Thahaan OS: A sweet revenge - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Excellent work.my eyes r filled with tears.update soon.eager to read the nxt.
Edited by rtms - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-4

Bihaan is very happy and comes out removing his jacket and throwing it up..He hugs her so tightly from back out of excitement..His touch sent voltages into thapki..She blushes.She entirely keeps Bihaan as support for her back.They both see lift their eyes and see the moon..A beautiful moon..Thapki Bihaan whispers..Thapki says ummm..I love you too thapki so much..Bihaan,then why did you send me to dhruv,you don't love me .She says and come out of his embrace and move away from him and pouts..Bihaan comes Oh chuk chuk gaadi..Thapki eyes is full of tears.After so many days he said chuk chuk gaadi,his heart filled with love for Bihaan.He comes infront of her and sees tears In her eyes.He slowly comes near to her,so near that they can feel each other's breath..Bihaan cups her face and slowly ,gently gasps her tears with his lips of her left eye then he comes to her right eye and gasps her tears slowly..Thapki is feeling happiness deep in her soul..I am sorry thapki , I love you but always wanted to see you happy.Maa said that you love dhruv,so I assumed and you said lies to me on that day which made me angry.Thapki closes his lips with his hand,please Bihaan never ever remind me of that day where I lost my love,my happiness ie you Bihaan..Bihaan ,it is important for me to know about my marriage truth to accept you.I don't want our relation ship start with a lie.So I wanted to know the truth.So I lied u and u went away from me.

Then I realised what u are to me.Your smile, your words.I missed every feeling of your's so badly in these days.That friendship,that support,that love I want it again, Bihaan.Please bihaan don't leave me alone anytime.I am nothing without you..My soul craves for you..My happiness lies in you..They hug each other.I am sorry thapki..I am really really sorry..You know I am moti buddhi(Less brains)..Thapki teasingly says but I love this moti buddhi wala Bihaan.They laugh from the heart after so many days..Then rain starts..Thapki tries to go to the church to hide from rain.But bihaan stops her...She brings her closer,so closer and touches her bare waist,..They become wet..Thapki navi blue sarree is stucking to her skin and Bihaan's bare body is showing in his white t-shirt.Thapki says Bihaan let's go to inside.It is raining heavily.Let it be I want this time to stuck at this place always with you thapki..He slowly rubs her waist and move his hand up to his dori..Thapki feels shy..He slowly bend his head and moves towards her lips..Thapki closes her eyes as if something epic is going to happen in her life ie her first ever kiss..Bihaan sees her lips mesmerizingly..Bihaan kisses her like so wild that he is craving for this for so long😆😆...Thapki brushes his hair while he kisses her passionately..Bihaan doesn't want thapki to leave him..But he is running out of breath.So he finally breaks the kiss..He keeps his hands on thapki's cheek and thapki too keeps her hands on bihaan cheek..They are now enjoying each other's breath..Bihaan sees thapki's lips swollen and blood woozing out..He gently kisses her once again but this time decently.He says Sorry thapki,your lips..Thapki stops him and catches his collar and pulls him towards her.SHe kisses him wildly just as he did.She bits his lips..They break their kiss.So I have taken my revenge..She blushes and winks.They laugh out louder..

They go to church and kneel down.Thapki says thank you god for giving me Bihaan back. Please help us to be together f"f---f"..As she is unable to do it,Bihaan pats her back,thapki says forever..Bihaan smiles.

They go home and all the way they are thinking how to face dhruv..As they come inside dhruv sitting on the sofa..Bihaan and thapki goes near dhruv.Dhruv ,what happened ? You dint sleep.It is already mid night..Dhruv hugs bihaan and says I am sorry Bihaan.I have known the truth of thapki and my marriage..Bihaan also cries..Thapki comes forward and tries to say that she loves Bihaan..Dhruv stops her.Thapki,no need to say anything..I understood from your eyes that you don't love me any longer and you love Bihaan..I am sorry thapki,I have read your dairy. When you ran behind Bihaan,I have seen love for him and thought of reading your dairy where you write all your emotions.I am sorry for that.Thapki says It's okay sir.Sir,I want to say you something..I thought you were part of my life and I can't live without you then.But bihaan is not part of my life but he is my life .He taught me what is love and showed me the true meaning of love.I am really sorry dhruv sir.Dhruv said don't be sorry thapki..My mom did bad with Bihaan,that punishment I got it on behalf of her.I am fine now.You both go and sleep dhruv said with a consent of relief.

Next morning all wake up.Dhruv says everything about last night.All feel happy..Preeti and Suman teasingly says thapki and bihaan dint come till now.What they might be doing till now? Just then thapki and bihaan arrives..Thapki your eyes are so red.Haven't you slept the whole night? Asks Suman teasingly.Thapki blushes..Vasu apologizes infront of the whole family.I became blind infront of my son's love.I am sorry Bihaan and thapki.But now Bihaan you are also my son and I will do everything to make you happy.Every one consoles Vasu.Bihaan hugs vasu..All smiles all over..Then the courier person comes..Mam these are the tickets you have asked for ,courier boy said to Vasu..Vasu takes it and gives it to Bihaan and thapki..Bihaan exclaims ma what is this?These are two tickets to Paris that I booked for your honeymoon..Preeti and Suman teasingly says Ohhh..Thapki blushes and runs away from there.Bihaan too blushes and says there is no need of this ma..Suman and prreeti says devarji,le lijiye na ..Aapke aanke kuch bata rah hai aur aapke baate kuch aur and laughs.Every one laughs out louder.Dhruv sees all this and smiles.

--------------------------THE END (A NEW BEGINNING FOR THAHAAN)-------------------------------

Edited by tabi9 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Ha all is well that ends well.thahaan for ever.confession of thahaan in church was a brilliant idea.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Awww...😳
So cute...It was awesome...fantabulous...Perfect Thahaan ending...or should I say a new beginning...😉

Great work there Tabi...I love how DS was sooo considerate...

Although I had hoped that Vasu's truth would be out in a dramatic way, & wanted a DS-Vasu convo...but I can hardly bother about all that...

As long as Thahaan are happy...I am happy too...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
O'some!! And they are coming to Paris for honeymoon!!
I loved that pat from Bihaan!! meant so much at the moment!! Loved it Tabi!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
That was very nice...
Vasu vasu vasu... Kab badlegi yh aurat

Update soon

N pm me too
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Omg... As the index wasn't updated...
I didn't saw that its already updated

I had Goosebumps... When the church scene you wrote...
Lovely
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Oh nice, I love it uasap. And add thahaan part more
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
its PERFECT TABZ!! 😃
i just loved the concept !! 👍🏼👏
please continue writing more i love it !!! 🤗❤️

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