ShraMan OS: Desire - Page 4 | Ek Duje Ke Vaaste

mineforever

@mineforever

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 7 years ago

This was freaking brilliant.. 😃
I could feel their desire for each other..How I wish they would show this type of romance in the show..

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1088010

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Anjali darling plz plz iska ek aur part likh de

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pinky.padda

@pinky.padda

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

#33

oh my god
that was hot
wow I have totally
got goosebumps reading his
amazing

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Mrina

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 12

Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Oh my god! That was super hot Anji..

Sumo's turmoil was so amazingly worded and then the teasing session while the ladies were getting their mehendi done was adorable. 😳

And then came that kitchen scene which blew my mind.. GAH... They are so adorbs. 😳

Shravan Malhotra was leaning against the wall smirking at her. And at that moment Suman Tiwari realized that she was done for, Shravan had figured out her weakness and she knew he would use it against her.

*sighs* ☺️

Please write a part 2.. 😳

~ Mrina <3

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Adeeba

@Aadee04

Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

#35

You have no idea how much your message and writing makes me <3

This was so amazing to read . :)

-God bless

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arshi21

@arshi21

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Sigh. I want this so badly in real. Beautiful OS

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1091715

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Phenomenal OS! Your OS gets my spirits back up whenever the episodes fail to deliver 😃

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Aileen

@Belly_Button

Groupbie

Posted: 7 years ago

#38

I can't stop blushing and thinking of ways this could be true.

Aileen❤️

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kiko2310

@kiko2310

Groupbie

Posted: 7 years ago

#39

very nice

thanks for writing

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

#40

This is so good.
Loved the dance sequence description, then the kitchen encounter.
Imagining them nd even more.

Grt work.

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