ArHi FF: In This Moment | T4 | *Note* - P 46 | 10/14

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RemovedEdited by BlueMystique - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
If anyone is sad, remember, after the last teaser Khushi/Lavanya/Choco almost lost their husbands, but that didn't really happen. So be happy and hopeful!

Also, be nice and comment to tell my lovely alpha here how you felt about the update! It doesn't take long, we all know. And she definitely more than deserves it for being so consistent! (Unlike some writers we know.. cough.. cough...). Don't be Sons of Shyam! Star
Edited by boyznaka - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Hi

We almost had a Happy Ending...

I should just stop right there. The horror... the helplessness...the longing... the pathos... The possibilities summed up in that one phrase! Just beautiful!

Tis better to have loved and lost,
Than never to have loved at all...

I dont know if I agree with the poet... If you haven't loved at all you dont know what you are missing... but to have loved and lost... the finality of that is a horror beyond imagination. How is one supposed to function without hope? I am rambling... Love the depth of emotion that we can see in your Arnav, Blue.

Now a question about the timeline... Is this before his visit to her hostel? Or is he trying to get her address in Mumbai?

Love and regards,
Sam

P.S. New character in the teaser... Throwing up my hands in surrender!

P.P.S. Don't worry about the length of updates, Blue. I appreciate the regularity of them, coz at least for me, it maintains the flow of the story. One last question... How many elves do you have working for you?
Edited by scrapbooker - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
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Many congratulations on the new thread, my dearest Ridz.

Thank you for this lovely story. You've taken us "to the edge of doom" with your twists and pulled us back, so my faith "alters not with his brief hours and weeks".

His letter to his Jalebi in this update was incredibly moving. You've written it so beautifully. How one simple word can fill the canvas with such deep regret for a life not lived.

Thought of this song for A ... 

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4PdAmEMtpEU[/YOUTUBE]


Edited by Arshi67 - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
brilliant update...very interesting..Thumbs UpEdited by MysticRiver - 5 years ago
Posted: 5 years ago
Res


Kitne paas hain par phir bhi kitne door
If only he had seen her, just a glimpse even
Will you be posting something from khushi's POV, would like to know her side of the story also
I'm ok with these weekly but frequent updates
Thanks for the pm Edited by KtotheM - 5 years ago

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