ShraMan OS: Every Step of the Way - Page 3

Riya

@Ri21

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

to be frank i had tears while reading

dude u are just amazing

keep writing more yaar

really made my day

wish something like this happens

coz i really want to see that both of them had faults

not one
and the best part was of pushkar's

that adorable thing mumbling please ignore me
LOL
❤️

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Maisha59

@Maisha59

Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Pls continue this.
I just love your writing 👏
Hope something like this happens in the show 😳

Pls include about sumo's marriage and shravan's reaction regarding it

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Woww gall

hope something like this happens in the show as well😳

well written❤️

loveedd ttt😊

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Sarcy

@Sarcy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

I think it's good that you can't stop writing once you start with these two because we get such lovely reads!

It takes two to tango so I'm glad that you showed it to be both his parents' fault.
As to Shravan, his anguish and pain was beautifully portrayed and Sumo's unflinching presence by his side, priceless!

The fact that everyone can see that between these two which Shravan refuses to see proves that they're both head over heels for each other.

Finally, Pushkar's perceptiveness! He is the guy!

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Wow.. this was beautiful Anjali..👏

Would love to see something like this actually happening.

Shravan really needs to know what actually happened all those years ago.

That it was not just his mom's fault. Both his dad and mom were equally responsible for whatever happened.

Loved how you incorporated that long overdue apology, which we all wanted to see on screen, but never happened, in here.

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PrincessAshVik

@PrincessAshVik

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Pg 3Edited by PrincessAshVik - 7 years ago

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Frosty_Moon

@Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Amazing..superb..beautifully written..
Sumo supporting shra at every step and shra holding her hand that was so beautiful..
Pushkar ah is cutipie..please just ignore me that was so funny..but this guy is big support for both of them ..love him..
Sumo apology was required..that was so good..
Beautiful OS dear..❤️..
Thnx for pm dear..

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thefangirllife

@thefangirllife

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

RES MERI JAAAN

I read it on the go and loved it, will be back to give you a proper lambi waali comment, I love you yaar, keep writing and making me happy :)

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astonm

@astonm

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: -Sarcy-
I think it's good that you can't stop writing once you start with these two because we get such lovely reads!

It takes two to tango so I'm glad that you showed it to be both his parents' fault.
As to Shravan, his anguish and pain was beautifully portrayed and Sumo's unflinching presence by his side, priceless!

The fact that everyone can see that between these two which Shravan refuses to see proves that they're both head over heels for each other.

Finally, Pushkar's perceptiveness! He is the guy!

Awww thanks! PUSHKAR IS BAEEE. He's like literally my representative in each story, I love him <3

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canoodle

@canoodle

Groupbie

Posted: 7 years ago

#30

You kill me with your words. This is so beautifully painful that it made me tear up, this is what I need to happen in the show. You should totally just start script writing Anjali.

-Meera

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