Hi dear...
Thnks for posting the story..
Nice story, for sure a different plot and ambience for the story.
You have written so well about the comman man view of such a place through Ram and in actual how
the life of them is and their inner turmoils and emotions of them through priya.
An emotional one at the begining...it had good hard hitting dialogues too... i luved and remembered them.. the dialogues frm priya, tht love being the costliest them in their world, she being passionate for freedom, amma telling, i culd give u sleep but not dreams... all those initial parts that explain their state and place, the kids fate over there and priya's state surely moistened the eyes...
Then gradually Ram understanding priya and wishing good for her, their friendhip, working together and finally priya falling in love with him but culdnt express due to her fate, her emotional confession infront of camera all were good. Her confession was too emotional...
Inside of just being out to out luv story , it had a revenge plot from ranjeet, who on mission to spoil innocent priya just to get his revenge frm amma with kaustaubh in pic, amita actually who was reason for all this again planning against just for selfishness... these two crossed the border of being selfish and finally going to spoil priya's life..
Hope Ram and amma able to do something to save priya and tht nothing happens such tht amma's trust on ram broke and mk it difficult for priya...
Well written story with all characters hving their importance, be it amma, santhosh or priya's friend, rohan and all main characters are written well...
Poor priya, without knowing anything, in dream of ram proposing her waiting in tht room, what future awaits is to be seen, and now knowing priya luves him and being he himself placed her in tht hotel, hw ram gonna handle it, whts amma's reaction, kaustaubh past and priya's past hw will be revealed, wht is jagdish upto...
I am eager to read all this... waiting for next update...
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