Thahaan OS: A sweet revenge

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Thahaan OS: A sweet revenge

I am getting bored .So I wrote this..

Part:1

After cold storage scene Bihaan comes from hospital.He is In his room and thapki helping him.He reluctantly pushes her away.But due to thapki being adamant he listens to her calmly.😳😳

When he is in his bed taking rest ,thapki comes out taking bath at morning hours..Her wet hair,her bare back with droplets of water and her lips making him crazy.He couldn't stop his stare.Thapki notices it after some time☺️..He breaks the stare and picks up the mobile and act as if he is doing some thing😆😆..

Then maa comes there and gives Bihaan soup and tells him to take rest fully..Bihaan happily agrees as this is the first time Maa taking care of him so much..Two days passed by and Bihaan is now fully alright.He came to his normal mode..Bihaan watches Shradhha bringing some stuff so secretly from store room.He notices it and follows her..Shradha goes to her room and opens that box which contains a woollen belt which shows tummy..Bihaan watches it slowly from the door and gets shocked.So she is faking her pregnancy..So he thinks if he says that to thapki,she wont listen..So when Bihaan turns he sees thapki right there.Thapki asks What are doing here Bihaan'.Bihaan thinks to try saying thapki and drags her into the room..Thapki I hate you but I love my family.That's why I want your help as Shradha is faking her pregnancy.Bihaan not once again,Thapki exclaims..Thapki support me once I will show you the proof..So thapki finally says okay..So they make a plan,they sent Shradha to mandhir with dadi and ma so that they can check her room..So Bihaan and thapki finally searches in her room and get that baby bump cloth..Thapki apologizes to Bihaan as she didn't trust him.

So at night time they both sit in the garden and think how they can expose Shradha .Bihaan, we should do something fastly otherwise Shradha will continue to cheat everyone,Thapki says..Bihaan says yes we should expose her infront of the whole family..Then thapki sees cockroach and suddenly shouts and runs here and there..Bihaan c-c-cockroack,Bihaan coackroach.Thapki comes and hugs Bihaan tightly like a small kid..Bihaan sees that the coackroach runs away..Thapki's sweet smell and aroma,her soft skin touching his chest making him restless..He keeps his hand around her bare waist ☺️☺️and thapki feels like a 1200 volts current passed through her😆.Thapki slowly comes to Bihaan neck and some unknown desires passing throught her..Bihaan,comes back to reality and pushes away thapki😡..Thapki also tries to understand what happened just now😕..Bihaan gives a irritated face and goes away from there😲.

Early morning according to thapki and Bihaan's plan they keep a cctv camera fitted in Shradha's room.Finally they get the tape which says that Shradha is faking her pregnancy be keeping that artificial baby bump..Thapki and Bihaan go to the hospital to meet their family doctor.Bihaan shows the doctor some Bihaan giri ,and threatens doctor then he finally confesses that Shradha bribed him..Thapki and Bihaan come home and says Shradha's truth to everyone.Every get shocked seeing the video..Shradha again starts her drama ,how could you do this bihaan and thapki,you have created a fake video..Then Oh then what about this doctor ..Doctor comes in and apologies to everyone and says Shradha truth and leaves..⭐️

Vasu,Bauji,dadi maa,dhruv and everyone stand there like a statues..So finally SHradha's truth is out..Vasu says how can you do this Shradha..Shradha cries..Vasu brings her suitcase and throws her out..Never ever again show your face to dhruv or this family..Dhruv is shocked.Vasu comes to console dhruv..Dhruv leaves from there.Every one goes away..

Next day Vasu goes to dhruv room and there she sees him weeping infront of mirror cursing himself..Vasu couldn't see her son like this..

Vasu calls Bihaan and says Bihaan you are my only son who I am proud of always😲😆(Ullu banaya bada maza aya).Can you do one last favour for your mother..Bihaan after seeing tears in maa's eyes,comes down to his knees.Please say maa I can do anything for you..It is my promise..Vasu says then divorce thapki and help her and dhruv to come close😡😡😡..Bihaan becomes shocked..Yes Bihaan I have seen tension between you and thapki always because you don't love each other..Bihaan first love lasts forever..I know very well that thapki loves dhruv even now..That's why she helped in Shradha's truth to come out..Bihaan,you don't love thapki right,then there is no point you both staying together.Bihaan still in shock and unable to understand anything..


I will update part 2 soon..Please give genuine replies.Thank u..😛

Part 2 &3 -Page no:2

Part 4: Page no:4

Edited by tabi9 - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was really good! Please update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really nice!! Do update soon!! Keepi it up!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice one. Please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start..my poor Bihaan though! Do continue. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good work Tabi...update the nest part ASAP...😃 I want to know what happens...I hope Vasu gets a good lecture from MA...or Bihaan (Very unlikely)...
Also...pls it is a request...Bring out Vasu's truth in front of the family..& write a DS-Vasu confrontation scene if u can...pls...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is upcoming Vasu for sure😡
Really good! Plz update soon!
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Part 2:

Bihaan comes out of trance and listens ma..Bihaan,Dhruv is half dead.Please help him and thapki unite.I want thapki to my dhruv who loves me and family very much unlike SHradha..Dhruv should get a girl like thapki who is loving and caring..You can only do that Bihaan..Please Bihaan ,help my dhruv and give his happiness.

Bihaan leaves maa room and walks to his room and darmiyaan plays.Bihaan thinks of all the memories spent with thapki..He gets teary eyed..He goes to his room and sits on sofa..He sees thapki..Thapki sleeping like a small kid ..He thinks how shradha told about thapki truth..Bihaan thought why did she cheated me so easily because she has no feelings for me..Yes ma said right ,she doesn't forget her first loves..Bihaan wipes his tears and make a promise to ma that he will unite thapki and dhruv ..

Next morning Bihaan wakes up and doesn't see thapki around..Thapki just comes in and says Bihaan you haven't slept whole night right,that's why you are sleeping till now.It is 12 pm now in afternoon..Bihaan smiles and says that I thought about you the whole night and decided that I forgive u,Bihaan says calmly..Thapki smile.What really,Bihaan..? Yes Thapki..Thapki feels very happy and hugs him..Bihaan startled by thapki's behaviour..He gets his hand to hug her and stops in the middle re-collecting ma's words.Bihaan says slowly Thapki.Thapki comes out of the hug..Thank you so much Bihaan.I am in very much need of you and I can't stay without you..Thapki stops and Bihaan sees thapki in a shock..Thapki says I mean that I can't stay without you as you are my best friend Bihaan.Thapki goes away from there...

Bihaan goes to dhruv and says dhruv, I know you still love thapki..Ma also wants you and thapki together.Then dhruv says Bihaan but you..Bihaan stops dhruv and says I don't love thapki,I only respect her..But you said thapki has forgiven you and you both moved on..No Dhruv I just said thapki forgived me but we never see each other in that way.We are always good friends..Dhruv,go and pour out your heart to thapki..Dhruv becomes very happy and hugs Bihaan..Bihaan cries silently after dhruv hugs..Dhruv breaks the hug and says but family..Bihaan don't think of family,I will take care of them.

Bihaan goes to the living room,where everyone is chit chatting..He goes and says Bauji ,I want to talk to you about something.Bauji says,yes Bihaan.What happened?Bauji,I have decided to divorce thapki .All become shocked and stand but there is only 2 who are happy Dhruv and maa..Bauji, Its high time we think of thapki. I have ruined thapki's life by marrying her..I have snatched her love.Dadi maa says but bihaan..Please dadi maa, if you want thapki's happy face again,we need to get her married her to dhruv..All become shell shocked again..I know this worls wont accept this but bauji what if thapki's happiness lies in it.Bauji,dhruv and thapki love each other..Due to my stupidity I have separated them but now bauji,I want them to do some good to remove my sins..Please bauji..Though everyone is not happy,they have given consent as bihaan convinced them that thapki happiness is in it.

Thapki goes out to bring some vegetables while all this happens.She returns and then suddenly everyone says surprise..All are very happy though there is some thing in every one which wants them to see bihaan and thapki together except dhruv and vasu.Maa goes near thapki.Preeti takes vegetables from thapki's hand..Maa hugs thapki..Thapki shocked asks what is this? Maa says Thapki ,We are trying to give your happiness once again to you, a smile in your face which is lost since you married Bihaan..Dhruv comes near thapki and says thapki,I know you will feel that it is not right..But thapki I love you,I love you so much,Dhruv says with tears in his eyes.Thapki shell shocked..Maa says thapki I Know that you too love dhruv that's y you haven't moved forward in life with Bihaan..Bihaan silently watches all this from upstairs full of tears and pain in his heart.His heart very upset,sad as he is giving his life to some body else..Bihaan became composed and came downstairs..He comes near to thapki..Thapki,I am really sorry for what I have done to you till now.I have ruined your life,I have always gave you nothing but sadness..Thapki,he stops and gulps says "MARRY DHRUV".Thapki eyes full of tears and she couldn't utter a single word.Bauji and dadimaa says thapki don't think of world,listen to your heart..Thapki full of tears and pain runs away to her room..Bihaan says dhruv ,please give her some time.She is as sensitive as a glass..She will accept you again for sure as she loves you..Dhruv says I understand Bihaan..

End of part 2..

Part 3 continues.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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😭😭😭
Next part pls...
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Part 3:

Bihaan goes to tabela and sit there with gulaabo and ram pyaari..He cries out louder hugging gulabo..Gulabo ,I love thapki..I love thapki so much..I cant live without her..Judaii song plays. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4XJ6VlD4WDE

Bihaan gets memories his coming to the house first with thapki..Thapki and his tashan..He cries out louder..There thapki in her room remembering Bihaan and his memories..Thapki and Bihaan nazdeekiyan dance..Valentine party dance..Bihaan giving him pat during valentine dance..Then there quick sand scene in rain..In tabela Bihaan is crying and thapki crying in her room..Then there new year scene ,,fevicol scene..Bihaan touches thapki's side bed in tabela and her thapki goes to sofa and touches it..

Ma comes to thapki to call her for dinner..Thapki ,I know it's really hard for you to do this but you need to do this..You need to think of your happiness..You have thought of a life with dhruv before marriage.Now you got a chance and you can start your new life again with dhruv..I know it's because of me that you separated from dhruv..Maa says I have bought you divorce papers..I know before also I have given them to you but then I asked you this on the cost of Bihaan's life..But now I want you to do this without any bindings.I want you to divorce Bihaan whole heartedly..While Vasu says all this Bihaan hears their conversation..He breaks down,his heart broke into pieces..He has pain in his whole body..Ma did this for me..His tears are rolling out.Thapki sees Bihaan and is in a shock.He goes away from there..Maa says thapki to come for dinner..Thapki says Maa please I will eat later..Maa says okay I will keep food for you in fridge.You eat whenever you want..Maa leaves..

Thapki searches for Bihaan..Bihaan where are you?Then she hears car engine voice.She runs to the balcony and sees Bihaan going away..She runs and finds a auto.She said bhaiyya,Please follow that car..Bihaan goes to a lonely place where there is a beautiful church full of lights ,beautiful cross.He enters the church..He remembers his child hood where he used to hide at the corner of the church ,the father comes and says .My son,what do you want?I am hungry.Can you give me some food..Father feeds him food and asks who are you? He says I am an orphan.Bihaan asks Father Why my parents left me?? Father seeing the plight of Bihaan ,hugs him and says you know god loves you so much .God has given your parents to some one who is in need just like you..Dont worry god will give you parents again my son.Bihaan remembers father's word.

He goes to the front of the church and kneels down..Why god?Why? Don't you love me?Why no one loves me??He sobs ..He pour out his heart infront of god..Why my parents don't love me?Why maa don't love me?Why thapki don't love me?Am I that bad? Bihaan cries and there is so much pain In his heart..God ,no one loves me in this world..Thapki seeing all this from far away cries...Thapki comes near to him,Bihaan.Bihaan startled.Thapki ,you are here how??Please go away.I want to stay alone for some time says Bihaan..Thapki comes very close to him,She cups his face with her hands..Bihaan,who said that no one loves you?? He is startled by her question..Bihaan I..I..I Love you.I love you bihaan more than anything in this world.She shouts .Bihaan is in shock..Bihaan,I don't love dhruv sir now,he is my past..Bihaan,dhruv sir teached me how to love.But you teached what is love??Dhruv sir was never in my heart. I am not saying this to pacify you.I am saying this from my heart.Bihaan ,you know after my father,if anyone matters to me is you..Bihaan you are my love.I don't know when this love started.But when you leave my hand,my heart craves to hold your hand again.Bihaan,I want to fight with you,laugh with you,cry with you forever.I cant imagine my life without you,without your smile,without your words..I love you Bihaan .But I am deeply hurt that you never understood my feelings.Thapki runs away out of the church..

Bihaan comes out of the trance..What?What thapki really came here and she said that she loves me?Bihaan wipes his tears out of joy..He kneels down and prays..Thank you god,you are best..You have given me my love..He gives hand wala kiss to god with so much excitement.He runs towards thapki..

The church is located in a beautiful place,full of trees and beautiful lighting and a beautiful cross over the church as it is near a valley..Thapki stands near the valley and sees the beautiful scenary..Bihaan comes there with so much joy..He comes there running and hugs thapki from back..Thapki was beautifully dressed in a navi blue sarree with great art work and Bihaan in a black jacket and a white transparent shirt..

Part 4 continues..

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