Swasan -FF - Fanaa ~ Destroyed In love ~ Epilogue- Pg 85 ( 5th august) - Page 90

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Posted: 6 years ago
Dear Lucky,
Keeping it short, had a migraine and feeling very sleepy but had to read and let you know. Annapurna's apprehensions regarding them moving in together, DP trying to purchase Sanskaar, Swara being honest and not hiding it from Sanskaar (a little unusual, but since this not the serial, it is appropriate) and Sanskaar's proposal - beautiful even if expected. 

Though I have a small suspicion, if DP had not given a blank cheque would Sanskaar have proposed so soon or waited for a couple of days / weeks?

Will be back for a detailed revert.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Lucky,

Keeping it short, had a migraine and feeling very sleepy but had to read and let you know. Annapurna's apprehensions regarding them moving in together, DP trying to purchase Sanskaar, Swara being honest and not hiding it from Sanskaar (a little unusual, but since this not the serial, it is appropriate) and Sanskaar's proposal - beautiful even if expected. 

Though I have a small suspicion, if DP had not given a blank cheque would Sanskaar have proposed so soon or waited for a couple of days / weeks?

Will be back for a detailed revert.

love,
Nyna


Nynu🤗 .. Please take care of your health .. hope you will feel better by morning .You should be sleeping by now ..and I wanted Swara to be honest ..not go in usual way.

Sanskaar had proposal in mind, thought not that night .He is abos**tely sure he wants to get married to Swara . but Dps cheque had pushed him further not to delay it any more . He would have definitely waited and gone for may be a nice proposal , a dreamy one but This proposal was needed to push story further . .if you noted   he still didn't get the acceptance.😕

Love
Lucky
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Posted: 6 years ago
Ome lucky diii atlast the awaited line "marry me"... Yieee i m so excited...
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Posted: 6 years ago
Dearest Lucky,

I don't know if I would ever be able to unres those posts in 'Untamed'. But trying to catch up with Fanaa.

Chapter 20, bookmark that. AHH!❤️ Finally those golden words. "Marry me". I was waiting for this moment, as much as Swasan. Given the short span of time they have, they deserve to have as much as magical moments together, most blissful experiences they could have.

Truly, family make you, family break you. Where Annapurna had been the source of strength for his son, even if she was not near her son in literal sense. Whereas Durgaprasad was watching him everyday, but his lack of support even downright hostility was taking him far away from him.

I'm happy Swara didn't hide anything this time. With fear of separation, all she wanted was Sanskar. When apocalypse is near, then people tend to trust and hold the loved ones never before. for Swasan love is defined million folds compared to the other couple. I can't even imagine the feeling.

Like Swara I'm worried about Sanskar. What would happen when she'll not be there?

I won't compliment you anymore. I think I'm getting repeatative. Will have to keep soome for your other stories.

love,
Dyuti

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Posted: 6 years ago
how can you manage it I mean every part making me fall for this story more and more... It's so good.. I always have lack of words to say how much beautifully this you protraying this story till now... I never regret visiting if just for fanaa and know till you're on If I'll be also here just for reading your all stories
Wow marriage I hope marriage part come soon ...
Ups first time such long comments I written here...
Update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky.m


Nynu🤗 .. Please take care of your health .. hope you will feel better by morning .You should be sleeping by now ..and I wanted Swara to be honest ..not go in usual way.

Sanskaar had proposal in mind, thought not that night .He is abos**tely sure he wants to get married to Swara . but Dps cheque had pushed him further not to delay it any more . He would have definitely waited and gone for may be a nice proposal , a dreamy one but This proposal was needed to push story further . .if you noted   he still didn't get the acceptance.😕

Love
Lucky


I am a great fan of honesty, at least to a good extent (My FM seems to have nobody being honest with anybody😆)

I was sure Sanskaar would have had a proposal in mind, but doing it that day was definitely prompted by his Dad's stupid antics. And regarding Swara not saying yes, she would have hesitated even if he had made the perfect proposal, so Sunny would have to convince her even if it had been a lovely planned proposal. 

But I somehow, like these spontaneous ones, at least in the case of Sunny, they are reflective of the depth of his intention. And that gives me another topic for our DOTW idea.

Coming back to this update, what I love about this tale is that despite the ominous possible ending always looming in the background, threatening to make all of us cry, it also shines with optimism and hope. And you say you are going to finish it off in a few chapters, I am going to miss this story.

But then it is here, so I can always come back to read.

love,
Nyna
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Posted: 6 years ago
Beautiful update lucky
I already let u know in wattpad.
I liked that swara not misinterpreted her & dp conversation to sanskar or not hide the cheque thing sanskar reaction was expected after knowing cheque thing like he said now mera prize bhi tay ki ja rahi hai.
Sanskar proposal for marriage I know he may fear his father will do something again that's why this hasty decision hope koi gadbad na ho.

Bye
valo thako bandhu (In Bangla ).
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Posted: 6 years ago
Lucky..dear
I'm late...sorry

Chapter 19 and 20 were marvellous ...I just cherished these chapters...swasan soothing and pure love for each other...gosh all those moments left me awed...world is desperately awaiting men like sanky..aahhh..i just adore him..his unconditional love...swara is making up for the lost time by reciprocating her feeling..showing her affection to him ..

Dp and sanky confrontation was out class...annu did right...Dp should break his ego and stubbornness. ..for his son's happiness. ..sanky leaving house and maheswari name was nice twist...
my Sanky is very sanskaarI here..was not in favour of living together with swara...asankaari too, leaving no moment in kissing her...hehehe...swara is desperate to spend most time with him..that her last wish...to spend quality time with him...

I hated DP's low move...but shona will handled him.I'm sure...my most favourite part when sanky asked to get married..I was crying out of joy..right now too I'm tear eyed...waiting for next part dear...

Love u 
Talia


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Posted: 6 years ago
 Annie ,Dyuti , Moumita , Talia, Showrav 🤗🤗
Guys .. I am so so sorry .. I am utterly late in reverting to your comments . Will do so by eod .. Thanks a lot for all lovely words said.😛


Love
Lucky
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Posted: 6 years ago
Hey all 
Chapter 21 updated😛 . Do read and let me know your thoughts . Happy Reading

Love
Lucky