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javeria

@Javeria3991

IF-Rockerz

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

awesome update

Armav love her, it's so sad that Arnav and Khushi are so far yet so near.

The letter was very emotional. I love the way you depicted Arnav love and longing for Khushi using the word Almost. 👏

Can't wait to read more.

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484026

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

With every passing update the heaviness in my heart only grows. With every upcoming update all I expect to see is one glimpse of hope, out if this heartwrenching melancholy. This must be your best work so far. You seem to have given everything you have in your heart into this story.

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533840

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

simply superb

loved it-

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955548

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

Hiya Blue..

Thank You...

👏Yes I applaud You...

Almost !!!!!!! Hope...

2 words with great depth...

'Jalebie You are Arnav's almost finished story'...💔

'Story He had to shelve...

Sentences left in mid-stream...

As the thoughts are fragmented...

Almost tried to paint a picture...

Lead snapped...

Pantomime failed to take the stage...

Curtains cord curtailed...

Blue lighting flash in the sky...

Yet void of rain & thunder...

Almost completed the journey on that fateful day...

Yet Jalebie You remain Arnav's unfinished tale...💔

As He was 6 minutes too late...

Yet Time will come knocking on his door...

Please let Him IN...

Mingling Hope & almost...

To seek You...

Forever every where...

As Arnav needs to finish His tale...

And that picture...

Stage that pantomime...

So please Jalebie throw a Life Line...

As He can put Almost to rest...

And Awaken Hope in His Chest...❤️

Just had to ramble a bit...

saffron's Rambings

❤️S...

PS:- Had a helping hand...in bits...

More laters...

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johngalt

@johngalt

Senior Member

Posted: 8 years ago

Congratulations on New Thread!!

Teaser ...who is married... bataya nahi...

Please continue at the pace you are comfortable...

Hum intezaaar karenge...uske milne ka...

(Just wondering, do we at any point of the story get to know of Khushi's POV, cause till now it is all about how Arnav was looking for her, but I guess giving Khushi's POV, would give away the plot maybe??)

Take care...

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bhavis

@bhavis

IF-Stunnerz

Posted: 8 years ago

congratulations 🥳

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873406

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

Please make both of them meet and tell about themselves

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meeyaa

@meeyaa

Senior Member

Posted: 8 years ago

Dear BlueMystique

Do you know what is the baddest word in Englsh? Additction.

Am addicted to the story. Am addicted to the writing.

Love

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Anna Thomas

@Annasabu

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

And I
am going to kill you,almost .

Aur intezaar nahi karte heum, samjhi.

pareshan karke pagal banne ka irada hei kya?
do nom ko milwane mein kya pareshani hei?
kuch tax dena hei kya?😡

dil karta hein kuwe mein gir jaon

Love

Anna
alias pagal

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

fab update.
feel bad for arnav on reading past flashbacks

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