RES😊
Areeba this was so beautifully written. Even the little things like Anitas dressing style was perfectly described. I could actually imagine her in her over the top clothes in scorching heat.😆Twinkle got rid of the 49th Guy. The girl is totally pagal😆I loved how you described Manohar Sarnas undying bharosa on guruji and gurujis advices are so pro twinj 😳.Looking forward to the next part. Do update soon😃
Originally posted by: Tranquility123
Okay for some reason, I was under the impression that you'd carry on the story from where we left off on TEI but OMG IM SO HAPPY TO KNOW THAT THIS IS A BASICALLY A RE-TELLING
So much nostalgia bruh, I cant. Old TEI feels hit me hard. I feel like I'm reading the book to the show and as a book lover, I'm already loving this so much! The descriptions are perfect, the visualisation is great. You need to update soon because Im one of those people that likes to finish books within the day so the waits are going to kill me but I know it'll be worth it!I couldn't have asked for a better person to write this for me Areeba, you are bae 😎
Areeba nice first chapter. The characters r purely intact as they were in serial. I laughed a lot when sunny and twinkle met. I mean hot body and butter chicken.
Waiting for kunj's entry. Hope u continue soon. Thanks for pm. Areeba this was pure treat.
Areeba,At first Thank u for BR & PM.
I was really waiting for ur FF.& Yipeee my wait is over.Uff u bring me in recalling zone dear and I have no hassle to repeating the line again and again that "WOH KYA DIN THE".Sigh!And Now about the story,before the fangirling of any couple i always relish the bonding between mother-daughter and then Twinkle's Siyappa with lots of drama obviously.I always admire your detailing either in charecterisation or in nearby.And yes you specially mentioned to our weakness i. e.Manohar's eyebrows.😆Now i am eagerly waiting for next update."HERO KE ENTRY ABHI BAKI HAI MERE DOST"😊Lovee u.Take Care & enjoy your trip.
Originally posted by: .Anisha.
Loved the first chappy Areeba 😳
Amazingly written
Cant wait for Kunj's entry
Update soon
Thanks for the PM
Originally posted by: MaliciousAngel
Areeba finally you updated!
I was gonna send you a pm to update thisResDude, i'm like galf way throught it and this is exceeds my expectation for sure
Originally posted by: areeba_blossom
Waise if you read closely in, hero ki entry already ho chuki hai. 😉Awe dude thank you i haven't written properly in a long while so the detailing is always abrupt imo and i wasn't really satisfied with the update but still updated because yu guys wasted so long since i put up the prologue.LOL Manohar's eyebrows!! 😆Thanks dude!
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