Raman OS | Ek Aur Saal | COMPLETED - Page 4

Originally posted by: nitii

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Originally posted by: anisha960

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its just beautiful though an emotional one
u very nicely portrayed what raman has gone through n he is regretting what he said years ago
he wants her madarasan to be near her to share their baby loss
it was just too gud
I cried reading this
he is devastated n living a soulless life
just loved it

Originally posted by: sririt

So beautifully written. So painful POV from Raman's heart

Originally posted by: Mdwst

Prab .. Girl I commend you for giving another brilliant write up on a single scene his drunken state scene... But the beauty that added the depth to this is you turned It inti a death anniversary day. Full of emotions, Ramans pov ... Superb .. His pain , hurt, longing to have a one last chance to see her .. Girl I teared up.
I've read atleast 3-4 Ts/ ss/ os today that made me tear up... Am emotional day for me, thank you for writing this .. Amazing talent .

Originally posted by: akriti154

really a beautiful one it is
no words to explain hw the deep emotions of raman have been portrayed by you wonderfully
thankyou 4 writing this
n d pm of course😊

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very well written...

Originally posted by: sweet.Aman

amazingly written

emotional part 

well done dear👏

Originally posted by: yashivid

Hey prabh

It was a beautifully penned OS full of emotions.

U described Raman's state of mind so beautifully. The kind of turmoil he is going through because of the bitter words that he spewed like venom on that dreaded night...ahhh it was so realistic I cud feel his pain.

He is going through hell for the past seven years after spitting venom in the spur of the moment.

The frustration that he can't undo his deeds is killing him.

Ishita beared the whole  worlds taunt but the same thing coming from the love of her life broke the strong woman in her which was s true in real life as well.

I know the emotions of the characters in the show are no longer the same but I just wish that when they show their confrontation after seven years they recreate the magic of old ishra to some extent at least. I know it's waste of time expecting such sensibilities from the CV but still if they cud do for the craze we have for ishra.

Thanks a lot prabh for this OS coz u always write something that we cannot expect from the show. U write with the write balance of emotions, realistic feelings and logic which the CVs don't do so thanks a ton.

Also I would like to request u write an OS or ts based on their confrontation after seven years after they show it on the show.

U know I have so much faith in the CVs that they will again show some kind of shit in the confrontation.

U writing something on that will give us the pleasure was reading what we want n we will not get that in show. So pls consider this request of mine.

Thanks for the PM