Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august) - Page 92

krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Goldie

Posted: 6 years ago

#911

Lucky darling...

If such soul stirring and heart touching words could kill...I'm dead already...how can u write so brilliantly. ..it was pure magical...

Right from Swara's apprehension for sanky's proposal...Dp's much awaited reaction to swara's confessions...and lastly my most favourite swasan proposal...it was outclass...just made my day...

You left me speechless...I just loved how sanky convinced swara after her hesitation to say yes...those conversation was amazingly penned...

How much I appreciate this tale it is less...lucky i want to see swara's family too...after all they also wanted to spend time with their dying daughter...plzzz add their scene too...

Eager for more..

Love u

Talia

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#912

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
Me and mine - Will get back 😊

And she said yes, which is what I wanted, she said yes...yes and yes.

The honest truthful conversation as to why she first said no, was just so natural, from both of them, her fears of wanting too much, her worry that in her "greed" of taking all his love, she would only hurt him and her fear that she was being selfish. And balanced by his declaration that wanting to be with her, as friend, confidant, lover and husband was him being selfish, for he could not bear being away from her, he did not just love her, he needed to love her as much as one needs air to breathe, as simply and as truly as that.

It gave her the strength she needed, to address both her fears and the doubt placed by DP - it shook him up, did it not. So would there his and Annapurna's blessings?

(And when he recalls her saying - Aise pyar ke samne ne toh Bhagwan bhi jukh jaye - a hint for a happy ending??)

And under the starry skies, with their hearts as witness they pledged themselves to each other. A simple band and a tiny stone, but enough to bind them for eternity. ❤️

It was amazing and now eager to know more😊

love,

Nyna

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#913

Originally posted by: lucky.m

@ Nynu🤗🤗

One or two parts to go ..Max and I am gonna miss this story too😕 very badly

Take your time .. Will wait

Love
Lucky

I will miss this too, but then it is always there for me to go back and re read😊

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#914

@ Nynu and Talia🤗🤗

😳 Will need more time to revert on your lovely comments .. severe time crunch and gonna be on and off IF for next few days ... and need to start working on final part too .. I am jsut trying to suqqeze some time ..

Love

Lucky

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#915

Originally posted by: lucky.m
@ Nynu and Talia🤗🤗
😳 Will need more time to revert on your lovely comments .. severe time crunch and gonna be on and off IF for next few days ... and need to start working on final part too .. I am jsut trying to suqqeze some time ..

Love
Lucky

Take all the time, even though that is what you seem to be running short of. And do be prepared for DOTW#3, I will put up sometime tomorrow - I have the topic decided, I think you would like it. Also planning to pm the DOTW members, so you would know.

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Madhushani

@StardustBliss

Newbie

Posted: 6 years ago

#916

Wow! You made me go through millions of emotions in this one update.. And I loved every bit of it.. ❤️ ❤️
Especially that whole proposal scene.. It was so romantic.. Dreamy..
Tremendous work dear. Loved it. 👏

PS: Hey dear, I'm not new to your stories.. My old account is 'Eranga'.. Can you please send your PMs about your work to this account from now onwards..
😊 😊

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 6 years ago

#917

Hello all...Final Part updated . Pm's on its way . happy redaing and do let me know your thoughts.😊

Love

Lucky

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#918

Sneha and Eranga

Thanks a lot 😛🤗 Will reply in detail sometime tomorrow .

Love

Lucky

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#919

Res - for once spending time on uploading tax returns is instantaneously remunerative. Just finished, logged in here and rewarded with the chapter.

Will read and get back.

love,

Nyna

Had to let you know - that was one amazing, lovey dovey chapter and with a hope of a "happily ever after". But now, not to put words in your "mouth" or rather pen😉 it was very soothing to read about them, the fact that they did have a life together, a beautiful union and culmination of most of their dreams, of love, togetherness, a joy of becoming one with the person they love more than anything else, of seeing their parents's happiness- somehow, it fill you with a strange elation and as a reader I can feel the completeness that they felt.

Now even though you have still not cleared the path to the "happily ever after" , it seems alright - I am not sure if you understand what I am trying to say - not enough sleep so I think it is the sleep deprivation writing.

Anyway, I will be back with a detailed and coherent reply.

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 6 years ago

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phoenix27

@phoenix27

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 6 years ago

#920

Hawww lucky it was so beautiful. finally, their dream came true. finally, they got what they longed for and so deserved, finally a beautiful start of the story :)

Love

Ria

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