Kerim Fatmagul: My poetry world: updtd on pg. 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: daydreamers

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Lovely Feelings on Kerim and Fatma Jhanvi. 👏

You have described their feelings, pain and dilemma beautifully. ❤️

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x
Lovely Feelings on Kerim and Fatma Jhanvi. 👏
You have described their feelings, pain and dilemma beautifully. ❤️

Thank u 😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: iamsania01
Beautiful 👏 ❤️

Thank u 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: SaraFatma
Excellent I loved it!!!!

Thank u Sara 😛

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later.Edited by NavyaKavya30 - 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: crazygul
no one shots.

What??? 😆

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Originally posted by: crazygul
one shots means short stories.

I know that. 😆

What do you want to ask or tell? I didn't get u dear 😆

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Posted: 7 years ago

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KERIM FATMA #2

Dil ko jakda tha maine

Inn baahon mein apne

Socha kahi fisal na jaye

Tujh par ye

Pehli dafa dekha tujhe

Bheege se aalam mein

Takraya dobara par

Koi aur tha dil mein tere

Hua kuch anchaaha aisa

Dil dehlaane jaisa

Yaad na mujhe kuch hai

Par tujhe sataane ka dukh hai

Aj mile hai hum phir

Anjaane mahaul mein

Baithi hai tu iss oar

Mein taaku tujhe durr se

Tu Ayi hai ek darkhwast liye

Kaise batau hai na tere kaabil vo

Pyaar tera hai par nafrat uski hai

Samajh jaye tu meri khwaish hai

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Posted: 7 years ago

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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4671309

For those who have missed the one shots on kerim Fatmagul u will find the thread at the above link in Writers corner.

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