Kerim Fatmagul: My poetry world: updtd on pg. 7

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Merhaba guys 🤗

From a very long time I was waiting for a show which would really stimulate my poetry cells 😆 and Fatmagul did wonders 👏
After the OS series it has given me an opportunity to present my poetries (rather sharayis cz I end up writing hindi most of the times 😆. Non hindi readers apologies for this 😳) 

I hope you all will enjoy this journey with me 😛 as always 😉. If you have any suggestions or requests do let me know. For that you need to press like and use something called as comment box. Silent readers strictly not entertained 😛. Writing needs a lot of efforts so I really would appreciate if you all put your very kind, kind and not so kind words in the comments 😉. 

FEEL FREE TO APPRECIATE AND CRITICIZE. 

Tamatars, eggs, joote, chappals and anything will be accepted graciously 😃

Tesekkur ederim!!!! 

Regards, 
DD 

INDEX 

#1- P.1
#2- P.4
#3- P.5
#4- P.7 
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Posted: 7 years ago
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KERIM FATMA #1 

Khade hai kuch aise 
Parchayi jaise 
Ajnabi hai kuch aise
Shamma parwane jaise 

Mile beech mazdaar hai
Na milna chahte the Kabhi
Phir bhi mil gaye jaise 
Paani mein paani 

Manzil alag thi humari
Par duniya zaalim nikli 
Chalna chahte nahi saath 
Par raasta ek ban raha hai 

Haath thaama toh nahi hai
Par tumhare kho jaane ka darr hai
Kuch hai toh nahi tumse 
Par kuch banta ja raha hai 

Nazron ke saamne chahta Tumhe 
Par nazrein mila na pau tujhse 
Tera deedar hi kaafi hai 
Par uss me bhi nafrat ka aaina hai 

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Aha.
I too can share my Hindi work along with yours now.
Lol
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Draco_Elt

Aha.
I too can share my Hindi work along with yours now.
Lol


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Draco_Elt

Hope you dont mind lol


Why would  I? 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Senoritaamor

Amazing work dear 👏 👏


Thank you 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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My pleasure 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautifully written...i loved the line hath thama nahin...kho dene ka dar hai😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Signorina--

Beautifully written...i loved the line hath thama nahin...kho dene ka dar hai😳


Thank you 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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