Kerim Fatmagul: My poetry world: updtd on pg. 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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#12
Lovely Feelings on Kerim and Fatma Jhanvi. πŸ‘
You have described their feelings, pain and dilemma beautifully. ❀️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x

Lovely Feelings on Kerim and Fatma Jhanvi. πŸ‘

You have described their feelings, pain and dilemma beautifully. ❀️


Thank u πŸ˜ƒ
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Originally posted by: iamsania01

Beautiful πŸ‘ ❀️


Thank u 😳
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Originally posted by: SaraFatma

Excellent I loved it!!!!


Thank u Sara πŸ˜›
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What??? πŸ˜†

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Originally posted by: crazygul

one shots means short stories.


I know that. πŸ˜†


What do you want to ask or tell? I didn't get u dear πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
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KERIM FATMA #2

Dil ko jakda tha maine
Inn baahon mein apne
Socha kahi fisal na jaye
Tujh par ye

Pehli dafa dekha tujhe
Bheege se aalam mein
Takraya dobara par
Koi aur tha dil mein tere

Hua kuch anchaaha aisa
Dil dehlaane jaisa
Yaad na mujhe kuch hai
Par tujhe sataane ka dukh hai

Aj mile hai hum phir
Anjaane mahaul mein
Baithi hai tu iss oar
Mein taaku tujhe durr se

Tu Ayi hai ek darkhwast liye
Kaise batau hai na tere kaabil vo
Pyaar tera hai par nafrat uski hai
Samajh jaye tu meri khwaish hai

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Posted: 8 years ago
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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4671309

For those who have missed the one shots on kerim Fatmagul u will find the thread at the above link in Writers corner.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Every word is so apt suiting Farim ❀️
Very romantic dear 😳
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