter update asap dear..

I tokd u dont worry so much...
Dekha sab achha huya...
I have mentioned earlier its gonna be a simple love story..

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Crazypiya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#712

Originally posted by: amlavs
Wow...
Amazing amazing amazing...
U r such a talented writer yar...
In one part u r make us dance happily...next part u r giving us 1000 wala shock next making us emotional...
Wonderful...
Oh wat an intense love between ShraMan...even in drunken state he is possessive abt sumo oopsss his sumo...
Shravan accident then sumo's trauma...oh poor soul shravan how much he gone though... am loving pushkar...
I believe the PreeKar track is gonna start soon
Finally shravan came back to his sumo...
Eagerly waiting...plz plz upload soon..
Lots of love.,..,
LavSriya

Thank uu thank uu thank uuu
Thats the motyo to make u confuse..
This is all bout their love..
Ya i agreed shravan is too caring towards her.. Becoz he knows that shee is so fragile.. And he is the one who can calm her..
He will be always there for her

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pinky.padda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#713

yay

shravan is back sae and sound

so happy

continue soon

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mariajamal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#714

u were awesome piya as always. plz cont soon... next chap seems to be full of emotional n romantic

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#715

Yeh kya hai Piya... Itna emotional ke mein toh ro padi...

I couldn't take anymore. Sumo's fear when she heard about Shravan's accident... She is so fragile... So delicate Shravan has to be very careful while handling her...her love for Shravan is beyond any confession...

Shravan what I could say about this guy... When it comes about his Sumo he will make whole world upside down... When he came to know about Sumo... World is spinning around him... The care, the worry for her anybody would love to have this kind of person in their life...

About Pushkar he is such a caring friend & brother... &

Facetime calling... Pushkar teasing.. This is my mobile that's why I m here... He is laughing without making noise while Shravan asking Sumo to give afternoon kiss...

Thank God finally humari Majnu aaya apne Laila ke paas... Next episode will be more interesting...

Update soon

Thanx for the PM & for this master piece...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#716

Hi piya di. Kaise ho aap.

Itna amazing chapter diya hai duaaon se theek hi hoge. Cheesy na.

Koi baat nhin low fat hai.

Bhagwan ka thousand times shuqr hai humaare shravan ji.

Thodha concern hone ka baat bhi tha.

But ek baat batau mere dad ka naam jagmohan hai. I was like Yeh naam kyun.

Sumo ka faint hone wala part thoda rulane wala tha. Poor soul. Lekin one baat established shravan sumo ke liye sab kuch hai.

Mera favourite dialogue that.

Yeh chummachati shaam ko kar lena. Mera Virginia phone ko baksh do.

Pushkar kisi ko bhi hassa sakta hai.

Love

Arpita

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arshuaar

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Posted: 8 years ago

#717

Finally shravan came back to his sumo...

loved it...
emotional update...
...pushkar...😆
thanx for pm...😊

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Miaprincess

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Posted: 8 years ago

#718

Sooo cute!!!!! Please update soon..

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milo12345

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Posted: 8 years ago

#719

wowww...reading chapter and crying like anything. ...plzzz next upadte...cant wait...For long time..ur all chp are amazing...plzzz continue. .and one request plzzz do not end this soon plzzz ...keep writing.plzzz