Shraman ff: HUM TUM part 27(updated on page 144 - Page 106

Originally posted by: Nik03

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Originally posted by: pritiyerne

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Hey piya it was nice update, its true ppl like MRS verma exists in society, they will do only jale pe nanamak dhidakana, waiting for next update😊

Originally posted by: srividyasubbu1

Piya. You stole my words. Yes there are people in this society who do not leave a chance to belittle others. Even though they have their own problems. Everybdy needs to understand tht traditions are there to bring people together and be happy. But we human beings follow one proverb correctly tht is human is to err so keep on making mistakes. Beautifully written. Hats off. But yeah a very late update from you. Hmmm.

- Sri

Originally posted by: adityasingh.246

Yess.. Finally an update ..😊

Read it on wattpad already but thought to comment here this time ..

I just love their sweet talk , reminiscing childhood , Sumo feeling guilty for Shravan's stay away .. but jata ni toh miss kaise karta aur fir saiyaan na ki bhaiya kaise banta ..😉Liked it how he explains her that though distant,he only had her thoughts,her memories in his mind & heart .. And bang ! Feisty Sumo is der .. Possessive .. challanging his hubby to show how good kisser she is .. Doesn't know Mr malhotra will not forget her words and she is in romantic trouble now ..😆Naughty Shravan is a force to reckon with and he never leaves a chance to make her blush ..& he's a lawyer too,started practicing his skills in their room too,but I loved it how he's making her comfortable and giving her all the love to become stable , he'll wait for her ..👏

Oh god ! the teasing session .. poor Sumo and her new obsession with blue ..🤪The moment between Ria & Sumo was heart touching and so cute,she really needs friendly warmth to overcome all her worries.. Pushkar - Sumo relationship is really lovely , so pure and comfortable , no wonder she need not worry to make friends outside family .. he forgot that she's also his bhabhi .. hahaha .. and she wud have his samosa .. 😆lil moments of fun ..

How nicely u have put her emotions to words .. her feelings of becoming a Malhotra from Tiwari ..👏

And I knew this wud happen surely coz no matter what some ppl never fail to show how ruthless and stupid they are & definitely they can't see the underlying beauty & goodness ; they have to make the girl feel more terrible , to remind her of that harsh incident again and again,to make her feel responsible for whatever happened with her & don't let her become normal and not let her overcome her miseries .. this is the society that inflicts pain more no of times than the real pain ..

But the best part was her own friends did oppose her .. also I loved how Pushkar rubbed the truth on her face , how nicely he defended her & showed her worth .. Ramnath's fury was unmatched..the father in him was visible today .. & poor nirmala & kamini had to bear all his anger .. happy event turned into disaster .. but its awesome to see such a loving family ..

U have put forth Sumo's predicament so nicely,her conflict between choosing her old life or the new happiness .. And how Shravan turned her towards new life👏How wonderfully Mr lawyer Malhotra dealt with situation was awesome , consoling her & taking her out of panic mode .. Dream to be hubby he is🤗I like how u change scenes from intense to light .. their cute banter ..And yes jealous Shravan wants to know about Satyajit , waise we want to know too ..

The trip gonna be interesting .. farmhouse ..😉

update asap ..❤️🤗thanku for such a wonderful update ..

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Sorry for late comment I read it on wattpad as soon as you posted last night but in IF u didn't so couldn't comment...

1st part really beautiful Shravan & Sumo were so happy happy but during muh dikhayi ceremony spoiled everything... Mrs Verma same like her son Satyajit Verma who was slapped by Shravan in the show...😆.. Our society is surrounded by this kind of people can't help it... Sumo once again felt same torture of her past but Shravan is there to bring her out from all the problems so no worries... Ramnath is a bestest father of the world he is more concern about her than anybody @ home after Shravan...

Next chap is in Dhaba is so romance is on the way again...😉

Outside raining inside 2 newly wedded couple...

Thanx for PM & Nice update

Vinu

Originally posted by: Harshi_ta

Firstly di iwanna asked something🥱 u said in pm that if we like update than give our comments also but what we will do when we love this update?????? 😳I'm fully confused

And next time plz clear it 😡is bar to m comment kr rhi hu😊

That part is really superb👏 thoda thoda romance😳 Shrman ka choti si cute si fight bhi😆 phir teasing and all phir my favorite part PUSHKAR😆😃 bhukhi bhabhi🤣, dekh ma ko bhi tujh p bharosa nhi h🤣🤣🤣 ohhh god. And than rasam begin 😛or mrs veram😡 but acha hi hua bcz baad m Koi Sumo ko kuch kehta or uski family sath m nhi hoti to vo sambhal nhi pata🥱😕 sahi time p ye sab hua ab aahe ye sari baate sumo ko itna affect nhi karungi😊. Or ramnath ka gussa 😲ab samjh m aya shrvn m gussa kaha se aaya😆 and nanimumma 🥳ka vo dialogue 'tumhare Jane k baad foot foot p ongi' but kuch bhi kaho Sumo k samne bhiga billi ban jate h ramnath 😆hwww I just loved it🤗

Originally posted by: Tiii28

Finally we get a upday yeee
Coming to an update its mindblowing showing concern shravan 😳
Plz update soon
Eagerly waitings for your update 😊