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Posted: 10 years ago

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Kritika Pawle

@FangirlForever

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Posted: 10 years ago

Me first Res

Anjalii *hugs*
This was awesome loved how you write their feelings ❤️

Also Pushkar "Please Just ignore me" 😆
Thanks for that apology from Sumo its long due now 😆

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Keep writing so that I can keep beating Sanni 😉

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Sanika

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Posted: 10 years ago

res res res 😆
Unres.
Thank you! For two things.
I wanted an apology from Suman for so longs, I am starting to feel it is overdue.
And for showing that it was the fault of both the parties, the blame could not be placed onone's shoulder. After all, it takes two to clap.
I love the portrayal of Shravan's anguish, and how Sumo was there, every step of the way.
I also liked that you did not feel the need to show a confession here, the underlying tone was understood and for the moment, friendship was enough.
Also, "Please, just ignore me." Pushkar mumbles. 🤣

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Sanika

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: FangirlForever
Me first Res

dammit. -.- you were supposed to be reading chambers🥱

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Kritika Pawle

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -AvadaKedavra-

dammit. -.- you were supposed to be reading chambers🥱

🤣

Don't question my stalking skills 😉

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mineforever

@mineforever

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Posted: 10 years ago

So beautifully penned down. 😊
I really wish that something like this would happen in the show..
I could feel each and every emotion of Shravan and the pain he went through..
Thanks for the PM 😊

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sapphire3

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Posted: 10 years ago

Beautifully written ...I can imagine everything playing right in front of me...I literally cried reading this os..words aren't sufficient to appreciate this master piece. I loved it. N wish something similar to this one happens in the show ...
Hats off 👏

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Shikha Singhania

@Nimik

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Posted: 10 years ago

Simply mind blowing!

Can't even express my feeling in words!

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

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Posted: 10 years ago

Every emotion was beautifully written
Shravan's pain with Suman by his side everything will be alright
Finally Shravan knows the truth
You are an amazing awesome brilliant writer
I just love reading your work
I think you should write a ff too
Keep writing more
And thank you for the pm

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orion23

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Oh my word!!

Isn't this a masterpiece!👏

Anjali you are too good🤗

I just love your writing! And I sure as he'll hope this happens ..

I like how you showed that both Ramnath and Nirmala wrong instead of one of them taking the blame.. makes it all the more enduring..

With Sumo, Shravan will be all right.. and I can't wait for the two of them to give in and wholeheartedly be there for each other every step of the way!

Thanks for the PM.. Can't wait to read your next!

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