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Loved part 32, 33 and 34👏
Anticipation and test of the new purchase😉
Eager for the next part😃
Originally posted by: archnahardik123
Their compatibility is amazing. They didn't even know how well they complete each other.
Finally they are out of this secret. Both made mistakes in hiding truth, no matter what there reasons were. But this temporary hate could not stand chance infront of this enormous love they carry in their heart for each other. Love always wins.It's good they both accept their faults and carry on.Arnav's words of not stop loving him touched my heart. He didn't know she is not capable of not loving him.Their sensual and passionate love making was beautifully written.Maya did you make some changes in last few episodes? Like Arnav did say sorry in his own way in restaurant.Thanks for updating.
Originally posted by: sunitikapoor
I just love your writing dear...all three chapters are good mix of pure love and spicy too. You choose a fabulous plot for this story.
Your Arnav is such a cutie pie with his action and talks. He always ask her to strip😳...ummmhhh...can't it be vice-versa. You are so awesome with Arnav's character...never miss a single detail on how he react or speak.They both made for each other.
A luscious triple update and that was superb! Arnav and Khushi finding their own equation, the debate between the controller and the controlled, the predator and the prey, and who overpowers whom continues. They are true equals in this relationship, their commitment to each other complete and beautiful in all the ways that matter. The scenes at the lingerie so shop were a revelation of the extent to which the patient and in love Arnav Singh Raizada could go to ensure the happiness of the woman he loved. A word here about the amazing Aman...truly a paranormal ability to anticipate ASR's every need and have things done ahead of time. Fabulous progression here. Cannot wait to see how Arnav and Khushi help Anjali overcome Shyam's exit from her life and how they go about executing that exit now based on Mr Chopra's evidence.
DittoOriginally posted by: IdioTinTin.
Wow. Nowdays am so out of words not knowing how to praise this immense talent of your writing in a deserving manner. Because even words like amazing, briliant etc are nothing compared to your skill.
Sensual updates with a bold and yet characteristic Khushi. She is so herself over the day but once inside the bedroom, she's a complete lover to him in everyway.Glad that they sorted the matter with Shyam, so Khushi needn't worry everytime that snake sneaks to her to destroy her peace of mind. Happy that Arnav has planned to reveal the truth and save Anjali and her child from that snake.Looking forward for more. Thanks a lot for multiple updates in your threads. 🤗
you have written very crisp ,short dialogues for Arnav as they go very well with character...4 Lions may have created the characters,but writers like you have life in to them...
Everything is beautifully written...Finally khushi would breathe as no longer Shyam is a hindrance to their relation...
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