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Anu567 @Anu567 Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

And I am almost in tears...again! Ridz this is so much naainsafee...I am quite broken, that sad letter to jalebi. Oh, when will the clouds disappear and the sun decide to shine bright on their love?! What could be worse than this deep yearning for a loved one that you are not sure you will ever see again! Distressed! Ridz, can you put us out of this misery...puhleez?! 😭

Best,

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albmum14 @albmum14 Senior Member Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

Many many congratulations on a new thread Ridz!

Reading the chapter, reminded me of a quote from "To the lighhouse" by Virginia Woolf:

"To want and not to have, sent all up his body a hardness, a hollowness, a strain. And then to want and not to have- to want and want- how that wrung the heart, and wrung it again and again!" (paraphrased)

What grief and sorrow he carries...

Why did that letter sound like a surrender?

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meeyaa @meeyaa Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

How delicate both are right now...

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Heavens_Flower @Heavens_Flower IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

Hearty congratulations on the new threat Ridz!!! You and ITM sure deserve it!

Almost to Always!

If almost is the saddest word

Then Always is the happiest word

In this moment given the right time

Almost will change into Always!

He almost saw her

He will always have her

In this moment reaches the right time

Almost will change into Always!

He almost held her

He will always hold her

In this moment for every moment of time

Almost will change into Always!

He almost knew her name

He had always known all the same

In this moment where it matters

Almost will change into Always!

They almost had a happy ending

They always were never ending

In this moment where there is no ending

Almost will change into Always!

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jeetega @jeetega Senior Member

Posted: 7 years ago

That update was filled with pure heartbreak. My heart goes out to Arnav. Can't imagine Khushi's pov after the blast.

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just4this @just4this Goldie

Posted: 7 years ago

Hello Blue

Oh, Arnav struggled so much to get the info of khushi, poor boy.

Some day we might come to know about khushi's turmoil, to know about her A.

But Blue, one thing I learnt from this story, IN THIS MOMENT is to live in this moment,

Loving the story

Thank u

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albmum14 @albmum14 Senior Member Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

Re Re, such a beautiful poem. I have missed your poems, especially the ones in ITM.

If your "Almost to Always" is from Arnav's POV, this one below is from Jalebi:

"It is here"

(for A)

What sound was that?

I turn away, into the shaking room.

What was that sound that came in on the dark?
What is this maze of light it leaves us in?
What is this stance we take, To turn away and then turn back?
What did we hear?
It was the breath we took when we first, almost met.

Listen. It is here.

by Harold Pinter

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Heavens_Flower @Heavens_Flower IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by albmum14

Re Re, such a beautiful poem. I have missed your poems, especially the ones in ITM.

If your "Almost to Always" is from Arnav's POV, this one below is from Jalebi:

"It is here"

(for A)

What sound was that?

I turn away, into the shaking room.

What was that sound that came in on the dark?
What is this maze of light it leaves us in?
What is this stance we take, To turn away and then turn back?
What did we hear?
It was the breath we took when we first, almost met.

Listen. It is here.

by Harold Pinter

What an absolute gem! So prefect a fit for Jalebi's POV... Almost as if it was written for ITM...

"It was the breath we took when we first, almost met"... Gosh, I am gonna dream about this line for the next week or so...

BlueMystique @BlueMystique IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

Teaser: Letter 376

"It's deep but not deep enough..."

*****

How about that for a teaser? 😉

The update will be posted on Sunday, May 1st, around 9PM EST. Hope to see you all there!

Love,
Ridz

Edited by BlueMystique - 7 years ago

M @boyznaka IF-Rockerz

Posted: 7 years ago

This teaser is teaser-y but not teaser-y enough.

Kidding.

Edited by boyznaka - 7 years ago

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