Kerim Fatmagul: My poetry world: updtd on pg. 7 - Page 5

Anamta

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: daydreamers

Thanx😃🤗

My pleasure 🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Lovely poetry!!! Love Kerim Fatmagul :))

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Originally posted by: .KingSlayer
Lovely poetry!!! Love Kerim Fatmagul :))

Thank u 😃

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Posted: 7 years ago

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KERIM FATMA #4

Baras bhi ja

Aye baadal Zara

Tuze dekhu toh

Dikhta andhera waha

Dil ke armaan

Bujh gaye hai

Sang apne aansu

Bhi le gaye hai

Sawan bhi sukha

Laage hai mujhko

Ghana tera saaya

Darata hai mujhko

Baras bhi ja

Aye baadal zara

Taqdeer meri tu

Likh ja Zara

Roshni hai khafa

Mujhse thoda

Tu nibha itna sa

Saath mera

Socha na jiska

Thama hai uska

Haath andhere mein

Aisa piya

Baras bhi ja

Aye baadal zara

Tarsa na ab

Ek pal bhi Zara

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Posted: 7 years ago

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first of i must say that you are very talented and have a way with words. this is very poetic and it sounds very poignant and heart touching too.

like a plea of a broken heart which is suffering yet also is very hopeful and optimistic.

i like it alot and have read it like more than 10 times by now lool.

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Thank you so much Sara 😳 Cud'nt help posting it after FG's first meet with the psychiatrist. It was 😭

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Beautiful. ❤️

And I really can't think of anymore words for this piece of poetic beauty! 👏

Jhanvi, I'm really waiting for my KF OS and the one I have requested! 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: MohabbatGirl.x
Beautiful. ❤️
And I really can't think of anymore words for this piece of poetic beauty! 👏

Jhanvi, I'm really waiting for my KF OS and the one I have requested! 😳

Thank you..

Yes yes Shanaya. Am working on it.. Once its final I'll post. Am yet not sure of the idea so its taking time.

Check ur pm 😳

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DefLeppard

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: daydreamers

Baras bhi ja
Aye baadal zara
Taqdeer meri tu
Likh ja Zara

Roshni hai khafa
Mujhse thoda
Tu nibha itna sa
Saath mera

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Awesome stuff.

The quote are the best lines for me.

Their destiny(Taqdeer) and hope(Roshni) is in tandem.

Dummy did write on this destiny/hope concept in her blabbering.

Edited by DefLeppard - 7 years ago